v0.3 Alpha Test
The game is in alpha so it's being reviewed on that premise.
This review is more for the developer but can be of use to a player so I wrote it for both in mind.
Currently, the game's strong suite is it's art. But everything is very much in development.
Art
dev's artstyle is signature from what i've seen of his other games - that includes his signature scrappiness. idk if you'd want to polish/neaten the art or just leave it like this, either could work once there's enough art
3 character: all are progressing events, most with Landlady, 2 with purple alien, 1 with teacher
the game is currently a "run around to view short scenes". I'm not sure of the direction it will go in regards to if it would have stats or combat.
bug: can ride bike in school
Writing
currently nothing but an intro of MC.
Getting a writer to do the story part for you may be beneficial so you can stay focused on the art and game - there doesn't need to have some deep intricate plot but at least having story is better than having none
With more updates, time will tell how this shapes out. I like the stuff with the Landlady, there were no horrible bugs and everything else is just a work-in progress.
The game is in alpha so it's being reviewed on that premise.
This review is more for the developer but can be of use to a player so I wrote it for both in mind.
Currently, the game's strong suite is it's art. But everything is very much in development.
Art
dev's artstyle is signature from what i've seen of his other games - that includes his signature scrappiness. idk if you'd want to polish/neaten the art or just leave it like this, either could work once there's enough art
- drawings are good although i think it could neaten up so characters' facial features are more pronounced/detailed
- animation is good
- except for titfuck by teacher, more frame could solve this and remove the torso expansion effect
- some 3d objects like in bathroom would need the hand drawn style too
3 character: all are progressing events, most with Landlady, 2 with purple alien, 1 with teacher
- i like the ass lusting MC has for his Landlady and the progressing scenes for it - keep it going
- very nicely drawn booty, the way the cleft curves indicating how jammed together those cheeks are
- don't care for the other scenes with alien and teacher
- but the tits were also nicely drawn on teacher, gumdrop nips~
- missing art (via preview images on thread) = misleading game - did not encounter the cowgirl/riding scene
the game is currently a "run around to view short scenes". I'm not sure of the direction it will go in regards to if it would have stats or combat.
Navigation
- moving around the 2d/3d space is easy and with the running, bike and bike acceleration, there's no issue of wasted time
- game does the luxury of transporting you back home after a scene outside home
- all doors look the same in house made for exploring a nuisance
- note for players/testers:
- MC's door has a green carpet
- the time of day for each quest is shown on the left of the text
- note for players/testers:
- +1 for having a "no more content" notice once you've played through it all
UI and Sound
- 1+ for to-the-point QoL features
- rename relationship with Landlady on menu
- mouse hover hide icon to hide text
- no exit game button
- use of sound where present was good - hopefully some can be added for H scenes
currently nothing but an intro of MC.
Getting a writer to do the story part for you may be beneficial so you can stay focused on the art and game - there doesn't need to have some deep intricate plot but at least having story is better than having none
- English will need work
- some small things than can be fixed for now:
- quest info: "come to [Landlady]" > "come" should be "go"
- irrelevant close bracket < ) > at end of sentences should be removed
- some small things than can be fixed for now:
- there'll need to have unique dialogue for each repeat of event as you progress, instead of the same thing being said over and over
With more updates, time will tell how this shapes out. I like the stuff with the Landlady, there were no horrible bugs and everything else is just a work-in progress.
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