ooooohhhhh boy. Oooh boy. Okay. I normally would not write up anythign here, but I am hopeful that the creator might occasionally read these. I pray.
So. Text speed. Like Kimito and others you need a way to speed it up.
Bigger. For the love of god, what in the fuck is up with the combat?! Sooo many issues: can't always attack, can't aim, can't deal with more than one or two enemies at once, it looks bad, it feels bad, it is based on WASD which annoys me, it is horrifically steep a learning curve. It is Just horrible.
NTR points - these imply a slow descent. This was NOT a slow corruption. Less than two weeks and she was already a whore!
This program. It is fucking horrible. Switch to RPG Maker if you are still working on this game, and i hope you are because this is not a finished product.