I played only the beginning of this game ... everything was going well, until the first erotic scene. So, with absolutely zero tension built, the blue-haired girl (supposed friend) sucks the first dick she sees coming out of a hole.
Rachel: '' There's no way this is his dick ...! ''
Rachel: '' He can't see me back here so maybe ... ''
wtf? what is bad writing. It looks like it was written by a child. The models and gameplay are good and look promising, but the writing is horrible.
Is the whole game like this? I don't understand how this game is almost full stars.
Hey, I'm not affiliated with this game or anything but that scene is meant to be surprising.
The outbreak of zombies is triggered by some kind of hormone virus. It causes murderous behaviour and sexual desire in males and... well we haven't seen what exactly it does to women, but safe to assume that they want sex a lot.
For some reason the protagonist is immune, which is surprising (see the mayor's dialogue).
So in essence there's something in the air that makes people incredibly horny, it gets worse if they've gotten infected by a zombie. This is why it all goes so fast when the protagonist kisses someone, they're suddenly infected and need to have sex or take more infected fluid. (see the new Scene with Jessie and why she suddenly gets turned on by him after a kiss). So clearly, the protagonist is another type of 'zombie' that can infect but is not turned.
You need to discover this as the game progress, so the initial scenes are very weird to everyone.
So I agree the writing initially is a bit lackluster, the sister being one of the prime targets for bad writing. Do keep in mind though that this game was initally planned to be much shorter and thus needed to advance that much quicker. You also can't remove any sex or E-scenes from the game or people will riot and you've got some stilted dialogues initially.
That being said, this isn't an erotic novel. You don't slowly break down women and talk about their feelings over long periods of time. If that's what you're looking for, this won't be the game for you.
But it's an actual game though, with a plot besides the sex and gameplay that's actually somewhat challenging (it's not hard though). That's strangely rare.
Hope that helps?