Really tried to give it a chance because I liked the UI and there seemed to be a good amount of content with some quality porn stars, but it just turned into too much of a slog.
The introductory story is uninspired and lacks originality. This wouldn’t be such an issue if there wasn’t SO MUCH OF IT before you actually get to the “game”. I made it to around the point where it starts to give you actual ‘choices’ before I realized that they options were largely arbitrary and unintuitive. The game told me I was going to “fail my classes” after skipping one class lesson to attempt to find some entertainment. This was after roughly 30 minutes of introduction…
This combined with the fact that the author is clearly a non-native English speaker made it too jarring to continue. Normally I try not to hold that against someone, but it was hard not to when they insisted on waxing on painfully with unnatural dialogue. There’s porn level dialogue….and then there’s this.
There’s a chance that there’s something worthwhile in here, but it didn't prove to be worth finding out. If the creator was looking for feedback, my advice would be to find a decent native English writer to help tidy things up and cut the fat. Then people might stick around long enough to find out if your game is actually any good.
The introductory story is uninspired and lacks originality. This wouldn’t be such an issue if there wasn’t SO MUCH OF IT before you actually get to the “game”. I made it to around the point where it starts to give you actual ‘choices’ before I realized that they options were largely arbitrary and unintuitive. The game told me I was going to “fail my classes” after skipping one class lesson to attempt to find some entertainment. This was after roughly 30 minutes of introduction…
This combined with the fact that the author is clearly a non-native English speaker made it too jarring to continue. Normally I try not to hold that against someone, but it was hard not to when they insisted on waxing on painfully with unnatural dialogue. There’s porn level dialogue….and then there’s this.
There’s a chance that there’s something worthwhile in here, but it didn't prove to be worth finding out. If the creator was looking for feedback, my advice would be to find a decent native English writer to help tidy things up and cut the fat. Then people might stick around long enough to find out if your game is actually any good.