VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[Kpyna]

Thanks, that's what i needed. I think my mistake was going with them after the bar instead of Erynn. I'm only mildly interrested in Erynn, but if thats a big breakpoint, that's the way i'll go in the future. I though picking enough points with her to be friends instead of no interactions, loosing a few points on purpose by checking them all while not picking more than half the possible ones would be enough, but i will try the more starved points at the beginning since i know now friends requirements with her is pretty low.

See it in the way, that each opportunity to flirt, compliment, do something fun together makes you closer and hints girl that you're into her (like in IRL). Layla is attracted to MC from the beginning (read her inner thoughts). So, giving her what he wants to get is obvious way to get on her path. Her path is probably the most natural and easygoing in terms or conditions. Just don't mess with her sister and never team with Zach. While Erynn (love path) is the most complicated one, imo. She is kinda broken and need to be fixed. Alexis is somewhere between them.

That can be one way of seeing it. Yes, i am indeed much (much) older now, be with my experiences, it felt for me like she is acting more like 14-16, even including the MC if you believe he's similar. I understand also that they HAVE to all be 18 for Patreon. One thing also that feels funny to me, as a non-American (Canada) is that you can be 18 in highschool wihtout being a repeater. I always thought of high school as the kids school, while college for the 18+. Different systems i guess, so my perception is different.

Well, 18+ wall spoils plausibility in this area sometimes a bit, but at least dev wasn't shy to show us 16yo MC having some fun in the past. Erynn tells MC that she thinks Cara is 16 or looks like. MC is at his last months at high school, he still will be 18, when he will go to the college or university. In my country you can decide if you study 9 years at school and finish it there (usually being 16yo) and then go to something like "college" or you study 11 years at school (usually being 18yo) and then go to university. I don't know the differences between university and colleges in USA, and how it grades, so I can't argue or debate here.

The overall problem is that a lot of players expects a 18-19yo MC to act like he is 25-30yo one, most of the times. Same goes for the girls. The "first time", the inexperience and the things surrounding it, kind of "childish" behaviours and that boys/girls clumsy flirt attempts and playfullness are pictured properly so rare... Players demands the alpha-male that fucking half of the campus, acts like a robot, regret nothing and clever as Einstein. What a nonsense...

 

[xapican]

Thank you for the suggestion and criticism.

I should make a new tier RELATIVES - UNCONFIRMED and you're right I made a mistake with putting Elena in the track team. She should be on the Cheerleader Squad with Sienna and Jasmine.

You forgot to put Zane and the Redhaired girl from the restaurant, (which has a crush for Emily) for what the discusion was in the foregoing pages, they have a keyrole if you on Val path and want to help Erynn

 

[cxx]

any1 checked val's teeth lately?

 

[mnotwoke]

You forgot to put Zane and the Redhaired girl from the restaurant, (which has a crush for Emily) for what the discusion was in the foregoing pages, they have a keyrole if you on Val path and want to help Erynn

I don't have the jpegs of those two characters and others.

 

[xapican]

I don't have the jpegs of those two characters and others.

Of course they are not in the gallery,

Spoiler: Here Brooke and Zane

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[MrD812]

On most routes this making up happens completely off screen.


I'd love some teasing and most likely it has been going on since last night lol.





For Erynn specially it makes sense for her to learn of it, she lives right there... and she probably would want to hang out after the beach, she often does that.

With Val it can be brought on with trying to set up a morning run for the next days and the MC saying he can't.





Zane's involvement has been largely fan speculation.

Zane doesn't have to be a bad guy to be a rival, it may happen simply because we are competing for the same thing... The fact that he's ex-boyfriend of a love interest does make a friendship a little more difficult, specially on this specific path.
Maybe with time we can see eye to eye, or have some level of mutual respect.

But it's also possible that he holds some resentment towards Erynn for dumping him for another guy (that's how it looks like from his perspective).



We don't have much info on that night, we don't know if it happened at his house(back then he lived with his father and his sister, could be tough to work out), maybe it was a party on Ethan's... Maybe he was searching for a good place for it and trusted the wrong guy to "help him".
We haven't met Zane yet, but Brooke seems like one of the few characters that doesn't have unlimited money, living in a small house, sharing a room with his sister and perhaps struggling to rent out a room is not too farfetched imo.

Him selling the tape for some type of profit or filming it to brag about "deflowering" Erynn are all speculation which may or may not prove true.

Look, it's true i gave up on this title and Dev LONG ago But......
When did it change to Erynn dumping Zane?
Long Ago, it was Zane dumping Erynn.

Going to Prom with Ethan instead, did not bode well with Zane.
Who in their right mind wouldn't say "Fuck This Shit"?

 

[xapican]

MrD812 ; hey bud nice to read you again, I thought Zane Erynn was all a Ethan Manouver, to humilate Erynn

 

[LSC82]

Look, it's true i gave up on this title and Dev LONG ago But......
When did it change to Erynn dumping Zane?
Long Ago, it was Zane dumping Erynn.

Going to Prom with Ethan instead, did not bode well with Zane.
Who in their right mind wouldn't say "Fuck This Shit"?

Yeah, you are right now that i think about it... this thing goes for so long this shit is starting to get mixed in my brain lol.
I think she says like he didn't want anything with her anymore after she went to prom with Ethan.

And who can blame the guy? From his perspective his loving GF is looking to upgrade to the rich guy.

 

[Maviarab]

Yeah, you are right now that i think about it... this thing goes for so long this shit is starting to get mixed in my brain lol.
I think she says like he didn't want anything with her anymore after she went to prom with Ethan.

And who can blame the guy? From his perspective his loving GF is looking to upgrade to the rich guy.

Well...that's...one theory....

We still need to confirm whether he knew of Ethan's plan and whether or not he was a party to it....or was just an innocent victim as well. If he is completely absolved of any wrongdoing...Zane and MC teaming up to go after Ethan could be fun (as then Ethan also has a porn video, illegally taken that could ruin his life too).

 

[MrD812]

MrD812 ; hey bud nice to read you again, I thought Zane Erynn was all a Ethan Manouver, to humilate Erynn

Likewise indeed and may i suggest, thinking is over-rated!
Tend to go by what's actually written, effects efforts to comprehend more accurately.
Always more to focus on.

Yeah, you are right now that i think about it... this thing goes for so long this shit is starting to get mixed in my brain lol.
I think she says like he didn't want anything with her anymore after she went to prom with Ethan.

And who can blame the guy? From his perspective his loving GF is looking to upgrade to the rich guy.

Exactly, having sexually advanced with the woman of Your life....
AND yet, she takes Ethan of ALL people to Prom.. Instead?!?!

 

[LSC82]

Well...that's...one theory....

We still need to confirm whether he knew of Ethan's plan and whether or not he was a party to it....or was just an innocent victim as well. If he is completely absolved of any wrongdoing...Zane and MC teaming up to go after Ethan could be fun (as then Ethan also has a porn video, illegally taken that could ruin his life too).

Yeah, sure.
My post was on "currently available info" not including any theories that he may have teamed up with Ethan.

It will be an interesting reaction when he learns what truly transpired(assuming he doesn't know already).

Exactly, having sexually advanced with the woman of Your life....
AND yet, she takes Ethan of ALL people to Prom.. Instead?!?!

Absolutely, and one can assume she probably told Zane that she didn't like the guy... then choses to go with him to prom!!!!

It probably hits Zane like a big WTF????

 

[Maviarab]

My post was on "currently available info"

Absolutely, and one can assume she probably told Zane that she didn't like the guy... then choses to go with him to prom!!!!

It probably hits Zane like a big WTF????

Yet you're not working on currently available info are you.

We don't know if he was involved or not. So anything at this point is pure theory. So therefore, how can it him like a big whatever, again, he might have been in on it. You're making a lot of 'statements' assuming he is innocent. Given all the men in the area that we meet/know, that's a loose assumption at best.

 

[LSC82]

Yet you're not working on currently available info are you.

We don't know if he was involved or not. So anything at this point is pure theory. So therefore, how can it him like a big whatever, again, he might have been in on it. You're making a lot of 'statements' assuming he is innocent. Given all the men in the area that we meet/know, that's a loose assumption at best.

The current avaliable info are mainly Erynn's words, she doesn't say anything about suspecting that Zane was in on it, she just says they were done after she went with Ethan to prom... that is the currently available info.

Ethan also doesn't say anything that hints at teaming up and as of the last update still seems to resent Zane a bit.
Not proof, but it would be weird resenting the guy that helped you.

 

[Maviarab]

The current avaliable info are mainly Erynn's words, she doesn't say anything about suspecting that Zane was in on it, she just says they were done after she went with Ethan to prom... that is the currently available info.

Ethan also doesn't say anything that hints at teaming up and as of the last update still seems to resent Zane a bit.
Not proof, but it would be weird resenting the guy that helped you.

Again...lot of assumptions. Nothing weird about it at all, he hates anyone who is, was, will ever be close to her.

The fact is, as you mention, there is no information, no one mentions anything. Therefore, everything 'currently' (as you like to use currently available info) is theory, as there is no information either way.

Conversely, on my own logic and what is actually presented to us, name one decent guy in the VN (directly related to the story, so sorry, you can't name the bar owner)? I reserve judgement on Iris' father personally. Any others? Answers on the back of a postcard if you can.

Nyx hates men. The logic (from what we have seen, been shown and been told so far) is that Zane is not a good guy.

 

[MrD812]

Yeah, sure.
My post was on "currently available info" not including any theories that he may have teamed up with Ethan.

It will be an interesting reaction when he learns what truly transpired(assuming he doesn't know already).


Absolutely, and one can assume she probably told Zane that she didn't like the guy... then choses to go with him to prom!!!!

It probably hits Zane like a big WTF????

To be Brutally Clear:

Married/committed wife/girlfriend/husband/boyfriend/sister/brother/son/daughter conducts personal intimacy act's.
IE: passionately kissing, wet/dry humping, making out with an other with or without intent.
Doesn't have to be sex to be betrayal/unfaithful and genders won't matter.

Is well known grounds to dump that person faster then a hot potato.
Several marriages have ended for less reason.

 

[mnotwoke]

Of course they are not in the gallery,

Spoiler: Here Brooke and Zane

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Thank you for these.

 

[Antherak]

Did a Alexis path and id say it has its moments too, but damn, for someone ready to lie and cheat at the beginning to be with us, she sure is jealous and hyper strict with the MC even looking at other girls.

Also, for a Valeria path, can you only get that by being kinda deep with Alexis and having to dump her, or is there another way? And if so, how? I know that on Layla path, you cant get the photobooth with her. Only asking for information. Shes getting lower every time i play the game. She feels more and more like a hard to get ho. Always flirting with everyone to the point of saying she does it even when shes not that interested in a guy, and the worst sin of all, she said shed fuck Darryl, which she say she dont really like that way and doesnt really have fun with, before us, which she seemed to have fun and go along well in the bus ride.

I found the race mechanic and that most of the playthroughs make you a looser in the race event, as you need training with Layla to win or you finish 4th. Anyone else find that dissapointing? Trying to minmax the Layla number to be able to train with her, you need to be very deep with her, almost maxed out. Found it kinda lame its either Layla path or you loose 100%. How do you all cope with that? Hate loosing the race to that smug fucker.

SO yes, with different sides of the stories, im finding out that everyone is related.

-SO from the model and tattoos, John is definitely Erynns dad.
-SO, Zane is the surfer guy that buys you drinks with Nikki at the beach, and hes Brooke's brother.
-Ive noticed also that we see a sneak peek of Rachels dead body behind a dumpster where the Ethan interactions happen, you can even hear her phone buzz. Was she the one Ethan matched with Zach? Why would he have naked pics of her?
-I would assume santiago is Layla/Alexis dad as much as Andres is MC dad, like he came in after they were born?
-When will we get Elenas dad sob story that he left them with a ton of debts and ran away with *insert girl*
-Who the f will Zach be related too? I hope we dont see him again. All he does is being an asshole, and helping him doesnt even change any outcomes except turning most girls against you.

Is there some i dont know about yet?

Also pretty dissapointed that looking at the scenes with an unlocker, even though its not much, theres more scenes with Erynn than my Elena, which has a total of 0 lewds. And no, groping doesnt count.

 

[Malicre]

-SO from the model and tattoos, John is definitely Erynns dad.

Well that just made the Melissa route hella awkward.

 

[Dessolos]

lol seems im like the only one around that doesn't see the appeal or have any interest in Melissa . I will play her path for content and chaos / drama but that's it.

 

[Malicre]

lol seems im like the only one around that doesn't see the appeal or have any interest in Melissa . I will play her path for content and chaos / drama but that's it.

Imagine the family dinners if John is dating Emily and you're dating Melissa, then you add in Erynn/Iris. Oh boy......