It hurts me to give it a 3, one of my favorite VNs, but after a hiatus of almost 9 months, episode 9 falls short, the MC still does not evolve almost nothing, after 9 chapters, Emily each episode that passes, it becomes more childish, the fact that this VN does not give you another romantic option, has always disappointed me.
I will organize my ideas and try to explain in several points:
Pro:
- The best renders I've seen, the level of detail, design, lighting, poses, etc, 10/10.
-The story, despite having very little eroticism, is very pleasant to read, the dialogues feel real, the humor is perfectly integrated and the characters have that, personality.
-The use of Ren'py is perfect, nothing out of this world, but he uses it in a very clever way.
-I love the girls of the house, and Luis is a well developed character.
I would love to give more pros, but with what has been mentioned, I think I will cover a good part of it.
Cons:
-The lack of decision making, this VN almost touches the level of kinetic, basically your decisions are aesthetic, they don't impact, they don't change almost anything, and nothing at the relevant level of the story.
-If you don't like Emily at all, you're screwed, she's basically the only love relationship you're going to have for at least these past 9 episodes.
- You will see many beautiful women in the game, but you will never be able to do anything to them, when I talk about beautiful women, I talk about designs like Ashley's sister, the nurses in the club or the woman in the tattoo shop, etc.
-I really liked Emily at the beginning of the VN, despite her extremely childish personality, I'm sorry to say that with the passing of the chapters all that only gets worse, this would not be a problem, if the game gave me the opportunity to have a romantic relationship with another character in the story, but not is the case.
-The consistency, from chapter 8 to 9, almost 9 months passed, and honestly it was not worth the wait, visually it is still wonderful, it still has all the quality it always has, but the chapter is short, and full of meaningless fillers, zero development in the relationship between the characters, and as always an eternal and annoying blueballing.
- Last, this is more personal, please AZ, let the character fuck, let him make decisions, let him do what he wants, and then he assumes the consequences of his actions, really, I'm tired of seeing such well-done models and sexy, and the MC does not do shit, It can't be that the only time I'm going to fuck, it's going to be with Emily in the final of the VN, it would be extremely crappy.
I love your work, you are an inspiration for my future project, I hope to get close to your visual level, but that does not exempt me from being able to criticize so many things that hurt your wonderful work, please be consistent in the deliveries of the episodes, and let the characters develop, cut all the filler and focus on the main story, is my very very humble advice, greetings.
Sorry for my "engrish"
Edit: 05/28/2023, ""Episode 10"", 15 months be the "developer" late to give an update, 15 months, earned more than 2500 dollars a month from his patreons, is becoming more cynical, lazy, simply the developer, who once started with enthusiasm and was creating quality content every 4 months, is now just a parasite that lives on his patreons without even trying, a complete disappointment, his story was one of my favorites, now I simply don't care, half a chapter every year and a half, it's a joke, I hope the business ends soon, he doesn't deserve the money that people are giving him.