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Small update on the next update, just posted the edited version of the
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on my Patreon. As written in the post, I have also finished the writing for the second scene, and I'm making good progress on the third scene. I estimate to be done with about 45% of the work for the next full update.
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Not updates, scenes, but yes I am still working on it when I am able to. The next scene should be posted very soon since it's nearly done. I guess I'll give a general update on the progress too while I'm at it.
The writing of the final scene of the next update is nearly complete too (though I am unhappy with some parts of it, and have some ideas on how to change things, so that needs to be done still), then it needs to be edited, then I need to go back to the other scenes for the update and make some additions/changes I had planned.
Not sure how long it will take, but save to to say I've made decent progress since the last progress update here, I estimate I'm about 80% done with it. I release everything for free on my Patreon so if you ever want to see if there has been news you can check there (or even follow me for notifcations ^^). I check this thread as well, though.
The writing of the final scene of the next update is nearly complete too (though I am unhappy with some parts of it, and have some ideas on how to change things, so that needs to be done still), then it needs to be edited, then I need to go back to the other scenes for the update and make some additions/changes I had planned.
Not sure how long it will take, but save to to say I've made decent progress since the last progress update here, I estimate I'm about 80% done with it. I release everything for free on my Patreon so if you ever want to see if there has been news you can check there (or even follow me for notifcations ^^). I check this thread as well, though.
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Hey! So I noticed something.... I was thinking about an interaction that doesn't break immersion in the story just seems a bit glossed over.
Other than that I understand this is only a hobby for you, which I greatly appreciate you taking your time to create something and the writing is good as well
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Other than that I understand this is only a hobby for you, which I greatly appreciate you taking your time to create something and the writing is good as well
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I've posted the next scene on my
If I did mention that they get into the same swimsuits, then I'll have to go back and fix that. In any case, thanks for the keen eye, it's honestly not something I had really thought much about until now.
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, a bit later than I had intended, the editing took a while longer than I had thought (more on that in the devblog).I don't remember how exactly this scene plays out in detail, but is it ever explicitly mentioned you get into the SAME swimgear when showering? Because speaking from personal experience, getting into a (even slightly) wet swimsuit feels gross and awful, so in my mind, they'd just use a spare set of swimsuits for the shower scene, and this problem would naturally be averted.
If I did mention that they get into the same swimsuits, then I'll have to go back and fix that. In any case, thanks for the keen eye, it's honestly not something I had really thought much about until now.
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Just finished reading what is there so far and I really like it, honestly. Took me about an hour to get through it (I'm a fast reader) and I'm excited to see more in the coming months! I saw a couple of posts regarding concerns that the sex scenes were too long, but personally I felt like they were a perfect length.
I also think all the extra stuff (like how to do math, how to cook, etc) were good! With the cooking specifically, I at least now have reference for how to make a basic risotto, so I can't complain about having learned something new.
Keep up the good work, and take as much time as you need! I'd rather you take your time and continue giving us quality content, even if we have to wait a little bit.
I also think all the extra stuff (like how to do math, how to cook, etc) were good! With the cooking specifically, I at least now have reference for how to make a basic risotto, so I can't complain about having learned something new.
Keep up the good work, and take as much time as you need! I'd rather you take your time and continue giving us quality content, even if we have to wait a little bit.
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For the renders, you could possibly do the renders using AI if you are keeping them 2D. There are a lot of different AI out there that can be fed picture in a style you like and that have similar poses/etc and then used. I'm not sure how consistent they are though. They might even work for 3D images, though I am not certain about that as I haven't looked too much into it. Mage.space is one that allow for pr0n to be rendered as most other ones don't. Some allow you to have it on your own machine and make your own "AI" in that you feed the pictures you want into it and the styles and it learns from that. Anyway, please keep it up! Editing is the worst for sure. Maybe reach out to the community if you want/need help.
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If NovelAI is used, it should be fine. Those guys actually seem accepting of Loli content.
Heck, I'm honestly convinced a few of the showrunners for NovelAI are Lolicons themselves, given what some of the arguments they have against AIDungeon are and how they immediately jumped at anime art for their AI Art project.
And how insistent on user security their system is. As if their personal lives depended on that level of security.
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You can use SD for loli, just keep it disconnected from the internet.
You can run stable diffusion on a home PC, it's just tough to set up.
You can run stable diffusion on a home PC, it's just tough to set up.
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Because loli isn't legal everywhere. If you're using an AI model which is based on a cloud server somewhere, and you generate loli pics, you're going to leave traces behind in that server - it's pretty easy and normal to keep absolutely massive logs of everyone who's used your site after all.
Personally I'm not worried about it, the FBI has way better shit to be doing than fucking with some dude jacking it to CGI pics of Kanna Kamui. But if it worries you, it's relatively simple and very doable to just remove the model from the internet if you google the question.
Personally I'm not worried about it, the FBI has way better shit to be doing than fucking with some dude jacking it to CGI pics of Kanna Kamui. But if it worries you, it's relatively simple and very doable to just remove the model from the internet if you google the question.
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This started off entertaining, but I'm only on day 3 and this story has gone off the rails into boring snoozefest town.
The whole swimming training and the writers' obsession with the technical details of it is a complete boner killer. Not to mention all the useless text paragraphs like the damn cooking sections that take up a whole freaking page and seem like they're ripped from a cookbook. These things add nothing to the story of the broxsis romance that the reader comes for. They seem like unnecessary filler disconnected from the flow of the main romance aspect.
Shame as I really liked the writing that involved the brother and sister interacting at home, removed from the inane swimming aspect. I think the author needs to rethink this story and streamline their writing.
The whole swimming training and the writers' obsession with the technical details of it is a complete boner killer. Not to mention all the useless text paragraphs like the damn cooking sections that take up a whole freaking page and seem like they're ripped from a cookbook. These things add nothing to the story of the broxsis romance that the reader comes for. They seem like unnecessary filler disconnected from the flow of the main romance aspect.
Shame as I really liked the writing that involved the brother and sister interacting at home, removed from the inane swimming aspect. I think the author needs to rethink this story and streamline their writing.
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I think the writer is a)slow burning the story, go to literotica if you want quick wanks b)actually being somewhat realistic in their approach of how full blooded broxsis might come about using psychology c)growing the characters, which you don't see in a lot of the incest stories on here.
If it isn't for you, that's fine. But some of us like the realistic approach to it
