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mcmania

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I know It can be boring to see someone "spamming" this thread with several variation of the "same" renders, but since I am a perfectionnist by nature (read someone with one-track mind), I cannot help myself : if something bother me in one of my renders I have to redo it... So this time, it was the case : my "cultist" was not convincing enough for me so I rerendered it...

Please comment, I want to know what you thing about the quality of my work... Sometimes, I have the feeling that my work is shit since no one comment it :(... I hope I am wrong and that I am only just a little too paranoid...

Anyway here is the latest version of my render (a dark ceremony):
The Ceremony [clothed succubus with demon].png
 
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khumak

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I know It can be boring to see someone "spamming" this thread with several variation of the "same" renders, but since I am a perfectionnist by nature (read someone with one-track mind), I cannot help myself : if something bother me in one of my renders I have to redo it... So this time, it was the case : my "cultist" was not convincing enough for me so I rerendered it...

Please comment, I want to know what you thing about the quality of my work... Sometimes, I have the feeling that my work is shit since no one comment it :(... I hope I am wrong and that I am only just a little too paranoid...

Anyway here is the latest version of my render (a dark ceremony):
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I just have a couple of comments.

1. You can't really see the cultist's face. I think he'd look more impressive if he was looking at the camera and you could see his eyes. Would probably need some sort of additional light source in front of his face though or it would just be shrouded by the hood.
2. For the creature on the right, you can't really tell what it is since his left arm/wing/whatever is blocking his head. A different pose where you could see his face would be better IMO even if you can't see his eyes. It looks like he's looking at the devil girl. I would turn him so you can at least see part of his face.
 
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seamanq

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Final render for this month
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She is beautiful and the lighting and use of depth of field really highlight her well. Just one tiny question ... what is that object visible to the right of her (off of her left foot)? Is that supposed to be some kind of modern art sculpture? Whatever it is, it is functioning to pull attention away from your central character.
 
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