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"actual kobolds"
- May 29, 2017
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Ok I actualy played the game through the Chapter 1 and I got to say I LOVE THE CONCEPT.
This could easly become one of my favourite games, but it needs to grow to do that.
Idea of starting as a small dragon and seeing the game through his eyes is AMAZING. I like how you added some voice over lines - that is great too.
But the problem is the game need a LOT of more content.
Chapter 1 was far too brief. You need to make longer scenes, more dialogs, more locations etc.
Especialy that scene with the maid was way too brief. You pounced on her and 2 lines later you bukaked her face.
Scene like that should last way way longer.
Spend more times on writing, describe the situation, show us internal thoughts of the Maid as she sees the dragons dick, the Dragons thoughts, then how she feels as it rams into her throat etc. Spend another few lines of descriging how the cum flods her throat and how she reacts to it.
You know - just writing a proper scenes.
Right now it all seems like placeholder.
The concept is amazing, you just need not to rush to make this half-asedly. Take your time, make every scene count and be intresting.
I will be watching this game closesly as it has SUPERB Potencial, dont waste it !
And I will be waiting for your original art. Some random art from other people wont do. With original art you can make the scenes reflect perfectly what is happening in the text. Maybe you can do animations even.
Anyway.
I am back to playing Chapter 2. Keep working on it !
If you can show progress - you got a Follower in me !
This could easly become one of my favourite games, but it needs to grow to do that.
Idea of starting as a small dragon and seeing the game through his eyes is AMAZING. I like how you added some voice over lines - that is great too.
But the problem is the game need a LOT of more content.
Chapter 1 was far too brief. You need to make longer scenes, more dialogs, more locations etc.
Especialy that scene with the maid was way too brief. You pounced on her and 2 lines later you bukaked her face.
Scene like that should last way way longer.
Spend more times on writing, describe the situation, show us internal thoughts of the Maid as she sees the dragons dick, the Dragons thoughts, then how she feels as it rams into her throat etc. Spend another few lines of descriging how the cum flods her throat and how she reacts to it.
You know - just writing a proper scenes.
Right now it all seems like placeholder.
The concept is amazing, you just need not to rush to make this half-asedly. Take your time, make every scene count and be intresting.
I will be watching this game closesly as it has SUPERB Potencial, dont waste it !
And I will be waiting for your original art. Some random art from other people wont do. With original art you can make the scenes reflect perfectly what is happening in the text. Maybe you can do animations even.
Anyway.
I am back to playing Chapter 2. Keep working on it !
If you can show progress - you got a Follower in me !
- Jun 2, 2017
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So much hype I had when I firstly started this game. The opening with nice voice and music. You're playing as a dragon, in fantasy world, with huge d*ck. But then the first sexual scene came and I had to exit the game.
Blurry sexual picture in the backround covered with sharp, non sexual picture of the character in front. That is what killed the game for me. At least for now, I know the game is in the beginnings, so I hope these pictures, or maybe animations will be clear in the future.
Other than that It looked very nice, voice acting is pleasing, artwork looks fine, story was nice
Blurry sexual picture in the backround covered with sharp, non sexual picture of the character in front. That is what killed the game for me. At least for now, I know the game is in the beginnings, so I hope these pictures, or maybe animations will be clear in the future.
Other than that It looked very nice, voice acting is pleasing, artwork looks fine, story was nice
Yeah, I almost forgot the kobolds part. I kind of like the idea of dragon offspring from Kobolds, Human (Maybe further split by "Class"), Elves and whatever other "mothers" being split between feminized & otherwise cute monstergirl and/or powerful minions to add to your ranks.
That was so near the end of the demo that I kind of hand-waved it away as "likely to change." I sort did so with all of the "sprite artwork" since it was clearly from an avatar generator. It's an expedient method, surely, but I hope (with time and support) they will be replaced with more interesting and stylish characters.
That was so near the end of the demo that I kind of hand-waved it away as "likely to change." I sort did so with all of the "sprite artwork" since it was clearly from an avatar generator. It's an expedient method, surely, but I hope (with time and support) they will be replaced with more interesting and stylish characters.
This hits all the right notes for me and I am looking forward everything else coming!
- Jul 7, 2018
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I hear you! I've been writing/coding for a few months, and wanted to drop something into the pool for a bit of a morale boost and/or find potential contributors. It's lonely work making smut by yourself *hand on forehead*
They're getting a visual redesign as part of the upcoming art overhaul!
Thank you for your kind words! And those are fair criticisms - I'm not much of a smut writer (this is my first major writing and coding project), and it's taking me a while to find my groove. If anyone would like to suggest additions or improvements to scenes, I'm very happy to code them in.
I don't have time to draw on top of everything else, but I'm in collaboration with an artist now, and I hope to have a new visual design in place soon.
This is a really cool idea, and I'll give a think about how to implement it!
- Jul 7, 2018
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I don't think it does, at present - I don't choose the tags that get posted! But I like monstergirls, so I'll find a way to get them in.
I am a dinosaur and should probably get with what all the cool kids are saying these days.
Go to your Preferences menu and enable the content you want to see. If you don't set flags, you won't see anything!
- Jun 6, 2017
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Check the itch.io link in the OP, it is 1.0 (probably it means alpha 1.0 =/= final version 1.0)
- May 29, 2017
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I wish i could help with writing, but I am probably not dependable enough to help you on the project. Writer should be someone working very closely with that artist so they can make the scenes looks exacly as they should.
Since I can't help you directly with development - let me offer this advice.
Do not rush it. You already made a healthy chunk of the game with 2 chapters allready done.
I belive there is no need to develop the story further yet.
You allready have the good base, now focus on improving Quality of the first chapters you allready have.
Some actual ideas.
1. Remove that anoying timer for now. It doesnt help apreaciating the game for now. Or at least allow a free roam mode after player settles in a lair, so they can see remaining scenes that the game has to offer.
2. Make some cool looking stat table - so people can track how much Strenght, Charm, Dread or Mercy you have.
3. Lair would be a good place to have option to check your stats, your wealth, slaves, armies etc.
4. Add Specialization - like you can choose how your dragon will "evolve". Things like choosing between beeign able to cast spells or paralyze people with your gaze. Having a poisonous spike on the tail (anti large monsters) or a club like tail (anti armor) etc.
5. Having sex actualy affecting the gameplay. Right now it makes sense to eat them more than fuck them (other than to see a CG ;])
6. Since you split game into Chapters - it is a great possibility. Make your dragon grow bigger from one chapter to another.
This way it can be represented in the scenes. So in each next chapter the changes would be visible ! (including bigger dick).
Some characters you can fuck multiple times in diffrent chapters and they would have diffrent scenes with now much bigger Dragon ! So it is another reason no to rush to another chapter yet - before fully fleshing out Chapters 1 and 2.
7. When I spoke about the sex scene beeing to fast - I mainly had 1st maid scene in mind. Later on the scenes are better, but they could be a bit more descriptive and longer still. But the 1st Chapter as a whole REALY needs more love.
It realy feels a bit rushed. How about adding there 1 or 2 days more before beeing summoned by the regent ?
You could wake up first as a total dragon infant on the 1st day not beeing able to do much. On second day he couldstart exploring his room and "play a bit" with a Princess and Maid, but still be to weak to do anything, but on the 3rd day he would grow big enough to have that naughty scene with Maid, and then go to that audience. Just an Idea.
So yeah in short
1. Improve UI
2. Make Chapter 1 more flashed out, let us learn a bit more about Princess and the Kingdom
3. Focus on creating more content for Chapter 2 and adding more graphics. More backgrounds, possibly full body sprites for characters, some combat animations, more sounds. The game right now is big enough, just quite baren visualy. Focus on improving that.
Wish you all the best !
- May 29, 2017
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CGs for now are just placeholders anyway.
Since the game is very small in terms of MB's of space you can just DL it and check them - they arent encrypted.
- Sep 17, 2017
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ya play as a beast in that game? finaaaaaaally... got tired of all that vanilla shit lately. there are so few games that actually lets you play a monster, beast, whatever. it's ridiculous.
so best of luck with your project dev!
so best of luck with your project dev!
- Feb 2, 2019
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Sooo... I'm guessing we can't be a nice dragon and save the huntress from the centaurs? I hope we will be able to claim the alpha wolfgirl as waifu lol
- Jun 5, 2017
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Been having a fair bit of fun with this and largely agree with the above sentiments.
However one thing that's gotten me thus far is that you can't seem to rescue the huntress from the centaurs. Which really rather feels like a good idea for a merciful dragon.
However one thing that's gotten me thus far is that you can't seem to rescue the huntress from the centaurs. Which really rather feels like a good idea for a merciful dragon.