Alcatraz1964

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Honestly, congratulations, your game is incredible. You have a great talent for writing stories. I love the protagonist. I feel like she hides more than what she lets on in this first chapter. I just hope that in the following chapters we can have more interaction with Veska and Ericka, and see Davor's daughter.
 
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Mr. Pengo

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I took the subtle approach and took the streets without any deaths.

Edit: OK I found a route that allows me to win without the letter being used. Just gotta deceive him into thinking your going to marry him.
Huh, weird. The king approves of the nonviolent war, so I'll double check to make sure everything is ok in the script.

Honestly, congratulations, your game is incredible. You have a great talent for writing stories. I love the protagonist. I feel like she hides more than what she lets on in this first chapter. I just hope that in the following chapters we can have more interaction with Veska and Ericka, and see Davor's daughter.
You will get your wish on all three counts! Thanks so much
 

Mr. Pengo

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It's just that
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Here's how the system is currently set up, does this explain why it's not working for you? As you can see, it is supposed to be possible and then some.

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I would like to note that it is possible to accept all of the town's demands rather than just 2; this will have repercussions in its own right
 

Succubus Hunter

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From the game's description it sounds like this is like the game Domina if it were from Katrina's perspective. Anyone care to share there thoughts on that take?
 

telidar

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Here's how the system is currently set up, does this explain why it's not working for you? As you can see, it is supposed to be possible and then some.

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I would like to note that it is possible to accept all of the town's demands rather than just 2; this will have repercussions in its own right
Ah, I see now why it didn't work -
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telidar

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Something Momorose mentioned that I forgot in my review - Jasen.
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Well, he's surrounded by his "congregation", just like that preacher dude in GoT, who are fanatically loyal and ready to defend him, and if you do try to deal with him using force (by sending soldiers to pacify the village) he and his cronies just up and leave, since nothing really holds them there. Didn't feel like he was that much of a mary sue.
 
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Leelloominai

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i'm pretty sure i'm minority here as 'everybody' loves lesbian and as such is a pretty unpopular opinion of mine, but... it gets very annoying as my characters thrown herself for the Veska girl... i've zero interesting in her, and would rather prefer if mc doesn't engage so much with her.. but .. that is probably just me, at least until now i can avoid fuck with her, what is good for me, but annoys me that even after try to avoid her the character still even in her thoughts think how "gorgeous she is"
 

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Cheers! I usually make a lot of saves in Ren py VN s. More or less for every decision. So I can go back and see what other path had lead to.

Normally I just pres esc and get directly into the save menu. Here I get into a kind of menu Screen where I have to select save again. Is there another shortcut that I have been missing to get directly into save? Also could you please make naming saves optional? That is always another additional click that for me is unnecessary.

Other than that the thing is really great. I am looking forward to send MC down a lesbian sub path and am really curious how this will Develop storywise.

Thx for your hard Work!
 
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Mr. Pengo

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Something Momorose mentioned that I forgot in my review - Jasen.
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i'm pretty sure i'm minority here as 'everybody' loves lesbian and as such is a pretty unpopular opinion of mine, but... it gets very annoying as my characters thrown herself for the Veska girl... i've zero interesting in her, and would rather prefer if mc doesn't engage so much with her.. but .. that is probably just me, at least until now i can avoid fuck with her, what is good for me, but annoys me that even after try to avoid her the character still even in her thoughts think how "gorgeous she is"
Duvessa might think Veska is 'gorgeous' in an aesthetic sense but she's not going to actively lust after her/desire her unless you make her, outside of that very first scene.

Cheers! I usually make a lot of saves in Ren py VN s. More or less for every decision. So I can go back and see what other path had lead to.

Normally I just pres esc and get directly into the save menu. Here I get into a kind of menu Screen where I have to select save again. Is there another shortcut that I have been missing to get directly into save? Also could you please make naming saves optional? That is always another additional click that for me is unnecessary.

Other than that the thing is really great. I am looking forward to send MC down a lesbian sub path and am really curious how this will Develop storywise.

Thx for your hard Work!
I'll see what I can do!
 
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Miyocoshi

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I find it quite interesting to be able to play a visual novel based on intrigue and with a strong, independent main female character. I have a number of questions I hope you can answer: I think we could gain a dominance point by telling Jansen to stop touching Erika (we're threatening him that we won't make any future deals with him). Can't we reach an agreement with the blacksmith without Jansen? Can we seduce/corrupt Neva, Priscilla, and Branislava?
Good luck.
 
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