VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

[Dr.SigmundFap]

the funny thing is that the story has already been written, or am I wrong? so he should already know what happens, where and when ... therefore a +/- 10% of renders are correct. Or the story already written is something like: sophia is born, grows up, dies.

That's the point. The story has already been written, but in what format? An Outline? A Rough Draft? If you look at how he communicates his story on his page using bold and exclamation points, he told you it's a done deal and his story is completed. So there shouldn't be too much editing that needs to do, and he should be able to point out when major events are going to take place. The fact that he turns this into a major event tells me he added or did a complete overhaul on this time of day event. Also, he did a review and rewrite during his first surgery from his original script.

 

[Scarlet56]

I think the script is already written BUT in outline only.

It is humanly impossible to recall in great detail everything he could think of for such and such a scene.
He only has a global view.
Once he faces it, he gets busy detailing it.

In addition, we must not forget that he wrote the script and start doing it with his material at the time.
Now that he has a much better one, of course, he must say to himself: "I can do this scene like this now" and sort of changes his original plan.

While on vacation, since the concert scene seems complex, he should get a head start by storyboarding the concert. 1h or 2 per day during his vacation, that would always be taken.

 

[nexer]

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Apparently not, but the two don't share the same audience. Or at least the hard core is different.
It's also quite possibly harder to write a script like Awam, with many taboos.
Looking at the commercials of porn sites that appear everywhere, I would say that DPC follows the trend of these sites.
IMO, Awam won't reach the level of BaDiK in terms of patrons.
If I'm not mistaken DPC's native language is English, which is a big plus, and his income allows for a consultant.

 

[bluehound36]

Only problem is, people were thinking the same thing 2 or 3 updates BACK!

Hate to be the one to pop your bubble on this one. But poor Sophia getting anything used up at this point is more like wishful thinking than actually possible given the current pace of content. It's one of the reasons I haven't given a rat's ass about this game for quite awhile now. So much potential build up is a complete waste of time if there is no "payoff".

People were saying the same thing about MrDots when he first developed DmD. He went through the entire first chapter before so much as showing any sexual content until it's very end. People on here get all hot under the collar about that sort of thing and then once the action does begin, their story changes to doing nothing but praising the developer and anyone that questions any future decisions that are foolish get tossed under a bus by those same people for providing anything close to constructive criticism. I'll just sit back and watch that happen again with this game and laugh and hopefully L&P doesn't make poor decisions after getting to the sexual content. The writing and build up is good but like many have already stated, pushing that build up too far can ruin things. I believe once all the action does start happening that all the fappers here want to see, the game will have a natural ending and a solidified support base will be waiting for the next game that L&P starts working on. That's really the only reason some people are so upset right now, which is slightly amusing to me.

 

[Deleted member 86823]

Didn't realize the amount of drama here
LOL

 

[Talcum Powder]

People were saying the same thing about MrDots when he first developed DmD. He went through the entire first chapter before so much as showing any sexual content until it's very end. People on here get all hot under the collar about that sort of thing and then once the action does begin, their story changes to doing nothing but praising the developer and anyone that questions any future decisions that are foolish get tossed under a bus by those same people for providing anything close to constructive criticism. I'll just sit back and watch that happen again with this game and laugh and hopefully L&P doesn't make poor decisions after getting to the sexual content. The writing and build up is good but like many have already stated, pushing that build up too far can ruin things. I believe once all the action does start happening that all the fappers here want to see, the game will have a natural ending and a solidified support base will be waiting for the next game that L&P starts working on. That's really the only reason some people are so upset right now, which is slightly amusing to me.

I agree with you and so many others that the story and its pacing is actually really really good, and there's a lot to admire about the story, but

That's really the only reason some people are so upset right now

is comically off - we're upset because five + months for 1/3 of a day which was advertised as a minor update of approximately 450 renders which turned out to be more than double that.

If those extra 400-500 renders were added to cover more story or plot or events then no (or at least fewer) folks are upset. But if they're used to repose pigeons and adjust the angle of god rays to illustrate that Sophia spent 20 minutes changing outfits ...

 

[Hornyman2]

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[GingerSweetGirl]

Here's my graphical representation of the current state of the the outline for AWAM.

 

[lockerxx]

the old game of thrones meme

 

[hmc15]

That's the point. The story has already been written, but in what format? An Outline? A Rough Draft? If you look at how he communicates his story on his page using bold and exclamation points, he told you it's a done deal and his story is completed. So there shouldn't be too much editing that needs to do, and he should be able to point out when major events are going to take place. The fact that he turns this into a major event tells me he added or did a complete overhaul on this time of day event. Also, he did a review and rewrite during his first surgery from his original script.

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It is clear he used a writer who has a NDA imho

 

[hmc15]

People were saying the same thing about MrDots when he first developed DmD. He went through the entire first chapter before so much as showing any sexual content until it's very end. People on here get all hot under the collar about that sort of thing and then once the action does begin, their story changes to doing nothing but praising the developer and anyone that questions any future decisions that are foolish get tossed under a bus by those same people for providing anything close to constructive criticism. I'll just sit back and watch that happen again with this game and laugh and hopefully L&P doesn't make poor decisions after getting to the sexual content. The writing and build up is good but like many have already stated, pushing that build up too far can ruin things. I believe once all the action does start happening that all the fappers here want to see, the game will have a natural ending and a solidified support base will be waiting for the next game that L&P starts working on. That's really the only reason some people are so upset right now, which is slightly amusing to me.

True but this project is 4 years in the making..

 

[hmc15]

Only problem is, people were thinking the same thing 2 or 3 updates BACK!

Hate to be the one to pop your bubble on this one. But poor Sophia getting anything used up at this point is more like wishful thinking than actually possible given the current pace of content. It's one of the reasons I haven't given a rat's ass about this game for quite awhile now. So much potential build up is a complete waste of time if there is no "payoff".

This captures a lot of the frustration imho

 

[Dr.SigmundFap]

It is clear he used a writer who has a NDA imho

It's quite possible he did, but nevertheless, he used it and posted it on his page.

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

People were saying the same thing about MrDots when he first developed DmD. He went through the entire first chapter before so much as showing any sexual content until it's very end. People on here get all hot under the collar about that sort of thing and then once the action does begin, their story changes to doing nothing but praising the developer and anyone that questions any future decisions that are foolish get tossed under a bus by those same people for providing anything close to constructive criticism. I'll just sit back and watch that happen again with this game and laugh and hopefully L&P doesn't make poor decisions after getting to the sexual content. The writing and build up is good but like many have already stated, pushing that build up too far can ruin things. I believe once all the action does start happening that all the fappers here want to see, the game will have a natural ending and a solidified support base will be waiting for the next game that L&P starts working on. That's really the only reason some people are so upset right now, which is slightly amusing to me.

This is a comically bad-faith argument. No one who regularly participates in this thread should be classified as a "fapper" who's only here for one reason. Immediately following the release of an update, this thread will be hit by fappers who don't understand what this game is trying to do- but anyone who is still talking about this game four months after its last release is not here for the fapping. Asking the dev to stick to a plan is not asking for a lot.

 

[Radoslaw Wolf]

June hahahahahhahaha

He didn't say which year, though.

 

[Mennnnnn234]

people are frustrated because update duration is long everything else is fine

 

[SerBelG]

Does anyone have 0.115 for mac please?

 

[DmSt4r69]

2022

 

[Gandhifire]

I only wish I got to know about this game, say after 6 year or so. Would have saved me the grind I endure today.

I recall the time when the first version I played was 0.065. Which was released a year or two after the game started.

2 years of less grind.

 

[Gandhifire]

I only wish I got to know about this game, say after 6 year or so. Would have saved me the grind I endure today.

I recall the time when the first version I played was 0.065. Which was released a year or two after the game started.

2 years of less grind.

And so lucky are the ones who played this game for the first time today. They have to wait only a month for the update.

(It's just a rant in my mind)