VN Ren'Py Tales from the Deep: Eve [Ch1.b0.a3.4] [Mrsloap]

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Overview:
From a teen mom to a full-blown drug addict Eve is a real fuck up who managed to lose her son's custody on the process. She's in her early thirties now and is finally getting her life back on track. A shitty bartender part-time job plus her camming on Shamecams makes her able to maintain a crappy apartment and visit her kid from now and then. Until a late night shift at the Bar has unforeseen consequences that might ruin everything she has built so far. Her sobriety, morals, freedom and even her safety might now be at risk. Follow this decadent journey and decide how bad things will go for Eve from now on.​

Thread Updated: 2024-11-05
Release Date: 2024-08-02
Developer: Mrsloap

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Version: Ch1.a3.4
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English, Spanish, Portuguese (BR)
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["CJ"]

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[P3zz0]

Mrsloap welcome and parabéns on your first release. Please follow this link and make a request to claim the dev tag, boa sorte !

 

[Varrilete]

"... Follow this decadent journey and decide how bad things will go for Eve from now on ..." oh things will go very bad for her

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

your feedback is highly appreciated

Well, you could start with fixing typos in the overview i suppose.

 

[Chalker]

Man, that synopsis sounds depressing as fuck. That's not even a corruption game st that point, more like a pure degradation game.

 

[mikej147]

Man, that synopsis sounds depressing as fuck. That's not even a corruption game st that point, more like a pure degradation game.

I love a good degradation game. Keep it up sir

 

[rKnight]

Probably tried to fool around with some random weeaboos, and got bad end? lol

Interesting premise. The girl is looking nice so I'll take this chance!

 

[Crowangel]

As someone who likes the goth/emo alt girl style i'm looking forward to testing this.. good luck and i'll review once through the prologue

 

[Mrsloap]

Mrsloap Gofile links are not public.

Thanks for the mediafire link

 

[Mrsloap]

Well, you could start with fixing typos in the overview i suppose.

Will do sir, expect next update with the remaining of the prologue by next friday

 

["CJ"]

Thanks for the mediafire link

The links aren't from me, I guess Pezzo added them, so you have to thank him.

 

[Mrsloap]

Mrsloap welcome and parabéns on your first release. Please follow this link and make a request to claim the dev tag, boa sorte !

Muito Obrigado Pezzo! If you haven't mentioned the tag i would have never guessed how to ask for it, and thanks for using Portuguese and not Spanish hahaha, at last someone got it right

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[incest lover m/s]

Are there any plans for an incest tag in the future so I can give it a go?

 

[Najar]

Demo is good, looking forward to later versions

 

[Mrsloap]

Are there any plans for an incest tag in the future so I can give it a go?

YES! I forgot about that one on the planned tags, but i'll add it soon enough. Who knows maybe on a further update Eve receives a visit from her son? Keep in mind that i don't want to fool anyone so i'll just let you know that it will be included in the later chapters not on the prologue or even the first one ok? Thanks for the feedback incest lover.

 

[slavegal]

This is a good start; I like how you slowly build up the protagonist's character and the premises of the story.




It is a little bit difficult for me to read. Generally, white letters with black banding work on most of the backgrounds. Please, don't use red/green/yellow texts on backgrounds with similar colors.

And I know it is about corruption, but it is not logical for a woman to become "wet" in such a hostile situation. Physically, it is not possible for us to turn adrenalin into dopamine in seconds. Furthermore, If a girl had already been as slutty as a succubus who can get pleasure in such an incident, then there would be no space for you to "corrupt" her anymore.

In BDSM, some kinds of pleasure indeed come from "I am forced to do something I don't want to,"; but the pleasure would lag behind a little bit, for example, a few hours after multiple ritual actions. A trusted partner could accelerate it, but it still takes time to trust someone. The point: if you didn't spend a considerable length of the text on building up a scene, it would be a little weird to see the "pleasure" in a sudden and hostile event. For example, you could describe his strength and assertive voice, the contrast of their body size, how rough he is, and how humiliated she is, before the "pleasure."

This is a promising story, anyway; expecting to see your next release, godspeed!

 

[osanaiko]

Are there any plans for an incest tag in the future so I can give it a go?

"teen mom".... "early thirties"....

/me does quick mafs...

oh, oh no...

 

[incest lover m/s]

YES! I forgot about that one on the planned tags, but i'll add it soon enough. Who knows maybe on a further update Eve receives a visit from her son? Keep in mind that i don't want to fool anyone so i'll just let you know that it will be included in the later chapters not on the prologue or even the first one ok? Thanks for the feedback incest lover.

I'm glad to know, and you can count on my support