VN - Ren'Py - 16 Years Later! [Ep.12] [Wetdreamwalker]

I really Love the Cameltoe details ! Something you really don't see a lot of.
Hopefully there will be more. There sure are tons of opportunities to do so in this great game. Great work !!!!
Thank you ..

Fairly average game. The intro is kind of weak and the game overall has a pacing issue. Most of the girls are fairly unique from one another but could use a bit more personality. The art and animations are the best part of the game

Story - 2/10 Far from original, and not really interesting. The story moves along quite quickly and involves too many other female characters. Father out of prison and now after his daughters which he knows so little about, could actually work if the writing were not so poor. The writing does not inspire any effective emotional attachment to the daughters. Rather amateur overall.

Originality - 1/10 As already stated this one is far from original, so many others of the same or mostly the same scenario .

Renders - 5/10 The Renders themselves are a little less than average quality, feels rather cheap overall.

Animations - 1/10 Another one with extremely poor animations, the two second sex scenes with no real realism whatsoever. Foreplay is pretty much non existent. Animations and story are the key elements to any of these story/games, this one fails at both.

Amount of content - 8/10 For the amount of time it has been out the content is average.


Not a very good attempt at a story, done on the cheap side not really trying to make something that stands out against the rest. Just another cookie cutter throw something together with little effort story/game. Ok to go play through once, but doesn't inspire a second play through.

Inspired by My New Family in the worst ways possible, this VN is unfortunately very subpar and, as it stands, not worth the time investment.

Let's get the inoffensive out of the way: the renders and the sound. Not the best I've ever seen but not the worst either, perfectly serviceable. I personally found the girls attractive, but not enough to stomach the terrible writing.

Speaking of, I think every aspect of the writing is bad: the grammar, the dialogue, the plot, the characterization. It's kind of baffling, really. The worst for me was what I would describe as "emotional exposition." Characters start talking about how they feel, the type of trauma they went through that made them feel and act certain ways. Nobody talks like this, it takes a massive amount of introspection to figure out such things about yourself and the vast majority of people need therapy to do so.

The MC's inner monologue is also particularly egregious to me, because it's either a repeat of something he thought 10 seconds prior or a painfully obvious observation.

To finish up, I don't think this game can succeed without some major rewrites and other such tweaks. Also distancing it from My New Family would be a good idea, because as several people have pointed out already it kind of borders on plagiarism, especially at the beginning.

Pretty damn solid. I feel compelled to point out some people are saying some absurdly stupid shit. The entire jail part alone is painfully realistic cause for fucks sake there are a absurdly straight up stupid as hell amount (that is truly frightening) of cases way WAY sillier, more absurdly petty, god damn flagrantly flimsy bullshit or straight up innocent dudes in prison for mindbogglingly flimsy reasons or something super legit retarded like guys STILL STILL in jail after what they did became fully, entirely, completely, legalized. There is so much to say on it.

As for morons going on about the writing in certain ways that aren’t nowhere good enough for the inane trash they are saying… you do better then if you’re so full of shit. It is about the theme the presentation and so forth. A phenomenal example that comes to mind is the Uncharted game series. Fundamentally… it is total complete shit. Couldn’t be more tacky or cliché. BUT the way the game plays out is fun and looks great. Legitimate concerns for 16 Years Later would be that normal proper route is good and solid but douchebag options are cringy in how stupid and over the top they can go. The only logic be it real, movie, game or just porn logic to the douchebag route is right back to jail for botching up probation. Certain other options start off way too strong and out of fucking nowhere. Yeah I fully entirely understand other kinks and but if like for example you got a full on say… boob guy who does stuff in regards to liking boobs but then drastically starts slobbering over feet… it is an example not saying that happens but when something like it does… it is god damn jarring and right out of character. Gotta hint at possiblities instead of suddenly going full throttle on it.

The lovey part stuff the only strictly explicitly only unplausble and highly unrealistic part is how many fall in love instantly. People do stupid, dumb shit for love ALL the damn time let alone absurd nonsense like fall in love at first sight and marry in less then a month or a week.

Girls look great. Really love how sexy and sensual a lot of the encounters are. It is a large step above most typical games.

PS IMO some of the cheesy moments are kinda funny in a corny humor kind of way

Girls are okay.

But really what is this with this story which has no sense:
- MC knew the girls for min 0 days (since youngest one was 2 when he got in jail) and max 33 months if he knew mother before birth of youngest one.
When you miss 16 years, how can you go to them and they accept you in your life.... just to make you their lover?

- the plot has no timing sense: first scene with every girl? they want your dick. No point getting to know each other.

- every one is hot for the MC.

So this is a pure porn game, with bad porn scenes...

So a miss for me.

Excelent game with great visuals, decent story and regular point system. Some of the logic in progress is uneven and can be improved. Example: daughter kisses you on the lips before the cheeks. With some fine tuning, it can become even better game. Burn is slow, but you can still have sex scenes, so no blue-balling here.

Very interesting yet very weird game i can give like between 3 to 4 star nothing more.

Yes this game is actually good but still bad i know i dont make any sense but this is truth.

Game incest is good girls need father and our mc as a father either gonna bang them or just dont but still incest good still let me say this for now teasing little too much for me like we bang others but we cant bang girls who sees us as a father figure or father but you can bang boring side character ? like why ? this is incest game or role play for that kind thing i dont wanna bang some moronic womans i wanna bang my daughters nothing more.

Thast a big problem here teasing is anohter level here like Wife and Mother game this is doing same thing its that bad no for now not bad maybe year later ? yeah thats gonna be bad still this is good game for just incest maybe little story nothing more.

So whats bad here ?
16 years for crime mc commited is stupid little too stupid.
Everybody accepting mc like nothing happened stupid too.
He acts like normal person he dont act like person who suffered from crime and prisoned for 16 years .
Last update ruined game for me Mc gets beaten by bunch of kids like come on you survived 16 years in prison and some kids can beat you because of that they have knife and 3 people lol come on i am sure there lot of giants in prison who can one shot you feels like nothing happened him in that 16 years.
Yeah drama here too so thats no no for me we dont need that mc is adult and criminal he can know things yet some bully can can do things lol thats stupid.
Lastly we dont need other worthless characters here yet author adds them to story yeah lets waste scenes on them.

Good things ?
İncest good i like it feels like real and nice.
Daughters good to the not copy of each other i like that one of them really stupid still thats not that bad.
Some side characters good and interesting too thats plus.
Mc not %100 pussy yeah thats big plus for now if this changes welp that gonna be bad.
Story some part of it good some part of that story is just meh but thats not makes this game meh or bad.
Lastly character models look interesting really good for me normally mc and main girls always look same with other games but this game models good thats plus for me .

I know i act like hater but i am not teasing is good but if you do that too much thats turn games to scam and sadly some of games %100 doing that i pray for this game to dont become like that really i hate some things but other than that this is deserve solid 4 for now maybe later i can change too 5 or 3 because when times come to final act authors always screw games so hard make all fans hater so lets pray for that to dont happen here.

Typical VN, but done very well.
The graphics are amazing in terms of quality.
The idea is quite popular, but the plot is well developed.
Most of all, I like the expressive character of the characters.
As for me 5/5

We all know the story here. A father returns to his family after a long absence. While the story does focus more on the emotional aspects, it really forgets about the realistic parts of it all. The second the father returns home he is welcomed with opens arms and they are one happy family. The girls are way too attracted to the MC with little to no reason at all and the whole thing comes across as superficial.

It's a mix of boo-hoo tragedy and interesting storytelling. Personally I think the dev is focusing too much on constantly exploring the feelings of everyone. That'd be fine with me, but the characters aren't complicated and act unnatural.

I'd rate it 3.5 but have to lower the score due to how artificial it all feels. I know, I know, it's an adult game with sexual content but still...

Really good game with realistic walktrough. Dont jump the sex immedietly, first they build relationship. Also scenes are pretty hot, problem with most porn games nudity isn't sexy most of the time they need a story. if we want to watch simple sex we can just look for the porn or hentai.

I am always looking for a good dad/daughters incest story and this is a very well written one.
All characters are very charming and you will fall in love with them. Most importantly, they do not look like kids but young adults which i really prefer.
The story has potential and opens choices for different path. I did not go the rude route. Perhaps i will try that sometime. I actually tried to piss off everyone and it was game over.
What i like most, you do not see yourself all the time. Most of the time you are invisible. So important to me.
And when you are in front, its because of the story and scene.
I truly fell in love with this game.
If you romantic, this has a path for you. Its like a forbidden fruit. Of course we like to eat it and so will you enjoy your daughters.
I can not say too much of it, since the story ends before anything happens in bed but its stimulating in the right way.
So if that appeals to you, maybe try it out. I do not think you will regret it.
Thanks for making the game, dev and hope we see the story continue.

Just want to add, that the strict route is actually pretty nice too, if you like it rough.
I did it in the game mode so not much choices but at the same time no game over.
This path is the "put you in your place" path. You are the domino, i mean dominant men and make everyone else (women) submissive to you.
Works well, if you like that kind of path.
Personally i like the romance a tick better.

Amazing Game! This is one of the few games that I actually enjoy reading (most) of the plot/story! I think the renders are amazing!

I am not sure if the creator of the game reads these or not but if they/he/she does I hope they will strive to not rush the major scenes like I did the first time I saw a pussy... Remember this guy is mature he knows how to handle his stuff... He is not the raging teenager who cums before he puts it in... I hope you will go slow with the first major scenes... Secondly, I am sure your grammar is better than mine but I am amazed that creators don't use free services like grammarly or something similar like prowritingaid... might make your job a little easier... But all in all great game and amazing characters!

The game is ok. The girls look good, the setting is ok. It's all very predictable and unoriginal but sometimes you just want a burger after you've had haute cuisine.

What I dislike very much is the need to click even if there is just one choice, get rid of that please dev, it serves no purpose for the player ( or reader).

English: 5
User Interface: 4
User Experience: 3
Art: 5
Dialogue: 2
Story: 3
Opinion: 1
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Avg: 3.29

I figure it's been about a year and I should come back to this, I changed how I review things, and honestly, I don't know why I would give some of these games benefit of the doubt. Especially given the "inspiration" this references BEFORE THE GAME EVEN STARTS. Like, c'mon man, have confidence in your own work to not say "I like this other game and wanted to make one just like it." Right as it starts. And once again "English isn't my native language" right after, like, just make the game in your native language, then hire a translator. Reading stiff and broken English, and I'm sure this is true for reading in any language, is one of the worst experiences you can have IN A GAME THAT IS MEANT TO BE READ. I get Americans are dumb, horny and throw money at literally nothing, but it just feels like a joke when you play something that's poorly localized. Now, that rant being said, what's here is just not good. It's the same "Dad and daughters suddenly want sex" drivel trying to appeal to the "wholesome" crowd and the sexual assault crowd at the same time.

There really isn't much of a story, Like you might read in my old review, Step-Dad comes home from prison after 16 years to reunite with three daughters "in hopes of redemption." Notice the quotes? It's because all MC does is say sorry, internalize EVERYTHING that just happened repeatedly, and say "I shouldn't look at my girls like that." then proceeds to look at his girls like that. I don't get it. I'm so unbelievably tired of this same dried out porn plot. Notice how I haven't continued the story yet? There is none, it's just MC walking from one room to another as another love interest says he's so different then sex happens. And that's if you do the "wholesome" route. Then all that pretense is gone and MC is just a sexually abusive asshole and honestly enjoying that route should get you put on a list somewhere. Every interaction, essentially, goes like this (and again I can barely only stomach the romance route):

MC meets the girl.
MC apologizes to the girl for being an ex-con.
The girl waves away MC's worries.
The girl proceeds to explain every character trait she has and every trauma she's been through.
MC says "But you're okay now."
The girl starts to swoon over him as if he was that most amazing man ever.
They then come up with a contrived reason to continue seeing each other for MC to leer at and ogle the girl.
Repeat.

And at this point in the story, MC has been home maybe 3 days. Enough to have sex dream about all his daughters. MC's internal monologue is completely unnecessary too. For every line of dialog said, MC has 5 lines that he thinks to himself dissecting the situation as if he knows everything. And a lot of it comes off as a little creepy too. I don't know, I don't want to continue to bash this, it's technically not the worst game I've played, but it takes too much from it's inspiration and MC ultimately acts like a scummy white knight.

The English is stiff, full of misspellings, and definitely needs work. The UI is slightly edited, the textbox and font, but the navigation menu is edited to make it hard to read which is hilarious. The art is fine. I think I'm one of the only advocates of having character sprites over a background, but the Dev refreshes the entire screen every single time a new sprite is shown. So it eliminates the cohesive look of sprites... My rants of the story and dialogue are all above. I'm glad I came back to this so I can accurately review it, but I don't think I will ever like this, nor will I try it again.

To the dev, if steam isn't coming out of your ears reading this. And you haven't flagged this to be deleted. I see where you're coming from, but you need to write characters better. Having 18-27 year old women act like their eight and MC monologuing constantly is not a good reading experience and is frankly weird. But anyway, best of luck to you.

Well, after last update played i decided to rate it. It earns four stars for the story, story details are nice,not so fast forwarded, i like that a lot.
About graphics,well... That could be better , input some good animations, need to put in more work in graphics. This could go further with better graphic layout.

I was reluctant to play this game because of the 1-star reviews, and I am really glad that I gave it a chance, I played a lot of incest games and although it is a very simple concept, many fail to execute it right either by rushing into the relationships or by making it very slow paced to the point it's boring but 16 YL did it right. The story is good for a game that has incest as the main plot, the renders are decent, the models are gorgeous, the writing is passable, the relationships and character development is wonderful and full of wholesome moments.
Keep up the good work, dev.

With close to 400 VNs under my belt and my own one in development, I stopped writing reviews recently, I don't want to appear like I'm "shitting on the competition", so now I only write reviews if I have mostly good things to say. I needed to mention this as a disclaimer, so you see where I'm coming from with my critique, negative, or positive.

What drew me in the first moment was that you don't have the typical wealthy macho MC here who only has to lift a pinky to get his dick sucked. We have a middle-aged bum here whose only success stems from charisma and/or manipulation. That creates an immediate connection most other VNs don't. Let's be honest, most of us will have it easier to step in the shoes of this guy than some Elon Musk meets Johnny Sins kind of male specimen. This quality, to be just familiar enough to be relatable, but still unpredictable enough to be interesting is what draws you in, it's a motif that follows you through the entire VN.

The love interests aren't just different looking wet holes to dip your virtual stick into, they all have their own personas, interests, aspirations, reaching far beyond the regular VN where characters are only defined within the close confines of how they relate to the MC.

At the same time the writing is simple. Not simplistic, simple. No convoluted trains of thought, no theatrics, every character behaves and speaks how people normally do, everyone uses verbal and nonverbal mannerisms appropriate to their socioeconomic background. That's extremely rare to see and hard to get right.

Apart from the bumpy beginning and a - well justified - hiatus recently, the development cycle has been stable, dates were kept, leaving only people to complain about a schedule who don't bother reading the schedule, who don't care to bother with trying to understand how the tier of their patreon pledges influences their ETA of the material (for everyone else there's F95zone, am I right?).

What I haven't talked about yet, which for me is only the second most important aspect of a good story - visually represented or not - are the graphics. This is where I would say that the graphics are passable at best, if I wouldn't have any foreknowledge in rendering, and wouldn't know what kind of 10 year old potato of a laptop this VN has been made with. Since I do, I have to say that the developer has done an exceptional job with the hardware he's been given, but effort only goes so far, at the end of the day all that matters is the result. So the graphics are far from exceptional, but the developer still couldn't have done better, even if he wanted to, given his hardware limitations, which eventually factors into my scoring.


All in all I think this VN fully deserves a 4/5 rating, if I'm being fair, if I'm judging the entire body of work as a whole, instead of subjectively rating it superficially for its adequacy as fap material.

oops, looks like it's a future hit. the graphics are almost flawless, sometimes even overdoing it with transparent clothes, but it looks like the man is on to good debauchery and will get better next, judging from the last update.

now there is almost no content in the beginning, only teasing(but good teasing), there is already one rough/non-rough depends of the opinion scene.

upd. emm, I feel like completely diff person writed above. too much teasing, no scenes for the update. feeling like the scenes will come never.

16 Years Later! [v0.5.3]

1. Fairly good emotional reasoning of the story. Three step daughters portrayed different personality is very nice. Especially the youngest one being much odd type is well characterized
2. Good reasoning for the forbidden relationship
3. Good quality of image/rendering
4. No bugs
5. In summary a Fairly Good