Story started out ok. MC in prison for 16 years, wants to reconnect with step-daughters that he barely knew. It's flimsy logic but that's okay. The daughters are absolutely stupid. They lack basic knowledge of sexuality that you'd pick up in a health class and shouldn't have any longing for the stepfather since he played such a minor factor in their lives.
If the story stopped there, with slice of life situations revolving around getting to know the 3 daughters, that would be fine. Instead it gets ambitious and starts adding a multitude of barely fleshed out characters. (when even the daughters are barely developed out of their stereotypes)
The pacing of the story is like watching paint dry. Some of the dialogue is overly wordy but that might be due to ESL problems, not sure.
Flimsy story, flimsy development, okay renders...and then comes a choice. You end up having to choose between two LI. While I don't mind "choose your LI" type problems, this is not the story it belongs in. This is a generic, fake incest, catch them all harem style story.
If the story stopped there, with slice of life situations revolving around getting to know the 3 daughters, that would be fine. Instead it gets ambitious and starts adding a multitude of barely fleshed out characters. (when even the daughters are barely developed out of their stereotypes)
The pacing of the story is like watching paint dry. Some of the dialogue is overly wordy but that might be due to ESL problems, not sure.
Flimsy story, flimsy development, okay renders...and then comes a choice. You end up having to choose between two LI. While I don't mind "choose your LI" type problems, this is not the story it belongs in. This is a generic, fake incest, catch them all harem style story.