VN - Ren'Py - 16 Years Later! [Ep.13] [Wetdreamwalker]

I was reluctant to play this game because of the 1-star reviews, and I am really glad that I gave it a chance, I played a lot of incest games and although it is a very simple concept, many fail to execute it right either by rushing into the relationships or by making it very slow paced to the point it's boring but 16 YL did it right. The story is good for a game that has incest as the main plot, the renders are decent, the models are gorgeous, the writing is passable, the relationships and character development is wonderful and full of wholesome moments.
Keep up the good work, dev.

With close to 400 VNs under my belt and my own one in development, I stopped writing reviews recently, I don't want to appear like I'm "shitting on the competition", so now I only write reviews if I have mostly good things to say. I needed to mention this as a disclaimer, so you see where I'm coming from with my critique, negative, or positive.

What drew me in the first moment was that you don't have the typical wealthy macho MC here who only has to lift a pinky to get his dick sucked. We have a middle-aged bum here whose only success stems from charisma and/or manipulation. That creates an immediate connection most other VNs don't. Let's be honest, most of us will have it easier to step in the shoes of this guy than some Elon Musk meets Johnny Sins kind of male specimen. This quality, to be just familiar enough to be relatable, but still unpredictable enough to be interesting is what draws you in, it's a motif that follows you through the entire VN.

The love interests aren't just different looking wet holes to dip your virtual stick into, they all have their own personas, interests, aspirations, reaching far beyond the regular VN where characters are only defined within the close confines of how they relate to the MC.

At the same time the writing is simple. Not simplistic, simple. No convoluted trains of thought, no theatrics, every character behaves and speaks how people normally do, everyone uses verbal and nonverbal mannerisms appropriate to their socioeconomic background. That's extremely rare to see and hard to get right.

Apart from the bumpy beginning and a - well justified - hiatus recently, the development cycle has been stable, dates were kept, leaving only people to complain about a schedule who don't bother reading the schedule, who don't care to bother with trying to understand how the tier of their patreon pledges influences their ETA of the material (for everyone else there's F95zone, am I right?).

What I haven't talked about yet, which for me is only the second most important aspect of a good story - visually represented or not - are the graphics. This is where I would say that the graphics are passable at best, if I wouldn't have any foreknowledge in rendering, and wouldn't know what kind of 10 year old potato of a laptop this VN has been made with. Since I do, I have to say that the developer has done an exceptional job with the hardware he's been given, but effort only goes so far, at the end of the day all that matters is the result. So the graphics are far from exceptional, but the developer still couldn't have done better, even if he wanted to, given his hardware limitations, which eventually factors into my scoring.


All in all I think this VN fully deserves a 4/5 rating, if I'm being fair, if I'm judging the entire body of work as a whole, instead of subjectively rating it superficially for its adequacy as fap material.

oops, looks like it's a future hit. the graphics are almost flawless, sometimes even overdoing it with transparent clothes, but it looks like the man is on to good debauchery and will get better next, judging from the last update.

now there is almost no content in the beginning, only teasing(but good teasing), there is already one rough/non-rough depends of the opinion scene.

upd. emm, I feel like completely diff person writed above. too much teasing, no scenes for the update. feeling like the scenes will come never.

16 Years Later! [v0.5.3]

1. Fairly good emotional reasoning of the story. Three step daughters portrayed different personality is very nice. Especially the youngest one being much odd type is well characterized
2. Good reasoning for the forbidden relationship
3. Good quality of image/rendering
4. No bugs
5. In summary a Fairly Good

It's a good game, and it doesn't deserve all the 1 star ratings in my opinion. Initially it was too similar to MNF, but at this point it's a different game that maybe shares a similar backstory.

It's still not done, but what is there already looks pretty good. The scenes look nice, dialogues are not bad, the relationships develop a little fast but I don't mind that, in fact I prefer it that way. Overall it gets a recommendation from me

I love this game. In most games there is only one route. In this game there are two paths with each character which can lead to interesting mix-ups. I'd definitely like to see more of this and I'm very curious to see where this game goes. What I've seen so far is a great start and I hope it will continue in the same way.

I definitely rate this game 5 stars.Beautiful models great story.I know that the story is based on the MNF, but it's fantastic how the developer of the game is shaping the story to his own ideas.
Incest games are all very similar. This game is very complex and your answers really matter.
In this game, your relationships really do develop the way you want them to. The game is in its infancy but has great potential. This game is just as similar to another game as an action movie is to another action movie.

v0.5.3

Can't complain so far with the game, yes the tease with Felicia in the rip off Bulls jersey was a really naughty thing to do, devs. Naughty naughty, you're teasing me. And it is worsened by the fact that there is technically no penetration scenes.

But the game does everything else right. The character designs are great, the plot is interesting, the game has a lot of choices and most importantly of all, the choices make sense...well 90% of the them make sense, which is pretty much 100% in my book from the experiences I've had so far with games on here. And that's a lot of experience.

To summarize it for new downloaders, it's about 4 hours of content, no penetration scenes, but a game you should definitely stick with in the future updates, because you don't wanna miss it. I have a feeling the dev has a clue about how to do sex scenes, judging from the teasing he has done so far.

Review based on v0.5.3:

Wow, this was quite the hidden gem for me. I usually don't try games that "linger" around the 3 star rating but I was out of games and wanted to just try some different games whatever the rating. After now having played it from start to current end so have I found out two things..

1. Damn was I missing out.
2. Why the "low" rating?

The story is ok and does not try to be some masterpiece with a deep meaning, but what it does have is some interesting characters that for me felt to be introduced in a timely and well paced manner. The story itself also develops in a good manner and does know what it is so you are not sitting and reading a novel before you get any action, so for me just the right amount of story for each lewd scene. And the lewd scenes are good, maybe the animation leaves something to be desired but animations are not that important for me so its ok. Characters however are the star of the show in this game. Really nice designs that are both unique to each other and really good looking. The sound design however sucks, the moaning sound in the lewd scenes is maybe 2 seconds long and repeats forever, also all sound effects are under the music option so you cant just mute the sex sounds.. Music is ok but nothing special.

All in all a good game with what I found few spelling mistakes, a coherent story, great looking characters and decent amount of lewd scenes. Color me impressed! 5/5

(Review based on game version 0.5.3)

Renders: ★★★★★ (Top notch)
UI: ★★★★★
Story/plot: ★★★☆☆ (Story is decent but there are A LOT of weird spelling errors that constantly break the immersion)
Gameplay: ★★★★★ (Lots of choices that actually affect the story)

I like the concept and the characters are likeable. If the grammar was better and broke the immersion less I would rate 5 out of 5. Good game; would recommend.

There are some things I like in this, other that makes just want to give it 1*. The girls are pretty with good graphics, the MC is not someone I wanna be, the story is so bad sometimes ecept when it's copied from MNF. So I don't know how this game can get better, sorry for not so much constructive critique. Except change the look of the MC.

I waited one update before writing this, but I'll think thgat I'll stop playing this game. Maybe come back after some more uodates.

This is rough.

the idea behind this is solid but the execution is pretty bad.
they re-wrote the first part of the story and now it's better but the new content is now pretty bad.
the English is really rough and keeps taking me out of the immersion.
I was pretty interested in the story and the setting but honestly there's so much conversation about it (in really bad English) that after a while I just didn't care anymore.
not to mention there's barely ant thing sexual in the game. I know it's early but basically anything sexual is just in the guy's fantasy.
also, the model of the guy looks awful. his hair and his mutant goblin face!
the story is too self-contained. everything just happens in the small house and its surroundings and the MC looks like doesn't even have a life and doesn't plan on getting a life either.

the models of the girls look pretty good.

Certainly top tier, incest game with gorgeous girls what more can you ask! Story? Well it's just beginning and obviously there's scope for improvement but till now i haven't disappointed. Renders are absolutely gorgeous and kewl, he he he. Liked the way these girls shaped their future even without elder figure for good chunk of adult years. Let's see how the main character brings some happiness in their lives both emotionally as well as physically (wink wink)

Loved it so far, most importantly loved that there is a reason for such antics to start... he never saw them growing up and he was in prison so its probably been awhile add to it the emotion of guilt. Good job! Also does not hurt that the daughters are stunning, and hope they remain the focus.

So far I am enjoying this quite a bit. I appreciate we get a choice of how to treat each scene, and I also like that we do not get shut down for choosing the 'wrong' path, instead having the option for forced scenes. The models are attractive and well made, and the graphical fidelity is just fine. (could use more sex scenes) I look forward to see where this goes!

I'm really enjoying this game and it's got great harem potential. The girls look good, the action is starting to rev up right out of the gate, we're not sitting around until the 2nd year release before something happens and it's all quite believable.

The script is good with a little Engrish here and there that's easy to overlook if you give them a Russian accent mentally. I'm enjoying it and looking forward to more. I like the pacing, the art, the script and the premise, and despite the author getting the idea from MNF it's distinctly different pretty early on.

Great game that is progressing in a reasonable pace with no stupid blue balling or waiting until the release of the 20th edition to see scenes. The descriptions during the erotic scenes is very well done. Daughters are gorgeous, and I cannot wait for more action with then. The game contains 2 path, obediance and love/corruption route.

A rather enjoyable game with music that might not suit everyones taste in all scenarios, however it's rather enjoyable in my opinion

The pacing might not be everyones piece of pie, but I feel that the dialogue more than makes up for it. Hopefully it keeps up this pace in the future as well

The characters are quite well made, not necessarily the most personality I've seen in a characters in the past, but it's suitable enough for what it is, at least for the main characters.

Overall a good experience I look forward to seeing the future of
(Reviewed v.0.4)

It's good, folks. Renders are 10/10, no obnoxious body proportions (though it's creeping into that territory with some characters). Hopefully they don't introduce shitloads of characters and make a mess. As long as it gets updates it'll be great.

Awesome game! I love the dynamic between each of the characters as well as the future possibilities during the next update. Well done DEV! The gameplay is fairly simple yet complicated in regards to what specific outcome you want whether you want to be the rude demanding father or the very nice one. Great graphics and story definitely recommend!