- Jan 26, 2021
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Game is mediocre at best... started out as a literal copy of MNF and it's buggy as hell....
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- Nov 13, 2021
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Ah, yeah, probably a story mode problem. I recommend game mode anyway, though I don't play AVNs on my phone.
- Nov 13, 2021
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Confirmed. Story mode-romantic still has
if petralove >= 0: at line 3088 in romancescript.rpy (when unrenned, at least). Since story mode shouldn't have points, this fails. And since the "rude" elif is missing in the romantic script, there's a disjoint in the story. I've let Wetdreamwalker know in his Discord.Ok. I'm out. Absolutely no sense. Guy spends 16 years in federal prison, but can't defend himself (and his daughters) against 3 punks...1 who is a scrawny nobody, only 1 has a shiv, and likely all 3 impaired by some substance...so he takes a serious beating to.his abdomen (making an internal comment that he may end up with internal bleeding). And then is trying to think of how to actually follow "Brad's" orders. So after 16 years in prison, and in the good physical shape he is in, the MC is a giant pussy. AND THEN he goes to Petra's and decides to fuck her? Right after the serious beating he just took?
He doesn't go to the hospital, or go home, or get ANY sort of aid for the injuries, and doesn't even explain to Petra that he was beaten and probably shouldn't be fucking at the momwnt. He's just superman and after a 10 minute walk the beating isn't even important...but he couldn't defend himself from the beating in the first place.
Yeah. So much about this game is fucked up. The DEV has no creativity so started by trying to copy MNF (and day 1 is STILL basically a copy of MNF day 1), then to keep from being sued decided to give MNF credit, but turn this game into a random mix of pointless story, jumbled ideas, bouncing dialogue, and random erotic scenes with very little actual lewd/sex scenes (after 7 updates at least 3 of the girls should have been fucked). Just lurching from one scene to the next (all of which seem to be just thought up at the last minute and shoved in whenever they were thought up).
This is my third attempt at this game, and I have to say...Strike 3, your out.
He doesn't go to the hospital, or go home, or get ANY sort of aid for the injuries, and doesn't even explain to Petra that he was beaten and probably shouldn't be fucking at the momwnt. He's just superman and after a 10 minute walk the beating isn't even important...but he couldn't defend himself from the beating in the first place.
Yeah. So much about this game is fucked up. The DEV has no creativity so started by trying to copy MNF (and day 1 is STILL basically a copy of MNF day 1), then to keep from being sued decided to give MNF credit, but turn this game into a random mix of pointless story, jumbled ideas, bouncing dialogue, and random erotic scenes with very little actual lewd/sex scenes (after 7 updates at least 3 of the girls should have been fucked). Just lurching from one scene to the next (all of which seem to be just thought up at the last minute and shoved in whenever they were thought up).
This is my third attempt at this game, and I have to say...Strike 3, your out.
- Apr 11, 2019
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Right.. that scene with Brad and Chloe in the first meeting.. that shit has turned me so far off this story it's ridiculous.
The walkthrough literally told me to wait and watch that dude touch up and almost rape our daughter? Is this game fucking ridiculous? That's supposed to be the correct choice in that scenario? According to the walkthrough? or is the walkthrough seriously trying to tell me to get cucked?
Plus the comment just above this one is saying he gets beat up and basically submits to 3 loser teenagers? This is 100% a goddamn cuck scenario, are you for real? I can't even. I don't mind losing a fight but the MC basically becomes a massive pussy after it? I dunno if I wanna continue bro.
The walkthrough literally told me to wait and watch that dude touch up and almost rape our daughter? Is this game fucking ridiculous? That's supposed to be the correct choice in that scenario? According to the walkthrough? or is the walkthrough seriously trying to tell me to get cucked?
Plus the comment just above this one is saying he gets beat up and basically submits to 3 loser teenagers? This is 100% a goddamn cuck scenario, are you for real? I can't even. I don't mind losing a fight but the MC basically becomes a massive pussy after it? I dunno if I wanna continue bro.
- Jun 22, 2019
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the whole brad thing is dumb the first encounter was passable but the one with his 'friends' is dumb. also the thing about not killing him cause jail well the meeting happens at a warehouse abandoned.....
i didn't screw petra and yet it says i did hell i didn't even touch her i think but certainly didn't fuck her
i didn't screw petra and yet it says i did hell i didn't even touch her i think but certainly didn't fuck her
- Jun 12, 2017
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I noticed little errors within the game logic as well. Like when I didn't meet with Brad until he tried to force himself on the Asian chick, yet he speaks as if I met with when he was trying to have his way with Chloe for example. As for many of the other things that seem unrealistic I have to agree with those people as well.
The creator of this should do their best to work out these things seeing as that can be very off putting so some people.
But on another note while this game is "inspired" by the creator of My New Family I can totally see this game being vastly different than that game in many ways. For example I can tell this game is going to have consequences for dating all the girls at once vs My New Family where there are no consequences and at one point the main girl even pushes one of your sisters to be with you.
Yes, this game has become VASTLY different than MNF (in general story...although much of the dialogue is still quite similar), but the dialogue for day 1 is (still, considering at first it was even more so) almost a carbon copy of day 1 of MNF. The dev probably had to say it was inspired by MNF for legal reasons because he was stealing dialogue directly from K7's game and there was a big legal battle about it (the "inspired by" wasn't added till about the 3rd or 4th update). Unfortunately, in attempting to not copy MNF directly, this game has gone off the rails and has become a hodgepodge of randomly scattered, uncorelated, last minute scenes that only vaguely tie into one another...sometimes...without any real fluid story.
- Dec 5, 2017
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Agree that the Brad thing doesnt fit well in the story. I think the Dev wanted to introduce some conflict and didnt know how, so he went with an easy way.
Its kinid of the neighbour cop in another game. Easy ways to get some conflict but they screw the narrative and creates a mess in the story
Its kinid of the neighbour cop in another game. Easy ways to get some conflict but they screw the narrative and creates a mess in the story
- Aug 27, 2020
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Said no to work for Petra, and yet i still go there to work?
Maybe the dev need to make some changes..
Maybe the dev need to make some changes..
- Sep 3, 2021
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Speaking of three strikes; I think I read several pages back that the game is already on it's third writer. So that would explain a lot of the continuity issues.
- Sep 3, 2021
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Also agree. Why is it that conflict generation, most of the time, comes from a place of criminality? Especially in an erotic novel; I struggle to stay aroused when it's full of scenes with mafia, gangs, violence, etc...
Perhaps, but continuity was an issue right from the start so I doubt that the change in writers is the entire issue...in fact I am almost certain of it.
- Jan 10, 2022
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how much drugs you have to consume to give this game a 5 star rating in the reviews? this game is seriously the perfect example for not looking at that. the comments in this thread are way more accurate!
you nailed it! that was exactly what i was thinking about this game. it's a mess.
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Because people are blinded by the girls, but this is something that happens for many games.
Thanks for the update. Always appreciated!
Despite my comments I enjoy playing your VN and look forward to the next update. Thanks for your hard work.
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Despite my comments I enjoy playing your VN and look forward to the next update. Thanks for your hard work.
- Jun 17, 2021
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Because every single one of us plays adult games for the gripping plot right? That sweet character growth from chapter to chapter and occasional philosophical musings that makes us consider our life choices and strive to be better people.
Have you played/read many adult VN's/games or is this one the first? Cuz news flash, NONE OF THEM has a coherent plot or storyline that makes the least bit of sense. So singling out this game for a problem shared with literally every other game posted on here is beyond moronic.
Yeah...sure..."none of them"...except My New Family, My New Memories, Serenity, Parental Love, Picture Perfect, Powers That Be, and even Maou-Sama and Deadlocked in Time (the last 2 are a tad sketchy but still way better than 16 years later)...Just to name a small list.
If all we wanted was to fap, we have PornHub for that. We look for VNs just as much for the story and character growth as for the lewds...THATS THE POINT. Its called a visual NOVEL...not a "Here's a bunch of random lewd images to fap to"