VN - Ren'Py - Completed - 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Doc5252]

I'm not sure if I gained or lost braincells trying to comprehend this story, but it was impressive as hell. I have to give it 5 stars for the writing alone. Animations are a lot better than I expected so despite how messed up everything is I enjoyed it. I probably need therapy.

Funny and some hot girls. Most of the story is good, but the ending kind of sucked, like the dev just wanted to get this one over with to do more on the other games where he's had more experience with making renders/games. Still really good for a first one.

not a bad game.

graphics meh, not my taste.

strange ass story but still digestible i guess

overall a weird game, but not bad, not sure if i would ever replay but it was an experience to say the least.

I typically avoid writing reviews, but this game has been in my play library so long, I felt the need to do so.

At the start (early versions), Doc was still mastering the art of Chara crafting which has improved quite a lot over the years of development. Taking player suggestions and enhancing Tiffany and others really helped the game look better.

Mid-development, the huge cast of characters simply felt overwhelming, with more and more popping up every "day"... I lost count of whether or not MC eventually fulfilled his quest or not, due to the variety of daughters/dauneices, cousins, etc.

Playing to the ending, I feel like Doc kinda lost track as well, the way the game ends. I will not harp on that. I will simply say - it felt rushed, out of place, and confusing.

Note that I am not a weeb, so most of the meta hentai/manga terms and references are completely lost on me.

So it comes down to... should you play this game?

Well..?

• If you're seeking a wild and hilarious romp about drilling, filling, and inbreeding your sisters, daughters, cousins, etc, PLAY IT.
• If you love "normal" body types on petite women? PLAY IT.
• If you want something light-hearted to fap to? PLAY IT.
• If you're looking for a fulfilling, story-rich game, you may be disappointed.
• If you take things seriously, you will be disappointed.
• If you want hentai watermelon breasts and MILFY huge curves, look somewhere else.
• In short, it's funny, definitely hilarious if you're a WEEB and can let political satire wash over you. If you can't (like some other reviewers) then either ignore those discussions or don't play.

What I was hoping for when I played this final version:

• Better writing with spelling typos fixed (fail).
• Build-up to an ultimate MC player choice to help or challenge MC's father - either helping him conquer the universe/multiverse or stop him. That would have been better than the odd collection of random stuff we got. But it is what it is.
• Actually breeding 23 sisters (not sure if we even got to 20, much less 23).
• Better haircuts. The buzz-cut women just do nothing for me. Either bob, shaven, or half-shaven: total turn-off for me. But that's eye of the beholder stuff and I understand having long flowing hair in CG is a nightmare of clipping.
• Vaginal creampie dripping shots - there are about 3?
• Improved sex animations. As they are, it's pretty much a loop of one or the other character's body sliding up and down, side to side, while the other is more often than not an unmoving mannequin.

In general, it's a fun game if you just go along for the ride. If you're looking for story, it's nonexistent beyond "seek and inseminate".

Up until the lights started flashing different colors, I was in. Once that started, I was lost and confused.

Take this review as you wish. The game is fun, but lacking in the areas I have detailed above.

This game definitely doesn't take itself too seriously, but it was a lot of fun to click through. I'm giving it 5 stars for being completed (which unfortunately seems to be the exception) and being a lot of fun though immensely silly.

Not sure how to even rate this one, other than boring, the stale content, discount store graphics the projecting and the lame political injections made it unbearable. I give it one star because zero stars is not an option

review for version v1.0 Final

A complete mess, a super fun one tho.
not the best lookin game or the best writing, most things make fuck all sense, but still one of the best times i had with a game in a long time, weed helped.

creampie scenes which actually shows pussy not just text needs to be added.visuals can be better .story was kind of too much like really 23 sisters .so farfetched from reality .i know this is not real life but relevance to reality is what makes a story worth enjoying

This game went a little too off the rails for me.

i played this game since the first version and i actually liked the concept at first. a good prevy story, silly premis, that makes sense for the characters.

The problem is at a point it just got really random and strange. The name 23 sisters doesnt even make sense anymore, the half world including your mother (who didnt even get a full scene) are your sisters.

That ending was way too meta, felt basically like a dev's story went too out of control and just had a meta ending to finish it rather then abandon it (bad ending still better then abandon)

If the really random story is your thing maybe you will enjoy it.

(also completely unrelated to my opinions on the game, it always is nice to see a dev so active in the forum)

Normally prefer actual gameplay rather than kinetic with the occasional choice, but the writing on this is just too hilarious. I don't think I've gone more than 5 minutes or so without laughing out loud.

Design-wise, I could do without the amount of loli, but do like the amount of characters with smaller breasts; never was into huge ones, and ridiculously large seems to be 95% of the games out there.

Definitely recommend this one, even if you don't generally like kinetic novels. Do keep in mind that there are bad ends, some with their own scenes, others just a tiny bit of text. I recommend saving and trying the wrong choices just to see them.

The Game is funny Characters are hot, story is bullshit (good kinda bullshit) overall I really like this game but the animations and the sex scenes are not upto the standards, they are not bad but they feels rushed or feels like the developer put low efforts to the animations . About the sex scenes, I think the developer really needs to read Kamasutra or a book on 'How to sex' or something, because there needs to be some intimacy before having sex like kissing, hugging, cuddling and touching each other then the sex is complete otherwise it doesn't feels right. If the developer improves the animation and sex scenes I will give a 5/5

Story starts out pretty decent but it dosent take long untill it just goes crazy, MC gets a job to get hes 23 sisters pregnant which seems like a fun thing and it is to start with, but when pregnancy only last 7 days and kids born grow up in days as well to then also become pregnant you can see how fast you will lose track of whos who, so it becomes boring pretty fast due to never learning much about the girls and theres no real relationships with anyone, its just alot of girls standing in a que to get knocked up.

I do enjoy a good pregnancy game and yes this does have a shit ton of pregnant girls but it just becomes to much.

What supprised me is how the girls faces do look pretty unique to one another wich makes it a bit more fun as well and why i am not going lower then 3 stars.

The quality and the animations arent that good and 9 out of 10 sex scenes you dont see much since something is blocking the view of pussy and dick, there are a few nice ones atleast, and there is a ton of sex scenes as well which would explain the lack of quality a bit.

At first glance this game (or rather VN) seemed to me to be just another project in the wincest genre. But the further the plot developed, the more strange it seemed to me and gradually (on the episode with the twins) I stopped. So,
Pros: 1. cute models, although nothing particularly stand out against the background of other heroines from other games.
2. fast plot development.
3. Mediocre, but relatively tolerable graphics (2.5 points)
4. Music - as a background is good, but soon had to turn it off, began to annoy.
5. Content - a lot of it.
Cons:
1. And that's the main thing. Incredibly stupid plot. When it turned out that the full cycle of pregnancy thanks to some "god from the machine" instead of 9 months is 7 days, I was left with nothing but spreading my hands. Yes fantasy and SF are inherent in the tags, OK, but that doesn't negate the stupidity of the plot. Fantasy (since it's not SF) can be bad, mediocre, good. But it doesn't have to be dumb. I'm certainly not talking about all the female characters literally throwing themselves at the MC in packs, god with it, it's genre specific.
2. Graphics. We're currently in the end of 2023, yet I see 2017-18 level graphics in the game.
3. Humor tag. I found absolutely nothing funny in the stretch of the game that I played through. Perhaps the developer was making something funny, but what exactly - remains a mystery.
To summarize, I can say one thing. I would recommend it to porn lovers who don't care about the story.
For those who want to get at least minimally good story I recommend not to waste your time on this game.
I give it 2 points out of 5 (one point add for the cute faces of models).

that s game do not have free choice most of choice and most of whem go to game over if you try to follow you own path of choice an do not follow the forced choice you are put trough if you want a game with meaningful or real choice forget this one one of the worst game i have played

The animations, graphics and sex scenes aren't very good. What really drags this V/N down though is the writing.

You have to be cautious with V/Ns that have the humor tag as too many Devs mistake weird for humor and this is a prime example. There are some Devs out there who have mastered humorous writing but not here. Playing this is like watching a Tom Green movie, so unfunny it's painful.

Sometimes you can look past mediocre scenes with good writing but this just doesn't have it. If the Dev had played it a little more straight and didn't try so hard to overcompensate with what is presumably meant to be humor it might have had a chance.

Not one I would recommend.

The most humorous game/novel I've ever played/read...I laughed out loud numerous times . The dev has a witty/clever sense of humour (that at times can be subtle) so you need to use your brain or a few of the jokes can fly over your head. It can get a bit brutal at times as there are few lines the dev won't cross. I thought it was all in good fun but not everyone would feel that way in today's PC/snowflake/woke society. Speaking of, the game could do with making fun of wokesters more often...if you can't laugh at the stupidity/hypocrisy of woke people who can you laugh at?

I generally love the writing although I'm not sure why there are so many BJs when MC (not Mary Cate lol) still has sisters (not to mention daughters/mother) literally lying around his residence that haven't been 'serviced' yet as per his contract. It seems like there are too many available females because he doesn't seem to be in any hurry to get around to them. I guess dev dug himself a bit of a hole with how ridiculously short gestation and maturity are...things can get out of control exponentially fast.

Fortunately the writing is great because the sex scenes are a train wreck IMO. Everyone is jerking around in the animations and look unnatural/ganky. It isn't just the physics that are robotic...it doesn't seem like any of the characters would pass the Turing test. Dialogues are wooden and emotionally stunted. Unless they are improved dramatically I'd prefer the animations be dropped entirely as the current sex scenes aren't at all arousing to me. I'd also like to see some sexy women added to the game and not just lolis.

Even though I'm not a fan of the visuals the writing is just too awesome for me to give anything less than 5 stars. Epic!

Story's a total mess . Weirdly enough, nothing interesting happens and yet it moves forward at million miles per hour. It would take a herculean effort to read through the entire thing. All jokes have the same schtick. Characters are threadbare and even with their different backgrounds, there's nothing to differentiate the girls.
Renders are outdated though I liked the black girl. Not recommended.

Started out interesting with the whole impregnation/wincest/harem/polygamy stuff, but it was already going to be hard to keep interest with the whole the amount of sisters in the title. Of course then the creator changed to those 23 are only the official sisters and it ended up making it clear there was no limit at all making it both hard to keep track of characters, and uninteresting to keep track of them.

The writing in this game is so abysmal that it is just beyond being cringey. I understand that the Dev is trying to make a comedy but the jokes are as retarded as all the characters in this game. The girls look like pre-teens but they speak and behave like well worn hookers. The characters are bland and uninspiring. Also there are too many of them to care. The graphics are nothing to write home about. The animations are just bad.
If your sense of humor is a bit better developed than that of an average 13-years old, do not waste your time on this game.

I went in with low expectations, but the tags and family tree illustration made me want to give it a shot. I was entirely unprepared for the dialogue and world building. I didn't know I wanted this but I'm glad I got it. The setting feels like some fever dream between Shadowrun and Doctor Who and I am absolutely for it. I'd actually call this game a masterclass in not taking itself seriously, it is just so funny, and crazy and it works well with the insane premise. Truly the best piece of absurdist porn I've seen.

The biggest strength out of the way, I was also not expecting so much content. It's perfectly linear with little to no importance of player choice from the 3 hours or so I played so far—which I don't even think is half the game—but I don't consider that a real flaw. The game isn't presenting itself as a role-playing experience and is unapologeticy asserting itself over any misconception that the player is in control of anything, no, you are along for the ride.

The characters are entertaining and many bring a unique energy about them. So far none of them have felt like a recycled npc to pad out the game, but again I haven't finished it yet, and given the available playtime I don't think any sane person could in a day, though the game might help bend that sanity a bit. There are times where some dialogue from the characters has felt flat or generic, but these are sex scenes and are a minority I think, but still, there be porn dialogue in these waters. So far I've found just about every character I've encountered to have some charm to them that never felt overused. Often though on a characters introduction they all seem too willing, the game explains it but if you like a bit of cat and mouse there is absolutely none here. There isn't even any reservation from any of the women about fucking your daughters. It could have done with a bit more persuasion to give the girls some more backbone, but that is me taking an absurdist piece seriously.

The pace is at a really good balance for what it is. For all its length, it isn't any kind of slow burn. The time in between you're last fuck and the next is occupied by either narrative on your next, or some usually naked banter/absurd setting exposition, and the exposition is entirely unimportant, you miss nothing other than some hilarity for skipping past what little filler there is. The filler that is there feels warranted though, it breaks up what would otherwise be a PowerPoint presentation on the praxis of inbreeding.

Speaking of power point we move on to the weakest aspect of the game. It is at heart, a slide show. The sex scenes have animations, but the looping is terrible. It has felt like every animation was simply played, and then rewound to make a loop. The motions themselves also feel stiff with little variance or dynamics in a single scene. I can at least compliment that the models themselves are of good quality, and posed nicely during normal slides. There is no audio to speak of whatsoever, and given the animation quality this is probably for the best and a good decision, plenty of pieces like this are only spoiled by sub-par audio, and it feels more like a comic than anything else. It gives me the impression someone with writing experience tried their hand at 3d animation. If ever there was the funds for it, I'd love to see a remaster done by a commissioned 3d animator, the rest of the game stands on its own and carries what would otherwise be a mediocre porn slideshow. If each sex scene was more dynamic and had smoother animation with proper loops I could comfortably give it five stars.

Overall if you are looking to make a family web instead of tree, this is one of the few games that really accomplishes it without resorting to autogeneration or boiling descendants down to numbers instead of characters. The family tree is a confusing clusterfuck and you are there to make sure it doesn't get any simpler. The relation to a given character can get confusing and have you scratching your head over cousins and nieces and who is related to who, as any proper mass inbreeding should, its convoluted, messy, and very hot. It really is a treat to have some inbreeding that you can actually lose track of, not some streamlined system that is easy to understand.

If you want to fuck your granddaunieces and rail some potentially preteens you have finally found a decent execution of it that won't have you incarcerated ya sick fuck. 4/5 would inbreed again.