VN - Ren'Py - Completed - 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Doc5252]

This game could be a very entertaining, average pormn game but it sadly becomes very bad.

All the characters look very average none really ugly or hot but I don´t mind.

The sex scenes are okay not really good but still okay.

The story is the issue here. It should be very simple find and fuck your 23 sisters. In the beginning of he game everything was good but the longer the game game the stupider it gets so many side plots and none are interesting or well thought out, the main story just stops after a while, if the story wasn´t this bad it would be 3 stars but it ruins everything for me.

I genuinely think I have lost brain cells playing this game.
Or if you want to be correct - accelerated the loss of the brain cells.

The reason why it's not 1 star is simply that I respect the developer ingesting and injecting some serious drugs to make a story like this. Truly, a sacrifice.

Story:
0/5
Complete nonsense that tries to justify itself with more nonsense. It doesn't give you in slightest a breathing room. It doesn't make you care for a single character or get involved in a story.
One of the flaws is the fact that there's 23+ characters MC has to fuck. Too many characters is always bad.
Entire plotline could've actually been made into a well thought out story. Without the aid of a billionaire father, drugs, demons and shit.

Visuals
1/5:
Not really something outstanding. Characters look like your usual low tier DAZ goblins. With a bit of crackhead essence infused into them. Made really to satisfy general or niche demands.

Characters:
1/5
They sure are flavorful but at the same time, they feel like being splurted out of a factory. Very little backstory, very little development.
They exist to be basically walking vaginas that you fuck and nothing else.
Genuinely didn't give a shit about a single one.

If you like the games for coherent story and characters, I deeply advise to skip this one.

I think I lost IQ points from playing this. Stupid doesn't even cover it.

It is a little funny, and the girls are cute, but the scenes are crap(short, no detail), story is crap, so why play it? Better content in 5 min clip from free porn sites, with equivalent storytelling

When I first started playing this. I thought it was pretty damn good since I liked the story line. But some things have really started to bother me. From grant becoming to much of a focal point or the bad attempts at animations, the story being watered down with just random story tossed in. Plus all the over used jokes the keep repeating. The story is also a cross over with the game Extra Credit and leaves me questioning why these games are not one game or why Extra credit was even started as its a much worse game, making even less cense the this one.
This game was kinda fun at the beginning now its just annoying and seems to be written by a 12 year old. I liked where it could have gone but the focus is on weird shit and just has gone down hill. I looked forward to this game but not so much anymore.

Well, for some reason lately I'm playing A LOT of AVN's from that side of Alabama, if you know what I'm meaning. Not that I have a preference on this kind of content, to me, if a game is good enough to worth playing, I'll play. There's lines that I don't cross in relation to my porn (usually rape, blackmail, humiliation, netorare, revenge content, guro and vore). Taboos like incest are ok, if in a fictional context.

And well, since I played some of the top tier (on this forum) incest related games, I'm gonna have to try some of the others. And 23 sisters, for those who TL;DR this review: It's equally funny and annoying,

To all those others who want a explanation why...

*taps various parts of my own body*

THAT'S WHY!

Story/Plot excuse: You're an average Joe on a normal job, until some totally not suspicious guy arrives on your job and says that your father wants to talk with you. The old man is dying and gives you a job for 12 Billion Dollars: Impregnate all of your sisters. The guy have a incest fetish and have as much children as Mitsumasa Kido (only the people who READ Knighs of Zodiac will know that reference) and is rich as fuck. And then you, like a 10 year old kid who got his first pokémon, travels around the world on your mission to fuck'em all.

Points for the inane premise and certain creativity. Yep, lot of the plot points and later twists are for sake of convenience. The game doesn't take it self too much seriously, but some times... Can get a little annoying.

Writing: Writing is the two edged-sword of the novel, it's the strongest point, because of all of the absurdity on dialogues, but sometimes can get annoying as fuck, sounding juvenile. Yep, the jokes about canadians saying "sorry" are kinda funny, but it get's annoying when the joke is repeated almost 83 times in a space of five minutes. Same goes for some of the situations, that are more annoying than funny.

Sex/Graphics: The sex scenes leaves a little to be desired in terms of poses, duration. I know that is hard to make animations, not gonna be harsh on that, but leaves a little to be desired. At least he have some variety in girls, for everyone.

Sounds: I think the music part cames from Koga3's mod, so I'm not gonna put anything here. Not a fan of VN's without music, since in my opinion, music and sounds are very important to establish an atmosphere on your game.

Overall: 3/5, it's acceptable.

I won't write a full review yet as this is a work in development, but man, I hadn't laughed this hard in an adult game for a while

The visuals are not outstanding and the quality of animations are not the best you've seen, but daym, the story and the theme and the jokes carry this game far.

The premise and story are absolutely over the top stupid and ridiculous, but it is also fully self-aware and that makes it a rare visual novel. The dev knows exactly what they're doing and that's why the stereotypical jokes work here.

Good luck to the dev on finishing this game.

Great game. Fun story and plot. I do wish it had more interaction and choices instead of just telling the whole story. Also, some repeatable in game scenes would be nice instead of just replaying scenes from the gallery.

Ok so as you can see my rating for this is pretty low. So when I first played this game I enjoyed it immensely when it first came out along with the first few updates. I could deal with fast pregnancies and fast growth of the kids for the story sake. But then the later updates came. Aliens, angels, demons, half animal/half human, clones, grant being brought back to life in different bodies. It’s starting to get to be a little too much. Like the dev is trying to cater to almost every fetish out there in a single game. Which is not good. It becomes too convoluted along with too many different storylines taking place at the same time. There is simply way too much going on now. It simply focused on the sisters and the Mc then it would be good but too much is not always a good thing. I honestly think that this game needs to be renamed because it is no longer about the 23 sisters.

If famed movie director Uwe Boll ever made an adult VN 23 Sisters would probably be it.

The "story" is completely demented. It's about some guy whose father is a super genius billionaire who basically controls the entire world and even rules over some galactic federation. Said father is seemingly dying and on his death bed he meets his son and tells him he will inherit 12 billion dollars if the son (the MC) impregnates all 23 of his sisters. As it is the father has a huge incest and breeding fetish, but you probably already guessed that. And of course the MC agrees to the deal.

What follows is over the top wacky nonsense about impregnating all the sisters, plus unofficial sisters and a few other females along the way. The MC gathers all the sisters he encounters in a huge apartment building owned by his father who, after he dies, uploads his mind into some kind of android.

The girls in the story are not just humans, there are also angels, demons, (half) aliens, goat girls, cat girls, moth girls... and most of them look very underage....

Oh, since the MC's father is a genius he developed several drugs that make the MC irresistable to women who have a commonality with him (like a sister, for example), another drug makes sure the MC will impregnate any woman at basically the first try, and almost all the potential sisters were put on special fertility drugs (without their knowledge), these drugs also accelerate the pregnancy so it only lasts about two weeks, with each subsequent pregnancy developing even faster. And the drugs also make sure that all the children will always be girls so the MC can then go on and impregnate them as well.

The demon character gives birth two hours after impregnation btw. and her child is more or less grown up shortly after. Yup!
So of course the newborn daughters all have accelerated growth and are mature after a week or so (the demon girl is special) and yes, all of them want to be bred by the MC right out of the gate.
And yes, all of them live in one gigantic harem and all of them always walk around in the nude while at home, because the MCs "alpha" sister Tiffany wants it like that. And yes, Tiffany also has a huge incest fetish. But basically everyone in the harem has one. But Tiffany takes the cake. And yes, she's from Alabama. Ha ha...

The sheer madness is actually kind of impressive. Some of the over the top writing is even outright funny. There are a few laugh out loud moments in the game.

However, ultimately 23 Sisters suffers from mediocre renders, various not very attractive female characters and making so many of them look very underage (not my cup of tea at all).
Also, for the fact that 23 Sisters wants to be an over the top porn parody the sex scenes are just horrendous. The animations are short, very, very slowly paced (the movement is ultra slow) and there is zero variation in a scene.

Also, since there are so many sisters plus offspring you quickly forget who is supposed to be who, not that it matters, since almost all female characters only serve one purpose anyway and it really doesn't matter what girl is featured in any of the horrendous animations.

To be honest, I cannot recommend 23 Sisters to anyone who wants a VN to be at least somewhat plausible or expects decent production values.

If you like over the top wacky comedy and if you are ok with characters that are paper thin, and always wanted to have a game that goes to town with pregnancy and incest content then 23 Sisters is certainly enjoyable. However, the lousy adult scenes in this game are a major shortcoming. There is also surpringly little interaction between the various sisters / daughters / whatevers with or without the MC, there is some, but not nearly as much as someone may expect, given the ridiculous setting.

But if you like crass and silly humor and don't care about lousy animations, lousy characters, female DAZ models that look disturbingly young, and if your tolerance threshold for sheer madness is rather high then 23 Sisters can certainly be fun.
The jokes can be pretty good at times, but the interactions with the female characters are usually super boring, you will care for almost no one in this VN and there simply are too many characters that you completely lose track of after a short while because the game keeps throwing new characters at you like candy. And the MC has only met about 1/2 or so of his sisters so far with release 0.10.

Love the comedy, it's great, the story has enough subplots to keep the VN going for a long time, the characters are all bananas, like you can't take anything that happens seriously and that's why I like it, there's no deep emotional or dramatic storyline it's just fun, grant is one of my favourites, like the brain fart moments, hey I forgot to tell you this one thing or he comes along oh yeah there's also this thing I meant to mention to you, like dude! Get to the fucking point and put it all on the table!, Also no ntr or other guys but there is lesbian content in the harem

Anyway good luck doc, hope this continues for a while

(Just wanted to add, I've been meaning to sub you on subscriber but I've had a lot of patreon subs, so I've downgraded a lot of them and I'll sub next week, won't be much but I do like to support Devs that bring me in and make me have a good time)

the visuals could be better.. the animations could be a lot better, the story is absolutely bonkers and makes no sense at all... except it kinda does, but really not...it is not a good game by many possible standards...

but I don't care, because this is and remains hella entertaining.

Its a masterpiece, hilarious social commentary. Incredible dialogue and sexy babes. Not to mention loads and loads of family fun. There are supernatural elements and some of the things may be confusing but this is still one of the greatest visual novels yet devised.

Now the plot is reminiscent of the phenomenal vince vaughn movie where vince vaughn gives his semen to the semen bank and ends up having 500 kids. Except vince vaughn didnt have sex with them (he should have) well here you can do what vince should have done a long time ago.

I can only see this getting better with time for sure a game to watch out for, one for the ages one might say

update:
Sadly dev has decided to start making a new game instead of finishing this one. I had given this 5 stars but as it will likely be abandoned in near future i have to drop it to 3, its a funny game as it is but nothing ground breaking and never will be. SADLY

The game was written by someone who needs to touch grass. The animations are also horribly stiff and lifeless. The framework for something vaguely decent is there. I mean a game were your insane father is making you seduce and knock up siblings sounds fun, but after almost 3 hours of my time reading through it and looking at the animations, I felt pretty much as brain dead as the characters.

23 Sisters [v0.08b] [Doc5252]

1. Good quality of image/rendering is certainly a plus point
2. No value for nudity.
3. Poor emotions by the characters
4. 23 number of sisters (girls of same age group) are very abnormal and very fictional

I generally try to judge games for what they're TRYING to accomplish. Don't judge a fish by its tree climbing abilities, right? In the same sense, you don't judge a game like this against something like What a Legend. But even taking that into account, this game is pretty bad at what it's trying to be. The renders are all over the place, the "story" comes in and out of existence on a whim, and the sex scenes are short and terribly animated. For a game that's essentially meant to be a nukige (lots of sex, very little story) it's pretty bad at it.

Warning english is not my native language.
1) This game made me laugh countless time. Plot is little crazy but fun and simple.
2)Dev really working on this game. I remember times when girls were downright scary. Now models much better.
3) Lots incest and pregnancy content. Well for someone its plus. For someone its minus. Everyone has own fetishes.
4) This game has original idea. Really many games with just cloned story.
Like "Landlady" and such. This is not one of them.

P.S Its first game for which i wrote review. So i think game is good enough.

It's... It's not great. It's an absurd story that makes no sense, and the characters are really boring as well in my opinion.
I don't want to be mean to the developer, there is not that many developers that make games like this, so good work for him and thanks for creating it.

This game started off great, but quickly went off the rails into meaningless nude renders. No character depth, and the logic of the game world is just a complete mess. The developer's writing amounts to reminding you that you're playing a sex game, and here's some titties. Sometimes showing is better than telling, but in this case, I'd advise the opposite.

This is my 12-13 yr old dream come to life. When I was that age, I dreamt of having a "family harem" of "free use" females.
My dreams never met what this game delivers, though. 23+ and counting?!?!
And to have a dying dad that is funding it all?!?!? Holy Crap!
Admittedly this storyline is clearly a parody as it contains medical drugs not within reach of current technology.
But DAMN!!!! And to have nearly all of these girls not only willing, but EAGER?
If there is a heaven, PLEASE make it a version of '23 Sisters!!!'

I think of porn games as satire. They are all mockeries or reductions of whatever genres they contain. And that's fine! That's their purpose, to take a genre or theme and make it revolve around sex.

This game is a satire of a porn game. It takes all the tropes of porn, dials them up to 100, and then puts them all in the same game. It's ridiculous, and I don't think it works well here. There's a distinction between games that have comedy, and games that are pretty much nothing but comedy, with this one falling into the latter category.

You can have too much of a good thing. Without other balancing elements, hyper-fixating on one theme can dull it. That's what happens with the humor here. There's no emotional depth, no sincerity, no tension to counterbalance the funny bits, which really saps them of their effectiveness. Likewise with the sex scenes, I'm aware that this isn't supposed to be a slow burn or anything like that, but that doesn't mean you have to go "WAM BAM they fuck, now onto the next girl."

I'm not sure if the "story" here could be told in a better way. Even as far as porn games go, "you have 23 sisters that you need to impregnate to get your inheritance of BILLIONS of dollars" is pretty out there. My first instinct would be to suggest adding some mystery or build-up, but I'm not a writer, and I'm specifically not the writer of this game. I don't know what the dev has planned in their head, and maybe the finished product will be something rather different than what we have now.