VN Ren'Py A Better Life [Ep.1] [Mr. VNA]

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Overview: "A Better Life" is the story of a once popular video game streamer and how his life changes after meeting a girl named Skylar.​

Thread Updated: 2025-06-11
Release Date: 2025-06-11
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Version: Episode 1
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Language: English
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[Bob69]

MrVNA Congratulations on your first release! Good luck!
You can build the Renpy "PC" version instead of Win and Linux separately to save some upload time for you and us.
Also you might want to optimize your images: A QUICK GUIDE TO COMPRESSING IMAGES.

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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[rKnight]

That awkward moment when you stood on the side of the road and got splashed by a car who drove in a muddy puddle. lol

THX for sharing...

 

[Lerd0]

...thx for teh share....good luck...

That awkward moment when you stood on the side of the road and got splashed by a car who drove in a muddy puddle. lol

THX for sharing...

...will lick her clean....

 

[JennaJJ]

"A Better Life" is the story of a once popular video game streamer and how his life changes after meeting a girl named Skylar.

... Thx 4 the share ...

 

[Ragnar]

How is she full of shit but her shirt is pristine white? That's not how beggars work

 

[Niuul]

How is she full of shit but her shirt is pristine white? That's not how beggars work


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although I guess it would be more off-white if there was that much on it

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

"A Better Life" is the story of a once popular video game streamer and how his life changes after meeting a girl named Skylar.

Welcome and THX-

 

[MrVNA]

How is she full of shit but her shirt is pristine white? That's not how beggars work

Because that was the 2nd image I made and didn't understand how textures really work. Still can't find a dirty shirt texture but I'll keep learning.

 

[MrVNA]

...thx for teh share....good luck...

...will lick her clean....
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I appreciate this right here lol


Thanks for the tips. Going to implement this into episode 2 for sure.

 

[korochan48]

Really red text in a black background. It is much worse than I thought its not only red. Just make the dialogue text white its not racist.

 

[MrVNA]

Really red text in a black background. It is much worse than I thought its not only red. Just make the dialogue text white its not racist.

Will remember this for episode 2. Thanks.

 

[TsubameYui]

Will remember this for episode 2. Thanks.

Best text for easy readability is white text with a 2-pixel wide black border. Can be read easily against any color and brightness. Eliminates the need for a textbox. I use URM to play all VNs with that configuration, but it's always a big bonus when it's already made that way.

 

[mordred93]

Really red text in a black background. It is much worse than I thought its not only red. Just make the dialogue text white its not racist.

Huh? It is not hard to read (and I am color blind).

Otherwise dev. Good first release. I wish you well in your path.

 

[Elgranfandelharem]

Harem?

 

[MrVNA]

Yes. There will definitely be a harem.

 

[Tanurak]

Ok dev really need to work on facial expressions. There are way too many open mouths in this game when they don't need to be and feels uncanny af.

 

[MrVNA]

Okay, good notes.So when you say work on facial expressions, what do you mean exactly? Are they too exaggerated, or do they not look good enough? I'm asking because I was using some facial expression presets and i want to make sure I get the facial expressions right because I want the players to be able to connect with the characters. Could you give me an example of an image of one of the characters that came off as uncanny? Feel free to shoot me a message about it because I don't want to start double in triple posting.