HTML A Boring Life? [v0.1] [Lolboy101]

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Overview:
You're a regular guy down on his luck in a world where a gender changing pill exist. This game has really no grinding and is more choice based. With many different routes.​

Thread Updated: 2024-06-22
Release Date:2024-06-20
Developer: Lolboy101
Censored: No
Version: 0.1
Language: English
Other Games: A Regular Life
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Laughingfox

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Huh. I'll be damned. A html game with gender bending where the MC isn't immediately turned into a spineless cumrag. Kind of refreshing to have the protagonist enjoy the journey with a bit of friendly support.

As to the bull path, well, it's alright. Game shifts from the protagonist dealing with his issues to banging all the things right quick and in a hurry, but there isn't anything terribly wrong with that.

The mix of real images and cartoonish AI is a bit odd, though the Abella Danger style images seem a bit less uncanny.

Suggestion wise, there is this line in the story though, on the manly guy doing manly things path:

You hesitate for a moment, weighing your options in your head. Do you encourage him to make a change, or do you try to convince him to stick it out? Maybe something will change for him if he does.

The last sentence should probably be altered or outright nuked. It just feels awkward, partially from using the word change twice over, but it gets a little confusing as to which of the options would be promoting something different.

Quick and lazy rewrite suggestion:

You hesitate for a moment, weighing potential suggestions in your head. Would it be better to encourage him to make a big change, embracing new possibilities, or should you try to convince him to stick it out for a while longer, relying on everything he's built up so far?

Something like that.

Best of luck, Dev!
 
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Two main comments after trying it
1) get rid of the gifs and convert them to video's, they take up way more room and don't look as good.
2) Right now I wouldn't really call it a game, as there is almost no choices, it is more of a visual novel where you just click from scene to scene. I think it needs more choices than it has now and maybe add in side effects from taking to many pills to often etc.
 
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Greeedium

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I dont really like VN's (personal preference), but i find that the games in quite a good state for a 0.1, would like to see more "Game" aspects tho.
Also your CSS dosn't work with a 9/16 Apect ratio's atleast at 1080p.
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Oliz82

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Hello.

The summary made me come. And the result is good.

The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is interesting.
The photos/videos are well chosen.

After meeting a woman at a bar, the protagonist has his life taken upside down.
The flow of events is correct, maybe a little too quick sometimes. There was a good diversity already.
The characters are lovely, special mention to the roomate Alex and Keisha. The MC has also a nice personality.
The artistic side is well done. The images and gifs are well chosen. The sex scenes are appealing. The default sound is maybe too loud.

Overall, I had a good time playing. My only problem was that it was confusing whether we were a man or a woman when taking the pills (we go to sleep as a woman and wake up a man 1719201197486.png and you altern masculine and feminine images). Also, don't use the same images/gifs for different characters since it makes us wonder if they are different people. I could also ask for more variety for the same action/situation but it's me actually nitpicking (I would prefer but it's not that important).

The english could be better. Some sentences feels abrupt.

Here we are supposed to reply but nothing change :
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There are other instances where we don't really see what is written. So be careful.

A default name would be appreciated (as a woman too).

Good continuation.
 
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