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The dev is doing an amazing job when we talk about script. He made guys who are not a cuckolding fan enjoy the game. It's a brillant job. But the real problem for ntr games is the middlegme, not the beginning. I'm afraid the game is getting too plastered: 1 - bringing back some stereotypes: Big Cock is a point, BBC is NOT a point, but just a simple way to get to the goal; 2 - For themes like cuckolding Is always good relieve the tension a little bit. I'm not talking about doing an update where nothing happens and they put the fetish in standby. I'm telling that where you (player) is at the middle of the main "antagonist" (darrel) storyline, you should be start to build a new storyline. Example: In the same week that nat and darrel make sex (last update), another event should already to be triggered for the next update. illustrating: jenna invites the mc to a party in jenna's house. In jenna's the main couple meet some pornstars and well... instead of the focus be darrel again, in this update they could... drink, choose one guy and end the night in bed with one pornstar. Would still pave the way for jenna to induce nat into pornography and for nat to feel comfortable with her mate lusting other girls, they can change numbers etc. At here, two ways: In the paths that nat remains submissive to ethan, keep they in a more romantic way, while in the paths where she turned more independent, she will be more indifferent to ethan validation.
And finally, finish the update with something new to the second next, a message by darrel, but i'd say focusing too much on him would shorten the game's lifespan. As jenna said "darrel is my favorite", but not the only one. Nat will discover that she can decide whether or not to stay in love with Ethan, but for now, Darrel is just a toyboy that she or she and ethan will use when they want. So, darrel create a Messenger group and invite etan/nat to go for a top hotel next weeknd(2nd update) and next update ends with the couple watch cuck porn together.
Again: This isn't destructive criticism, it's just advice and some ideas. I'm these guys who loves a good plot/script. I'm anticipating a possible problem that I think is pretty close to being evident and has enough power to lower the game's rating.
