VN - Ren'Py - A Deceitful Act [Short Stories v2.0] [Mr.Axxx]

OK the history of the game is not great but it remains a personal opinion.

The graphics are ok, typical, but nothing exceptional.

The game itself is very, too short.

There is a problem with the characters' breasts.

More exactly with breast separation.

I imagine that it is to have a better rendering dressed .. but once naked (and it is often the case) the rendering is bad.

[Ep. 2 v2.0]

I was tempted to bump it to 2 stars just for that model of the girlfriend. I haven't seen this model before and it's pretty gorgeous.

But no... just no. This is some of the worst writing I've ever seen, and we can't even attribute it to Engrish or bad grammar. Seriously, nothing makes sense in this VN. It's just a collection of absolutely random happenings with pretty much zero thought put into the script. The writing is so aimless and ridiculous that I can't even figure out how to explain it.

There is some honesty in this game: It is only about getting laid without further ado, logic and sense.
Probably a pure fantasy far from any real situation. This shows quite a good sense of humour and makes me smile because this kind of sexual fantasies one can probably find in every man that has not lost his boyish mind. Therefore I am eager to know how this will continue...
Even if I am not a native English-speaker I would recommend to work on the language, the rest is just fine.

This is my first rating as I've only recently decided to get involved with the community. The models/renders are nice, though the breasts and penis are a tad disproportionate. Coming from games that require consideration and offer multiple choice, your desires are easily obtained sex in this game. I had sexual encounters with two women within the first few minutes of game-play. It's a linear story with no challenge. I'm sure the game will appeal to a lot of members on this site, but I'm not included. The only choice in the game is at the start, do you want to help your voluptuous childhood friend or not? The consequences aren't that severe:

I'm not a person to write those review but just writing since the evaluation is pretty low for such a decent game.

As my personal preference, I would rather chose less chat than actions thus, this game address direct action with a decent renders

The game makes zero sense and there is no story or flow to the game random women show up to the door and you fuck em the end.

There is no buildup suspense or nothing. The renders are decent but the proportions are just off enough you can't fap to them.

Also when you don't enter a name it names you Axxx. Really?

So at 0.1.1 this is very early, but it really has potential to be a fun porno romp.
Guy is insanely hung, and two insanely busty women pull a scheme to get him to to fuck them to oblivion.
It is not deep or nuanced, and that's FINE. This is super humans fucking, and I'm all for it.
The language is fine, no typos or engrish, and despite the over-the-top scenario the characters come off as beleiveable.
Really looking forward to more updates.