So, going through the game and looking at graphics and stuff and have some hopefully constructive criticism.
I wish Sydney and Lauren felt/looked a little more different for variety's sake. As it is I just think of them as Sis1 and Sis2. I'm assuming the Dev does have a separate personality in mind but it feels a little too subtle. I think there needs to be more. (and perhaps we will get that with Sydney working at the club)
Another thing is the Mom. I like her a lot more conceptually (teacher, reserved with a wild past, ect.) than I do visually (those bags under her eyes have to go. Her eyes are a bit TOO big, and her cheekbones feel a little too severe.) The body is perfect though. Maybe a little too perfect because her face shows some miles her body doesn't. I'd ratchet down the age on her face and maybe give her a little more belly. Not too much more. Just enough to show that shes a little older than a taut 18 year old.
Diz(?) the FBI agent looks fugly as hell though. Her chin is way too pointed and she looks like a christmas elf. I just click through any scene with her because it just doesnt interest me. I think a change to appearance would change that.
A change of appearance with the Mom would be too daunting to retroactively fix older scenes. Perhaps she at some point gets some cosmetic work done to explain the changes...or maybe just fudge it by saying she wears different make-up or something.
And I kind of think the MC is a little too child-like. Even an older teen would have a more developed body structure...but I don't care about that as much. I mean who looks at the MC? At least he doesnt look like a shaved monkey (lookin at you Flirty Family
)
I'm really looking forward to the rest of this game and even if none of the ideas I've mentioned go into effect I think it's a pretty good beginning.
I wish Sydney and Lauren felt/looked a little more different for variety's sake. As it is I just think of them as Sis1 and Sis2. I'm assuming the Dev does have a separate personality in mind but it feels a little too subtle. I think there needs to be more. (and perhaps we will get that with Sydney working at the club)
Another thing is the Mom. I like her a lot more conceptually (teacher, reserved with a wild past, ect.) than I do visually (those bags under her eyes have to go. Her eyes are a bit TOO big, and her cheekbones feel a little too severe.) The body is perfect though. Maybe a little too perfect because her face shows some miles her body doesn't. I'd ratchet down the age on her face and maybe give her a little more belly. Not too much more. Just enough to show that shes a little older than a taut 18 year old.
Diz(?) the FBI agent looks fugly as hell though. Her chin is way too pointed and she looks like a christmas elf. I just click through any scene with her because it just doesnt interest me. I think a change to appearance would change that.
A change of appearance with the Mom would be too daunting to retroactively fix older scenes. Perhaps she at some point gets some cosmetic work done to explain the changes...or maybe just fudge it by saying she wears different make-up or something.
And I kind of think the MC is a little too child-like. Even an older teen would have a more developed body structure...but I don't care about that as much. I mean who looks at the MC? At least he doesnt look like a shaved monkey (lookin at you Flirty Family
)I'm really looking forward to the rest of this game and even if none of the ideas I've mentioned go into effect I think it's a pretty good beginning.
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