- Jan 22, 2020
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This was pretty cool. I'll admit the opening 5-10mins felt kinda ropey as it was a bit all over the place, but once it settled into the rhythm of the home life with the girls it was great. Only other complaint is that the MC is a totally Gary Sue, but that's often the deal with the power fantasy types so it's forgivable. The girls are varied and likeable, oddly enough Aurora became my favourite I think but I presume anything with her is a long way off as we're already 2 years in and I get the feeling she'd be the last to sign up for a harem. But overall I really enjoyed reading through, not many choices, but the setup and writing were interesting enough that I was invested throughout anyway.