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I don't know, but geez it sounds painful. :oops:
His engrish might be bad, but i agree with that guy.

We NEED to impregnate every. single. one. of these aliens!
For science! For love! For 'Merica! For Satan! And because its hot!

You hear that
HighbornTiger?

Numerous pervy idiots have cried out for impregnation. It is vital to the game's integrity!
 

Adhdclassic

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This is one of the few AVNs I really like sex is understandable as part of the story but the story itself if they progress a little better can hold its own. The thing I find amusing is the MC is dry as the Sahara his dialogue lacks any type of personality. When I read his dialogue I picture the guy from Ferris Bueller talking. Bueller Bueller. The fire chick is a walking billboard for depression. Out of all the characters the only one that seems decent is the female agent. Fox chick now wants to be jealous ass spent most of the VN as a animal. Brain chick walking around with that bitch please attitude. All I am going to say to liven these people up DEV...Give them Weed please :LOL: P.S. Give invisible chick some Aveeno just because you can't be seen doesn't mean you stop skincare.
 

NoiVul

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I kind of agree, but as a counterpoint, I think each character does have a real personality, with a passable amount of depth. The dialogue's stilted nature is partially explained by their very sheltered life. The MC's personality is definitely the weakest, both in terms of dialogue strength and character strength. He needs to grow into his role a bit more.

I like how much attention is given to the characters talking to each other about the harem. Its nice to finally read something where the women are happy and calm in their situation, and some time is given for the scenario to feel plausible.

Some noticeable weak points are, the blind chick would definitely want to be touched more, since she can't see. Amber's insecurity about her race is a really neat story hook that I haven't seen before, but she's supposed to be smart, so it makes no sense that she's can't immediately decipher the simpleton MC. Sally still looks like an alien, although Megan looks better now.

Strong points:
Sue's nymphomania
Lucy's submissiveness
Esther in general, I hope she gets focused next update

I hope we get more non-animated lewd stuff. This update in particular would have still felt complete, or at least pretty good, without the animations.
 

Canto Forte

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The notable disastrous effects of lonesomeness and of relying on tech for a major part of the life decisions: MC is essentially devoted to his personal sinth girlfriend, confident, ally, savior, logistics genious and all around sweet android wholesome honey, the girls who know MC from before are realistically stuck with him being a young guy in their mind, so them wrapping their minds around a grown up, battle hardened MC of today, when they rely heavily on their nostalgia to get through the gruesome and desensitized reality of a post apocalypse -on the run- life style, all of their short comings in character development when it comes to putting their needs first as opposed to being a little more insensitive themselves just as a cope machanism - sometimes works wonders.
Some noticeable weak points are, the blind chick would definitely want to be touched more, since she can't see. Amber's insecurity about her race is a really neat story hook that I haven't seen before, but she's supposed to be smart, so it makes no sense that she's can't immediately decipher the simpleton MC
MC is twarted by the overthinking sweet honeys he ends up harboring, his overpowered overly-simpathetic goodness incarnate android sweetheart and the total devotion it takes for him to give to each and every girl near and dear to him, but also their surrender to him completely - there have to be friction and hold-ups left on the editing room floor and in their minds, just to make all of these complex yet heartfelt and life-and-death relationships work.
 
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Allan Trumbull

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Why there is no character points like love , lust and mc's stats like health , energy etc ?? Choices are very rare too. Disappointing....
 

Elduriel

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Why there is no character points like love , lust and mc's stats like health , energy etc ?? Choices are very rare too. Disappointing....
point systems are usually useless anyway, oh no you're missing one point so you're locked out of a scene even though you're on that LIs route, sucks to be you. Or the other end of the spectrum where you can farm points and they do nothing. Not like anyone with half a brain couldn't fix it with URM. You can decide on the important stuff like do I want to be with a certain LI, and that's enough. And don't even bring up a stat system with health and the like, this ain't that sort of game with sandbox and shit.
 

Adhdclassic

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I kind of agree, but as a counterpoint, I think each character does have a real personality, with a passable amount of depth. The dialogue's stilted nature is partially explained by their very sheltered life. The MC's personality is definitely the weakest, both in terms of dialogue strength and character strength. He needs to grow into his role a bit more.

I like how much attention is given to the characters talking to each other about the harem. Its nice to finally read something where the women are happy and calm in their situation, and some time is given for the scenario to feel plausible.

Some noticeable weak points are, the blind chick would definitely want to be touched more, since she can't see. Amber's insecurity about her race is a really neat story hook that I haven't seen before, but she's supposed to be smart, so it makes no sense that she's can't immediately decipher the simpleton MC. Sally still looks like an alien, although Megan looks better now.

Strong points:
Sue's nymphomania
Lucy's submissiveness
Esther in general, I hope she gets focused next update

I hope we get more non-animated lewd stuff. This update in particular would have still felt complete, or at least pretty good, without the animations.
I forgot about Esther damn, yeah she needs more shine. Shes became the invisible girl.
 
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Scyths

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This is one of the few AVNs I really like sex is understandable as part of the story but the story itself if they progress a little better can hold its own. The thing I find amusing is the MC is dry as the Sahara his dialogue lacks any type of personality. When I read his dialogue I picture the guy from Ferris Bueller talking. Bueller Bueller. The fire chick is a walking billboard for depression. Out of all the characters the only one that seems decent is the female agent. Fox chick now wants to be jealous ass spent most of the VN as a animal. Brain chick walking around with that bitch please attitude. All I am going to say to liven these people up DEV...Give them Weed please :LOL: P.S. Give invisible chick some Aveeno just because you can't be seen doesn't mean you stop skincare.
Personally I genuinely like the main character's personality, or like thereof from your point of view. He's a special operations guy, covert and stoic, and while I've never been in the military, I've seen enough and read enough to know that people that kill a lot of people "legally" tend to either go nuts or be like this, with few emotions showing on their face. That's why it never bothered me that the main character was like this, on the contrary I appreciate it because he is smart and doesn't waste time or words to get the message across.

And the girl's personalities also make complete sense when you know their background. Like they were raised as basically cattle and sex slaves/breeding mares, so it's perfectly understandable that the "fire chick" is depressed as fuck because she was the only one strong enough to somewhat resist yet wasn't fully able to, hence her frustration I guess. The others' also make sense. The agent's the most cheerful one because she's the one who has lived the most comfortable life so far, never knowing any real conflict or bad situation. At least that's how I see it which is why it doesn't bother me one bit, as to how the author portrays it and sees it, you'll have to ask them.
 

Naps-On-Dirt

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I hope Sue gets an additional onramp to her path. I turned her down in the beginning of the story because she was being pushy and it seemed too soon (as she was the token First Sex Scene that AVN players seem to demand as soon as possible). But now that MC is starting to get involved with them, she should get another chance.

Its funny that I own this and other AVNs on Steam but I come here to leave feedback for or get tech support from the devs. :LOL:
 
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