VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Hero Journey: The Kindling [Ep. 2 Pt. 1 Bugfix #2] [JDoodle Stories]

[voyeurkind]

...basically just a comic book with the choices affecting which dame is gonna be looking at your dick as ya sleep..lol..but..it looks nice..lol

Yeah, I don't hate it or anything, but it's not my idea of a game either. There's little interaction or choices to make, and it's a shame too, because I think the game's concept has legs. An MHA paraody sounds like a good idea to me, but it's something I'd want to play, not read.

 

[Carrera]

That kinda looks like a botched c-section scar and it's creeping me out.

Now I can't look away,,,

 

[meigame]

really liked this one. good art. hot girls working on a big dick. fun times. doesn't drag, no grind. good time

 

[_Gutts_]

Nice Arts

 

[Nialel]

Excellent art and ambience. The small details in the backgrounds are always well-received.

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

ok..played..its nice bright stylized renders with big plump booty's big puffy nipple titties..and abs...it was an ok sex romp but i do not really see a long shelf life for this as basically just dream of and peek on one of the dames eventually she shows up in your room and shower fooling around all nakies and such...plus eventually the rest seem to start giving ya bj's also...so there is zero conflict..zero need to actually do anything other than click away and watch the scenes unfold...basically just a comic book with the choices affecting which dame is gonna be looking at your dick as ya sleep..lol..but..it looks nice..lol

So basically its like many of the other visual novels on this site.

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

The art is okish, its nice in some places but others, the clothing on the figure look weird.

 

[nluffy]

very hot not too much content yet but very nice art work and a story line that doesn't fuck you around

 

[JerichoZ]

is there any nudity or Sex scene in the first 1st episode any boobs

 

[fanboi]

is there any nudity or Sex scene in the first 1st episode any boobs

Yes, yes, and yes

 

[Black_Bolt]

The overview though..... Am I reading the story of My Hero Academia?

 

[markus T]

Love the art

 

[Mondoblasto]

I personally find the lips a lil' too exaggerated, and as mentioned the girl's butt in that one 'shot looks weird. As noted, too much repetition in the description.

 

[doesitreallymatterdude]

Really great start! Love the art, the story, pacing, everything. I hope this one keeps going strong and doesn't fizzle after a couple of updates.

 

[HairyUncle]

This game is basically "My Hero Academia" + Sexytime

and...

 

[zombine345]

Main protagonist looks like Elliot Rodger

 

[alpella]

wow awesome drawing. I wonder how does the footjob looks like

 

[Edvin]

Pros
+ Original and good looking art style
+ Mind control (every game is better with little bit mind control)

Cons
- Enormous lips on every character
- Non-original story
- Minimum decision
- Linear story
- Short

If the author learns from the mistakes he makes, future episodes can be really good.

 

[Brontanius]

Simultaniously love and hate you. Love you because this game is great, the art style is great and it is very enticing. I hate you because it ends at such a cliffhanger, the moment i am about to get what i want, nope thats the end folks

 

[Vegasyy]

MASTERPIECE! I really feel that this game has potential, just some more little upgrade and it could be one of my favourite!