Thanks for pointing out the typos, will fix ASAP!* What do you know, an actual game, made by someone who speaks English. Next thing you know we'll have flying pigs and sno-cones in hell.
* I've never liked option buttons where there's a single option. Why not just play it out in the dialogue?
* 'Grap here head and go to town'?
* I'm assuming 'cracks', not 'craks'.
* It would be nice if there was a quick jump menu to take you to locations you've been before
* This dream puzzle is starting to get annoying, but not in a bad way.
* 'Voices divolve into a cacophony'
Okay, I couldn't get through the dream sequence, but that's okay. Outside of some minor quibbles and typos, I think this is quite good, and I'll be very interested in seeing more.
As for the single-option menus, which ones exactly do you mean? I did cut bits of dialogue here and there, so there might be some dangling choices left.
As for the dream sequence, it should become much easier after the third try, there is a tiny bit of stat progression there, but for now it's hidden and the puzzle itself is asking for the rework anyway.