Some thoughts after 2nd play in a week:
1) very good interaction. I basically finish most in the 1st play by just walking around and talking others. No much need for guidance or hints except near the end when quests nearly run out.
2) everyone is nice, but rae is too good for me to really care much about others. Their stories are all cool, especially when rae comes in.
3) MC is now basically a driver in the walk. Someone wants to do something, see someone, buy something, and they come to MC. However, MC should also be much impressed by the others world where magic works. He might also want to do something here for himself, like studies something in the university of magic, and maybe also need something back in earth, instead of just drive peoples there upon their requests.
4) When buying glass for cait, she is so happy about the receipt, holding it tightly in her hands. Yet after the walk, The receipt is nowhere to be seen, and everyone seems to forget all about it. Shouldn't it be the first thing cait check after the walk?
5) Not sure if intended, but when Irinel uses rae's favorite word "dear", I feel a bit off.
6) after cait's revealing magic, maybe she should be more cautious and hesitating about studying magic with rae? After all she is nervous about everything and she knows rae is extremely naughty.
7) I know MC is not meant to be a scientists or something, but more talking about technology against magic should be fun. For example, seeing the magic lifting the book, he might want to ask if one could design a perpetual machine with it?
And explaining phones to rae, its hopeless to start with waves etc. Maybe: we have a device that emits a sequence of small lightings upon hearing some sound, for example, lighting blank lighting lighting for sound "a", lighting blank blank lighting for sound "b". Then another device could see this lighting far away, and emit sounds accordingly. Of course we don't actually use lighting, we use something similar, but could transmit through walls, and these devices might not actually see each other directly but through some relay, etc.
8) CAIT, at the age of 18, without any proper training in physics, could read M theory. That is truly...... I mean most wouldn't even know quantum mechanics at that age. Even if it is something magical, MC should be shocked.
9) A pity that rae could only paint the MC. Cait in her new dress would be great, lyriel might not like to idea but the result would be even better. Yono would oblige, but I am not sure how good the painting will be. I also wonder what else did rae learn, maybe music and dancing?
10) rae explains to lyriel that everything they take would either disappear or return to the house when the walk ends. Yet they buy with money and rae even pawn her armlet?
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