VN Ren'Py A.L.I History [Ch.5] [Bychipi]

[YogSothoth1982]

Bro, stop living in your fantasies. Since you've already accepted that this is a story full of plunder and corruption, don't treat it like some beautiful, romantic harem tale.
At the beginning, Kira had feelings for a male college classmate, but she was still successfully seduced by the protagonist. (Not all the love interests are already taken,but the current plot focuses more on Netori.)
Plundering and corrupting women from others takes time and process.
You're here constantly complaining about this and that, yet you still want to see how the developer continues the story—even if it's not the kind you like. If I were the developer, I'd be annoyed by this kind of persistent whining. Complaining once is enough, right?

If you can read, you'll have seen that she brought her potential future boyfriend along just to see the protagonist's reaction, because she'd already decided before the party that she wasn't interested. I don't see what the MC has done with Kira as corrupting her; his intentions toward her seem more romantic than trying to corrupt her into a sex toy. On the other hand, Monica hasn't been corrupted; she was already in love with the protagonist and still is, so there's not much left to corrupt. And, in my opinion, Maria doesn't need any help to be corrupted. The only one he's corrupted, and very quickly, is Azumi. But now he wants her to be part of his harem (he doesn't want her to be a sex toy; he wants her to be what he calls one of his girls), so he's decided to show her that he cares. Therefore, his intention now is to try to seduce her to start something more romantic with her. If you don't like this change in the protagonist's intentions, well, that doesn't change the fact that it's his intention.

Anyway, I'm going to continue here. Take it or leave it.

EDIT:

In any case, I have no interest in continuing this discussion.

 

[mumudef4]

I'm going to continue here.

Then go ahead and keep complaining. I'll add you to my ignore list. You've already posted countless complaint threads about this game. Don't be a jerk—don't ruin it and turn it into an abandoned project. Try living a bit more positively.

 

[Urk]

If you played up to chapter 3, you'll like the following chapters about Azumy, including chapter 6, which I'll be doing this month.

What? this month? Good!
BTW, this is the first time ever i've liked an Asian girl or that i have found them to be beautiful, certainty in game, while in RL there is more nunace to that, still i found myself thinking "is this what all the guys who are obsessed with asian girls feel like? lol. I liked it. I must i start to warm up to her "late" only after it was decided she would be part of the house, and i really took a nice look at her...

You did really good with Azumi, Kira is beautiful too, the type i usually like, as well as Monica. Both in bodies and personalities, Monica being more of the typical "harem" Li protag, and Kira the one you have to conquer, as well as Azumi and i really like that dynamic.

Wow for being a "long" game i've finished it quickly since its the only thing i've played fresh, from chapter 1, for a couple of days. Feels like an old school VN from 10 years ago, but in a good way, with proper chars and a lot of dialogue and that "realistic" vibe i feel from those type of games, even if i prefer harem and i wished i could've said "no" to Maria, at least the second time, it did not feel NTR to me, i didn't like it, but i barely felt the repulsive feeling of NTR i would feel from an NTR game, and that's because the ideology of the MC is properly developed, so i understand that its "in character" for him to just fuck her lol. And you as the MC have YOUR girls while Maria serves to develop the world not seeing as a real LI.
The only people that lose are those who are into Maria i guess.

This is a good VN, props!

So its chapter 6 really coming in January? end of?

 

[Bychipi]

What? this month? Good!
BTW, this is the first time ever i've liked an Asian girl or that i have found them to be beautiful, certainty in game, while in RL there is more nunace to that, still i found myself thinking "is this what all the guys who are obsessed with asian girls feel like? lol. I liked it. I must i start to warm up to her "late" only after it was decided she would be part of the house, and i really took a nice look at her...

You did really good with Azumi, Kira is beautiful too, the type i usually like, as well as Monica. Both in bodies and personalities, Monica being more of the typical "harem" Li protag, and Kira the one you have to conquer, as well as Azumi and i really like that dynamic.

Wow for being a "long" game i've finished it quickly since its the only thing i've played fresh, from chapter 1, for a couple of days. Feels like an old school VN from 10 years ago, but in a good way, with proper chars and a lot of dialogue and that "realistic" vibe i feel from those type of games, even if i prefer harem and i wished i could've said "no" to Maria, at least the second time, it did not feel NTR to me, i didn't like it, but i barely felt the repulsive feeling of NTR i would feel from an NTR game, and that's because the ideology of the MC is properly developed, so i understand that its "in character" for him to just fuck her lol. And you as the MC have YOUR girls while Maria serves to develop the world not seeing as a real LI.
The only people that lose are those who are into Maria i guess.

This is a good VN, props!

So its chapter 6 really coming in January? end of?

Thank you very much for your comment, I really liked it.


About Chapter 6, I’ll try to release it this month. It’s taking me a bit longer because I’m making some changes to the game. It will no longer be fully kinetic, and you’ll be able to make choices, such as rejecting Maria or Monica, following a romantic route with Azumy, and possibly rejecting Kira as well—although I’m still evaluating that part.


For those who prefer the story as it currently is, there will be a button that takes you directly to Chapter 6.

 

[mumudef4]

Thank you very much for your comment, I really liked it.


About Chapter 6, I’ll try to release it this month. It’s taking me a bit longer because I’m making some changes to the game. It will no longer be fully kinetic, and you’ll be able to make choices, such as rejecting Maria or Monica, following a romantic route with Azumy, and possibly rejecting Kira as well—although I’m still evaluating that part.


For those who prefer the story as it currently is, there will be a button that takes you directly to Chapter 6.

Remake from the first chapter? Some people don't want to be forced into sexual relationships, which means they need to have the option to reject LI right from the very beginning. That feels like a huge project—some might end up rejecting all LIs, haha.

 

[Bychipi]

Remake from the first chapter? Some people don't want to be forced into sexual relationships, which means they need to have the option to reject LI right from the very beginning. That feels like a huge project—some might end up rejecting all LIs, haha.

It's not a complete change, I'll just add the options to decide, and obviously dialogues will be changed and added according to the decision.

 

[Urk]

Thank you very much for your comment, I really liked it.


About Chapter 6, I’ll try to release it this month. It’s taking me a bit longer because I’m making some changes to the game. It will no longer be fully kinetic, and you’ll be able to make choices, such as rejecting Maria or Monica, following a romantic route with Azumy, and possibly rejecting Kira as well—although I’m still evaluating that part.


For those who prefer the story as it currently is, there will be a button that takes you directly to Chapter 6.

Those would be an excellent addition to the game. Specially to chose or reject relations. Having said that, for once i did not feel too bothered with being railroaded, for example, with Azumi it just feels like she's acting "her character" in a logical way that makes sense to her. Having said that and i don't know what you have planned, but would make sense for a Romance option to be available and for some way to control how we go about seducing/corrupting her, although i think she just likes being dominated as well. And also for us to chose how to accommodate people in the house with or without boyfriend and its consequences, and of course a mix of romance and corruption/forcefulness options that should lead to different reactions from the LI's.

Maybe its too much! whatever you decide, so far the game is great. I mean, i would never want to detract from the creation of new sex scenes, since we're only just getting started, and we're not even close to being creative with it. I mean the girls are virgins after all, so the next fun part is the progression into more and more, both mentally and physically.

 

[Bychipi]

Those would be an excellent addition to the game. Specially to chose or reject relations. Having said that, for once i did not feel too bothered with being railroaded, for example, with Azumi it just feels like she's acting "her character" in a logical way that makes sense to her. Having said that and i don't know what you have planned, but would make sense for a Romance option to be available and for some way to control how we go about seducing/corrupting her, although i think she just likes being dominated as well. And also for us to chose how to accommodate people in the house with or without boyfriend and its consequences, and of course a mix of romance and corruption/forcefulness options that should lead to different reactions from the LI's.

Maybe its too much! whatever you decide, so far the game is great. I mean, i would never want to detract from the creation of new sex scenes, since we're only just getting started, and we're not even close to being creative with it. I mean the girls are virgins after all, so the next fun part is the progression into more and more, both mentally and physically.

Yes, I’ll try to make the game more immersive. When there are important decisions, the player will be asked instead of the MC deciding automatically, so the player can feel more like the protagonist. This won’t happen in every scene, but it will be included in those where the choices can be considered personal.

 

[Mrsexoo3]

Thank you very much for your comment, I really liked it.


About Chapter 6, I’ll try to release it this month. It’s taking me a bit longer because I’m making some changes to the game. It will no longer be fully kinetic, and you’ll be able to make choices, such as rejecting Maria or Monica, following a romantic route with Azumy, and possibly rejecting Kira as well—although I’m still evaluating that part.


For those who prefer the story as it currently is, there will be a button that takes you directly to Chapter 6.

Since you are making changes you might want to fix the early inconsistencies with Monica, the ones that come before you decided her husband was going to be a paraplegic.
example:

She had literally no sex life with him, she says so later:

Here character would still be bipolar and nonsensical in her actions and decisions, but , with those changes, at least she will not be schizofrenic talking about shit that didnt happen.

Also this maybe:

because she goes against what her husband says multiple times (even inmediatly after this iirc), making it clear that what he says doesnt matter at all.

 

[Bychipi]

Since you are making changes you might want to fix the early inconsistencies with Monica, the ones that come before you decided her husband was going to be a paraplegic.
example:
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She had literally no sex life with him, she says so later:
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Here character would still be bipolar and nonsensical in her actions and decisions, but , with those changes, at least she will not be schizofrenic talking about shit that didnt happen.

Also this maybe:
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because she goes against what her husband says multiple times (even inmediatly after this iirc), making it clear that what he says doesnt matter at all.

In Chapter 5, Monica clearly explains what she meant by sex. She and her husband did have intimacy, but not in the typical or conventional sense. Instead, it was a type of intimacy that only her husband could share with her. At that point, the player is given a choice: to decide whether they consider that to be sex or not.

This is not an inconsistency in the story. From Chapter 1, Monica mentions that her husband is “simple” when it comes to sex, and that line directly refers to what she later explains in Chapter 5: what her intimacy with her husband is really like.

Some people said that the idea of the husband being paraplegic feels like something added at the last minute, but that is not the case. This was always planned from the beginning; the only thing I changed was his attitude. Originally, he was going to be more aggressive toward the player, which would have been understandable given the situation, but I felt it fit the story better for him to be calm, with a more passive attitude.

 

[Bychipi]

Since you are making changes you might want to fix the early inconsistencies with Monica, the ones that come before you decided her husband was going to be a paraplegic.
example:
View attachment 5589249
She had literally no sex life with him, she says so later:
Here character would still be bipolar and nonsensical in her actions and decisions, but , with those changes, at least she will not be schizofrenic talking about shit that didnt happen.

Also this maybe:
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because she goes against what her husband says multiple times (even inmediatly after this iirc), making it clear that what he says doesnt matter at all.

About that part:
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It’s basically a translation mistake. What Monica actually says is that he is the only person she has had sex with, and the only one she wants to have sex with.
The translator changed it to say that he is the only person she wants in her life, which alters that part significantly.

Thank you for pointing out that error; since I don’t know English, I don’t always realize what the AI does with the translation.

 

[Incest games fan]

Yes, there is something in the game that makes me put that tag.

With sex scenes and everything, but in your case, because of the internet, it's better to wait for the next chapters, where there will be plenty of that content.

just answer, mate. It isn't that hard to do

 

[luisito10]

pensaste sacarlo en alguna plataforma aparte de tenerlo en patreon onda steam, epic, gog o itch io, en acceso anticipado?

 

[4thcrown.diamond]

Just played the game for the first time amazing story