Overall great start. Agree with some others here, felt bit forced into Charlie in the end. Would have preferred fooling around together with other couple over drinks, getting caught peeking or some sauna accidental nudity or other opportunistic moment, just more of a shared experience doing together with Mary. I was a good boy so it kind felt she slipped with the old guy.
But hey, everyone has their own taste, keep up and looking forward to next chapter and direction the game goes.
Thanks for the kind comments. Appreciate it. Glad you are enjoying the game.
Yes, I can understand feeling that she 'slipped' and she did. She is still trying to understand her feelings on this, and trying to what she thinks is expected of her by her husband, and therapist, but also dealing with her own feelings. It can make for a confusing time for her. And for the MC.
But believe me, we have taken to heart all the comments about the choices, and have had quite a few discussions in our sessions about making sure there are more choices involved in those actions, to make the paths seem less forced for the players. Can't promise we will get them all right, but it is part of what we are working to get correct.
Thanks again, and keep the comments coming. We love getting them.
P.S. We are planning a few more 'together' scenes in this chapter, but also there will be some 'seperate' scenes as well, for both of them.