- Jan 23, 2020
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I'll waste a few electrons by stating I enjoyed this release. I can see lots of possibilities for future story progression. Although there's nothing ground-breaking here in regard to plot, the script seems to be well-written and free of grammatical/structural errors.
In regard to encouragement, I would point out the BG music issue. There's literally dozens and dozens of choices of royalty free music you can use. Take advantage of that. The lack of audio (both BGM and FX) integration in these AVN's is both a puzzle and a disappointment. Only a very few get it right, or even make the attempt. Also, it may have been a bug in my game, but the audio preference sliders didn't work and I had to control the loop with the system menu (Windows).
Lastly, I never thought I'd say this as usually the problem is just the opposite, but penis size/scaling is a bit...smallish. Maybe you have plans for variation, but so far some of the shots need a bit of enhancement.
But, in the end, nice work. Make the game you want and have fun.
In regard to encouragement, I would point out the BG music issue. There's literally dozens and dozens of choices of royalty free music you can use. Take advantage of that. The lack of audio (both BGM and FX) integration in these AVN's is both a puzzle and a disappointment. Only a very few get it right, or even make the attempt. Also, it may have been a bug in my game, but the audio preference sliders didn't work and I had to control the loop with the system menu (Windows).
Lastly, I never thought I'd say this as usually the problem is just the opposite, but penis size/scaling is a bit...smallish. Maybe you have plans for variation, but so far some of the shots need a bit of enhancement.
But, in the end, nice work. Make the game you want and have fun.