VN - Ren'Py - A Mother's Love [Part 1-14 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

This game is actually good. Graphics, story, most characters.
But there is also Mrs.Heavens!
Every time she meets the MC, you can feel the crackling tension between them.
In these moments, you would like to award with 6/5 stars.


Tested: Part 1-4

Pros:
- good renders quality
- very hot and stunning milf
- storyline, storytelling (especially MC<->Nicole)
- amount of gameplay
- choices with consequences

Neutral:
- animations
- some spellings
- few errors (missing pics)

Cons:
-no music/sound

C. 1-2 and C. 3-4 are like two completely different games.

In the first game, MC is an aggressive, manipulative dom who imposes himself to corrupt a chaste and demure MILF.

In the 2nd game, MC is a love sick submissive puppy who pines after a MILF with a very " experienced" past.

If these were two separate standalone games, each could have been fine. I'd have rated C. 1.-2 a 5/5, in fact. Mushed together, however, and it just doesn't work. Some things just don't mix. It's like dumping a strawberry milkshake into a single-malt whiskey.

In blackmail stories, it's the victim not the perp who becomes submissive not vice versa. Going from an MC who forcibly finger fucks the MILF in a restaurant while her husband and daughter are in the next room to one who, in a few short days, becomes a passive-submissive agonizing on why she doesn't call and sits on park benches whining to a 'random' jogger about true love - truly a "da fuk?" turn for me.

2/5

The characters are OK. They could have used some work. but Nicole is out of this world. The moment i saw her i feel in love. She goes to my top five. The story is nice not many twists and turns you could have added a bit of it but then again simplicity has its own charm. i love the game. Chloe character could have used some work. She looks bit boring for an VN. The cliffhanger at the end of chapter was nice . I want to see how the developers handle it. Will stay with the game till the end. I scene i hated was that MC kinda blackmailed (to some extent- though its optional) Nicole into having sex on the hospital bed. Overall nice going. You created a masterpiece and that is Nicole and hoping that you realize that. Nicole -MC-Chloe harem - if the developers try to incorporate would be bad for business . What makes the game hot is the on and off some time blackmail MC and Nicole relationship. don't destroy that. Hoping good times will prevail. Thank you.

The render are decent but hardly good and a lot have light issues. I also didn't find any of models especially attractive. Animations though were well done.

Although it appears a lot of choices and paths it is just bells and whistles and you locked into the mother path no matter what which makes whatever you doing with two other characters totally pointless, in fact if you don't fully embrace corrupting mother you get blocked from a lot of daughter scenes. Is no way to remain loyal to girlfriend.

The MC is ridiculously contradictory, a supposed considerate acting guy who supposedly cares for these women but happily exploiting and cheating away, there is no point trying to make character likable when doing a story like this, in fact it just makes it more unbelievable.
Story is very plain and lacks any spar, just lots of cheating and betrayal but very weak on motivations and reasons. Seriously one week before exams what parent would try to separate them and create emotional chaos at such a time and resort to those methods. I find it funny people bagging out the Psychic as unbelievable but thinking this was more believable.

The characters are also pretty dull, the only one that interesting was one most people disliked and that's the psychic at least she was quirky and her personality actually matched her actions unlike any other character,

Played part 3!
If you are into Blackmail, MILFS and some slow burn corruption, then this game provides for you.
The premise is maybe a bit weak: Mom wants you away from her daughter because she thinks you are a bad influence. Eh, it might not be the most original plot, but it's a very well executed effort and deserves some attention on f95.
The dialog and story is written more then believable enough and should give nothing to complain.
Of course the main focus of this game is your girlfriends mother, Nicole, if you do not find her model very attractive, I still recommend you try this out because the road from 'strict mom' to 'willing fucktoy' is looking to be very fun one to enjoy.

The game is a mixed bag. Nicole is wonderful, Marilyn is horrible, and Chloe is not terribly appealing.

The game starts off with Nicole asking you to stop seeing her daughter Chloe because she is worried that you are a bad influence on her and will bring down her grades. So you are given the choice to request something from Nicole in exchange for promising to leave her daughter alone. Whether or not you keep your word is up to you, so the game has more than one route. The characters have distinct personalities, although Chloe has some serious inconsistencies with her character. Not that it matters since it's Nicole that makes the game worth playing.

Then there is Marilyn, who serves no purpose and makes the game far less enjoyable. She is a blight on the game and I have no idea why she exists at all. I can't really say too much about her without venturing into spoilers, but she is the reason that I'm rating the game at three stars instead of five.

if you're reading this just download already, you won't be disappointed.

Exceptional quality. Exceptional execution. Compelling story. Good H scenes. I've encountered no bugs or typos.

I wasn't sold on the primes from the description, but I'm glad I tried it. The friend is a bit shoehorned in but for good reason. More H and to break up the main story. I kinda felt bad for both the mom and daughter. Which beats most games on the site with no emotion whatsoever. If there is a possibility of porn games being art this is a step in the right direction.

My Rating of this Game ([Part 3 Plus )is:

Pros:
+ Fantastic Renders
+ Nice Story
+ Long Game Play
+ Easy Playing
+Active Play
+Nice Closeups
+Great Animations
Cons:
-None

Conclusion:
The Mother is hot as hell.
also the game play is pretty long with the last update,loved every minute playing the Game.

It is definitely worth the download.

I love a good story and OrbOrgin in my opinion is giving us that... so far. I've seen a lot of short story VN's from this Dev but this particular one is their best work.

Also I'm amazed at how much content is packed in the 3 parts. A lot of Dev's like to stall way too much but not OrbOrgin. I respect that and will support the project.

Megnold reviewart 3
I'm really enjoying game every updates
and also every updates full fill to players mind(fap)
Story young and old but not incest so this is best for all peoples (sry horny peoples)
Renders Very beautiful and visual really fantastic,no animation but every scenes looks great
Dialogues easy to understand bad english people (I'm also) grammar correct or not but easy to understand
Worth to fap fap..(adult games so I'm not use wrong words right???)

THIS!!! Now this is how you do an adult game! With some games on this site going 7 or 8 installments without delivering anything *cough a Wife and a Mother and Dr. Amana *cough, A Mother's Love Delivers in just 3 updates. Not only is there plenty of content, but loads of context.

One of the best games out there. I never got interested in his short games much, because they are just not my type, I like a little bit of build up or tease between the characters, but this game is pure gold.

I seriously love the character art, the way the story is progressing, the animations everything. The only thing this probably lacks is a harem route.

This game has made me a big fan of this developer, and I am hoping to see this game turn out to have many more parts if possible, and waiting eagerly for his future games.

(Part 3 plus)

I first avoided the game bc of the text on the center of the screen, but I tried again and its really nice.

Imho only that mind reading stuff is a turn off - the girl itself is nice, but I am not a big fan of magic/mythical stuff in these games.

The girls I quite nice and the plot around the mother and her daughter is really great. I hope we can continue the bouncing between both and are not forced to pick one ...

Now I am really looking forward for the next release

Phenomenal story telling. It's refreshing to a MILF story without it being incest. We've become drawn to a single genre but there are so many ways to express it.
Pretty models. I wish the grammar was more consistent but beyond that, we're just picking at straws.

This game is superb, I really loved playing it from the start to the end and the MILF is very hot too,

Story-wise is really good,

The game has his grammar problems, but that doesn't mean it's a bad game, better yet, top 5 games I ever played, hope this game will get finished, I enjoyed it so much
And the end, what A cliffhanger

Thanks for this wonderful game

Goddamnit! OC at the start I was into manipulating [the older one] over [the younger one], but then the game gave me feels. Bad game.

Then to end the EP on such a cliff-hanger. Not-so-good-English or not, I wanted to punch my monitor.

Good game. Do recommend.

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is Part 1 - 3 Plus...

At first I was a bit apprehensive about this one, but it quickly grew on me...

The visuals of the characters are good, and they all look unique... The backdrops look decent and also appear mostly unique... The inclusion of the random texts from viewers during the webcam scenes were a nice touch, even though I don't watch those sorts of things, ever... There are a few short animations now and then...

The script was, for the most part, really good, with only the occasional spelling/grammar mistakes, and tiny amount of broken English... The plot revolves around a male protagonist who, at first lusts after his girlfriends mother, but in the long term (depending on choices) it begins to turn into a romance... All while also balancing out his other relationships with his girlfriend, and a long time female friend... It starts off as blackmail, with the mother, but slowly turns into much more...

There is a form of NTR with the husband of the main love interest... He is a scum bag husband who treats his wife like a typical sexist male pig... Sorry, was I overly angry about that jerk? But he's not really that much in the way of the protagonist... I never experienced him cock blocking anytime during the story, and only near the end does he treat the protagonist sorta badly, with regards to his daughters relationship with the protagonist... He's more there as a reminder of why the mother character needs to feel loved, feel sexy, and be properly cared for, by someone else... I was apprehensive about the inclusion of NTR at all in this one, but it turns out he doesn't really get in the way of much and doesn't stop the protagonist from doing what he wants, really... The tags for this game says avoidable NTR, and I guess my choices avoided it, because I never even came close to experiencing it... He was so totally un-interested in having sex with his own wife, even when she tried, so for me, there was no NTR, for my playthrough... But from what I've read, there is NTR with the school teacher and his girlfriend, once again, depending on the choices you make... I apparently avoided it entirely, thank goodness...

The female friend is a probably the only real moment where I sort of questioned if I was truly going to enjoy this VN/Game or not... Because there is an introduction of mind reading with that character... Which took, what was already bordering reality, into definitely beyond reality... You eventually begin to learn more about her, and actually I was kind of wishing she would become a love interest for the protagonist, but they became more like really good friends, with a common interest, and some side benefits... Of course that depends on your choices, hehe...

I really feel torn by this whole VN/Game, as I want to root for all 3 primary female characters in this one... The girl friend is the kind of girlfriend we all want to have, kind, caring, nice, attentive, loving, supportive, and willing to go the extra step to help keep the relationship alive... I kind of feel a bit sorry for her sometimes, because the primary premise of this VN/Game is her mother, and not her... And although the female friend starts off as a pushy character, who more or less slightly blackmails the protagonist into getting what she needs and wants, she actually turns out to be a kindred spirit for the protagonist... Having the same interest as he does... I actually began to care for her happiness as well... Man, why do stories like these have to get my romantic bug all fluttery and in a twist? I wanted the best for all 3 women... That just goes to show you how well the story was told... To grip at your heartstrings now and then... I'm just a sucker for romance stories...

There is quite a lot of content in this VN/Game... A lot more then I expected... Here I figured I was just reading/playing 3 parts of the beginning of a VN/Game, when it ended up taking me practically all afternoon and evening to read and enjoy, the current content...

Overall, this VN/Game starts off a bit fishy, but gets better and better as you go along... And there are times, when those choices completely matter on how the story plays out, so be aware that being forceful and hyper focusing on only one character, might not always be the right way to go... Depending on your tastes of course... The writing, even though it had some mistakes now and then, told the story well... I enjoyed the dialogue and character interactions... I like how you start off feeling one way about a character, and seeing how over time that feeling can develop into something different... As this is only parts 1 through 3, it is most likely still under development... Will I revisit this one? Definitely... But only when large chunks of content get added, because I hate reading/playing the good VN/Games in smaller piece mail releases... I look forward to seeing how this one continues to develop...

Dam. How long has it been since a good game came along like this. Not only is it appeasing with all the sexual content. but the story line makes it even more engaging and really puts you into the perspective of the MC. The mother is flat out gorgeous and has that cold shoulder which you can't help but want to break down and get to know her.

Why is it the forbidden fruit that looks tastiest?

- You are lusting for a woman around the age of your mother.
- She's your girlfriend's mother.
- She's (apparently) a happily married woman.
- You are blackmailing her - taking advantage of the mother while you're dating her daughter.
- You're corrupting her, as she slowly gives in (and eventually so do you).

All the wrongness of the situation makes it all so erotic and sexy. Well, it may not be the most realistic telling of such a story - but, then, it is supposed to be a porn game after all and not an adult novel. Yet it gets the setting and the story elements perfectly right. Even in the absence of stronger forms of Taboo like incest, this game succeeds in creating an amazing "forbidden desire" situation.

Apart from the holistic evaluation above, other elements of the game like renders, story, and characters are quite standard. Erotic scenes are well designed and very sexy.

5/5 for this game, because it achieves what it set out to do.

5/5 stars.

This game is excellent! Great story, and the game look really nice. I really did not expect anything great at all from this game, so I am happily surprised. You really fnd yourself maybe wanting the MC to get it with one or two, or more of the female companions. The fact that you care how it gos for the mc just points to that this game is awesome sauce.