VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[Fajlar6]

you can but if you use game images then can't ask money.

Ok,, don't worry... I make the story (writing/text) only,, not image... And I don't do this for money,, just for fun(my favourite thing to do) and wants to know opinions

(For someone or anyone who like/wants to read and see it.)

 

[Optimus69420]

Ok,, don't worry... I make the story (writing/text) only,, not image... And I don't do this for money,, just for fun(my favourite thing to do) and wants to know opinions

(For someone or anyone who like/wants to read and see it.)

I would like to take a look & read the fanfiction story you made about 'A Mother's Love'.

 

[dE_VoYd]

If I remember correctly... I'm not allowed to make a Fanfiction Story about this game(A Mother's Love), right?

I dont think anybody will bat an eye if you don't take any money from that work...... Unless they are EA/Nintendo/Disney/Konami of course ...

 

[Optimus69420]

Here's my Fanfiction Story
(A Mother's Love):

Spoiler: Prologue

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Huh. I didn't expect for you to have your own character or make a new character that will date and I pressume will have sex with Nicole, before you shared this. I assumed you were going to have us be the MC like how the game made us the character. It's interesting but at the same time it kinda feels weird to have a main male character name that isn't the MC or not us. Since the game makes you feel that you are the MC and the one dating and having sex with Nicole. I think I'm getting jealous because I got pissed and was suprised that we aren't the MC. Hehehe.

I also thought your fan fiction was going to be a continuation or interpretation of Part 12. Or you were going to create a whole new adventure between MC (Us) and Nicole. I didn't expect for you to go in a different route.

If I may ask, did you get the name Ryan George from the comedian YouTuber and who does the Pitch Meeting series by Screen Rant who shares the same name?

 

[Fajlar6]

Huh. I didn't expect for you to have your own character or make a new character that will date and I pressume will have sex with Nicole, before you shared this. I assumed you were going to have us be the MC like how the game made us the character. It's interesting but at the same time it kinda feels weird to have a main male character name that isn't the MC or not us. Since the game makes you feel that you are the MC and the one dating and having sex with Nicole. I think I'm getting jealous because I got pissed and was suprised that we aren't the MC. Hehehe.

I also thought your fan fiction was going to be a continuation or interpretation of Part 12. Or you were going to create a whole new adventure between MC (Us) and Nicole. I didn't expect for you to go in a different route.

If I may ask, did you get the name Ryan George from the comedian YouTuber and who does the Pitch Meeting series by Screen Rant who shares the same name?

Sorry for/if I disappoint you or something. Or if this is sound/look weird, etc... And I get the Name Ryan George from my own idea.

Well,, since I'm not really a porn/sex kind/type of guy. I just focus/like the story... So,, once again. Sorry, hehe... Or if you want,, I will make other version.. where the MC(Us/You and other) are in(like in the game) while my character(Ryan George) will be in too. As a friend or something.


(But,, I can do/make a sex/lewd scenes and moments... For now, lovey-dovey/romantic and affectionate first)

 

[Optimus69420]

Sorry for/if I disappoint you or something. Or if this is sound/look weird, etc... And I get the Name Ryan George from my own idea.

Well,, since I'm not really a porn/sex kind/type of guy. I just focus/like the story... So,, once again. Sorry, hehe... Or if you want,, I will make other version.. where the MC(Us/You and other) are in(like in the game) while my character(Ryan George) will be in too. As a friend or something.


(But,, I can do/make a sex/lewd scenes and moments... For now, lovey-dovey/romantic and affectionate first)

Ohhhhh. No need to be sorry. It's just weird and I'm not a fan of the idea of another potential love interest for Nicole. Since I believe so far, whatever route we're taking with Nicole, whether it be the corrupting Nicole story or the romance story for Nicole, she's potentially developing love feelings for the MC in the game.

You can keep your character (Ryan George) in the story but I recommend keeping him as a friend & ally to the MC, like how Abigail & Marilyn are in the game. I highly recommend focusing your fanfiction between MC and Nicole's relationship and story. Since I think the majority, including myself, have developed feelings for Nicole. Hehehe. Because dev Orb did a fantastic job in making us the MC in 'A Mother's Love'.

Its just having a new love interest for Nicole might be weird and not work. Since the game has established that we are the MC and the one who's in love with Nicole.

 

[Harsh 007]

Why the abandoned tag....? i mean the dev announced his comeback and started his work on this game again and posting progress report on his patreon page.

 

[fapioramos]

Why the abandoned tag....? i mean the dev announced his comeback and started his work on this game again and posting progress report on his patreon page.

he need to post some update in here. look up the rules.

 

[rudy007]

Why the abandoned tag....? i mean the dev announced his comeback and started his work on this game again and posting progress report on his patreon page.

Annunciation doesn't mean anything, when dev drop the update, "abandoned" will be lifted... Simple, and the same for every developer here...

 

[cxx]

Why the abandoned tag....? i mean the dev announced his comeback and started his work on this game again and posting progress report on his patreon page.

over 3 months radiosilence (doesn't matter why per F95 rules) and on top of that over 18 months since last update (same as before).

will be removed once .12 gets here.

you can debate about abandonement rules with admins and mods if you want but don't expect change.

 

[AntuanShotaLover]

I liked this story, it's a pity that such projects are abandoned. This is too horny moments!

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[Barretto24]

Why the abandoned tag....? i mean the dev announced his comeback and started his work on this game again and posting progress report on his patreon page.

At this point I feel like a turntable with a broken vinyl on it. Repeating the same thing over and over and over again because newbies cannot be bothered reading the topic which explains why AML has taken so long to update.

So this is me for the final time explaining. Someone else can explain from now on.

During Covid times. Orb lost their father to illness. There was a problem with their fathers belongings/estate ect and the family was contesting it. This lead to a court case (for which the verdict has not been shared by Orb) couple this with the fact that depression, anxiety hit Orb ONTOP of a home move which was very stressful. They couldn't keep up with AML so they put the game on indefinate hold whilst they got everything in their personal life sorted and their head back on. This was coupled with the decision to pause all Patreon payments which was paused for well over 2 years.

Due to F95 rules a game that has not been updated in that amount of time receives an Abandoned tag (This doesn't mean the game is actually abandoned - it just means that the game hasn't been updated in a long time)

Orb has actually engaged their community very well over the past 24 months and has kept everyone appraised of their situation. Recently they let everyone know they are back at it developing Chapter 12 of AML and that their personal problems have been more or less resolved.

Chapter 12 has been started and will come to F95 when it has been completed. Then and only then will the abandoned tag be removed from this thread.

Now please I implore everyone PLEASE READ THE THREAD! BEFORE COMMENTING!

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

We also didn't asked for your post asking the same question just because you were too lazy to read the thread. So maybe learn to read and search the thread beforehand next time.

 

[Deleted member 3727657]

We also didn't asked for your post asking the same question just because you were too lazy to read the thread. So maybe learn to read and search the thread beforehand next time.

hi mate and friends
I would appreciate it if someone could answer my question
I like games that have a large number of verbal and teasing events (at least 10 for each girl or milf (the more the better)) then enter the phase of vaginal sex and anal sex ( In this way, a lot of sexual tension accumulates )
How many relations does this game have with the above definition? thank you

 

[YuNobi1]

I like games that have a large number of verbal and teasing events (at least 10 for each girl or milf (the more the better)) then enter the phase of vaginal sex and anal sex ( In this way, a lot of sexual tension accumulates )
How many relations does this game have with the above definition? thank you

"At least TEN "pre-action" events?!" Sheesh, you do like to grind. There are currently one-or-two sexual relationships with MC (player choice on dumping or keeping GF), one sexual relationship going on between two other characters which may or may not involve MC "stealing" the female in that relationship in the future, and then one "friend" who talks about sex, but there's no indication that any action will ever happen with her and MC. GF gives hand job (if I remember correctly, it's been like 18 months) in the first scene. Main Woman is a steady build up with ramping up exposure, touching, masturbating, oral, before getting to vaginal/anal (I think there's an option to do A before V), but I'm pretty sure it's less than 10 events to get to that point.

TLDR: Zero?

 

[Deleted member 3727657]

"At least TEN "pre-action" events?!" Sheesh, you do like to grind. There are currently one-or-two sexual relationships with MC (player choice on dumping or keeping GF), one sexual relationship going on between two other characters which may or may not involve MC "stealing" the female in that relationship in the future, and then one "friend" who talks about sex, but there's no indication that any action will ever happen with her and MC. GF gives hand job (if I remember correctly, it's been like 18 months) in the first scene. Main Woman is a steady build up with ramping up exposure, touching, masturbating, oral, before getting to vaginal/anal (I think there's an option to do A before V), but I'm pretty sure it's less than 10 events to get to that point.

TLDR: Zero?

Now that I think more, I understand that the main woman is the most important, I don't care about the rest of the girls and milfs

When I read the first half of your text, I feel that it is what I want (The same thing I wrote in my first question).
But when I read your text at the end, I feel that the relationship with the main woman is a fast burn

So, I ask another question that will help me determine if I should take the time to play or not:
So far, how many vaginal and anal sex has he had with the main woman?

 

[cxx]

So, I ask another question that will help me determine if I should take the time to play or not:
So far, how many vaginal and anal sex has he had with the main woman?

vag: handful
ass: 1 or 2

 

[Deleted member 3727657]

vag: handful
ass: 1 or 2

Taking into account that we have 90,000 dialogues, we have two tracks and we have a few girls, so each track has at least 20,000 dialogues between the MC and the main woman, if each event has 200 dialogues, then we had at least 100 of events, and this amount of sex in 100 of them. This means that the relationship with the main woman is slow-burn and with high emotional and sexual tension
Excellent
Thank you
I play this game

 

[nandesta]

I hope this game make a come back!

 

[cxx]

I hope this game make a come back!

it'll this year.