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WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.


Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
 

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WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.


Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
I don't know who looks more scarier but damn those faces looks scary :ROFLMAO:

As always thanks 4 the share. :)
 

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13. (Sorry this post was posted later than usual, something went wrong with scheduling the post.)







Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)

Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)


Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Hello everybody. I just wanted to share the 3rd WIP picture for "A Mother's Love Part 13" posted by dev Orb on his Patreon.

Thank you Raminita for sharing this with me and allowing me to share this with you guys.:giggle: :love:

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My thoughts:
According to this piece of dialogue, I'm assuming this takes place in MC's room. Because Marilyn sometimes enters or exits via MC's (Our) window in his room. And Marilyn is being both cheeky and still suspicious of Sylvia.

This caught me by surprise is that Sylvia is here and she's visiting MC (Us) at our house. I'm assuming this is where Sylvia is going to ask how our secret mission went at Magic Grand. I bet when we're about to get to the juicy parts of the dialogue this is where Marilyn enters through the window ruining the moment.

What do you guys think? I would like to hear your thoughts.
WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.


Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Thank you very much for your shares, Raminita. And I say the same for Optimus69420.

As for the content shown in this last preview, it seems that MC will discover Beeman's hiding place and confront him to take revenge for what happened on Day 20 (Part 11) and recover the stolen urn.

However, the content of the last screenshot is what seems most worrying to me. I don't like the way John is doing at all and I don't like that the woman he's hugging is probably Nicole.
 
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WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.


Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Thank you for sharing again Raminita! :giggle: :love:

Theory time:
For the 1st picture: I agree with J0K3RXXX theory about MC (Us) discovering Beeman's hideout and we're going to have round 2 of our fight with him in order to get Abigail's sisters urn back. From what I'm guessing, it can take place in a forrest or in a special cliff.

For the second picture: Nicole appears to be wearing the same dress she had on when MC's (Our) parents had their first dinner together at the Heaven's household. But I fear the look on John's face when Nicole gave that hug to her husband (if the woman hugging John is Nicole). This is where I ask myself, what did Nicole do to make John give that expression?
 

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*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.
What? It's "Doesn't bother me" however you look at it. Because it uses elipsis. The full sentence would be "[This fact] does not bother me" where "this fact" refers to all the things that he means, i.e. "typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences."

Just like he said, "Do not bother me" would make no sense, except the case where you'd use the multiple subject to highlight what you mean. So it would be "The typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences don't bother me." Otherwise you default to the singular that encompasses the whole. I have studied linguistics. Please tell me how this is wrong, oh self-appointed intellectual that runs circles around the simple mortals.

So the full sentence would actually be "The fact that typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences are present does not bother me." It's nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation, but at least don't correct others when you have no idea what you're talking about.

You could use "Those don't bother me." This would also be correct. But they way he said it is also correct. So you attacked him for no fault of his, just because you wanted to feel superior on a porn website.

I'll probably not see your reply anyway, since I log in here once in a blue moon, but I felt like replying.

I do agree with your other point.
 
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What? It's "Doesn't bother me" however you look at it. Because it uses elipsis. The full sentence would be "[This fact] does not bother me" where "this fact" refers to all the things that he means, i.e. "typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences."

Just like he said, "Do not bother me" would make no sense, except the case where you'd use the multiple subject to highlight what you mean. So it would be "The typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences don't bother me." Otherwise you default to the singular that encompasses the whole. I have studied linguistics. Please tell me how this is wrong, oh self-appointed intellectual that runs circles around the simple mortals.

So the full sentence would actually be "The fact that typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences are present does not bother me." It's nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation, but at least don't correct others when you have no idea what you're talking about.

You could use "Those don't bother me." This would also be correct. But they way he said it is also correct. So you attacked him for no fault of his, just because you wanted to feel superior on a porn website.

I'll probably not see your reply anyway, since I log in here once in a blue moon, but I felt like replying.

I do agree with your other point.
No ellipsis used in the original quote, and even if one was used, "do" versus "does" is still dependent upon the subject. Did you even look at the original post?

If you're referring to what I posted, the use of the asterisk is an indicator that an edit is being suggested to correct the grammar of the original poster, much like this: *ellipsis.

You really shouldn't jump into conversations without understanding the context - it makes you look foolish.
 

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Can anyone what is the NTR part ? Is it mother with someone or GF with someone..
Based on what I've read, I think that what is being isolated as NTR is a path triggered if the daughter is rejected, or at least somewhat pushed aside. One could say the whole VN is NTR given that the primary LI is a married woman and you are cucking the husband with her. However the screechier folks in the anti-NTR crowd only really seem to have trouble with it if someone else is sleeping with an LI - they are fine cucking others, it seems, but would scream bloody murder if the woman's actual husband had any kind of romantic or sexual contact with her.
 

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Can anyone what is the NTR part ? Is it mother with someone or GF with someone..
NTR is associated with MC's girlfriend in the event that you ignore her or treat her like saying "asshole"...

in general there are two types of NTR, full NTR will show you what your girlfriend does (this happens if she is not your girlfriend) and a small NTR, this is if your girlfriend acts strangely, but does not show what she is doing or whether it is NTR? because you spend more time with her mother than with your girlfriend ... in short, I explained what I could)))
 
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NTR is associated with MC's girlfriend in the event that you ignore her or treat her like saying "asshole"...

in general there are two types of NTR, full NTR will show you what your girlfriend does (this happens if she is not your girlfriend) and a small NTR, this is if your girlfriend acts strangely, but does not show what she is doing or whether it is NTR? because you spend more time with her mother than with your girlfriend ... in short, I explained what I could)))
Thanks for explaining.
 
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No ellipsis used in the original quote, and even if one was used, "do" versus "does" is still dependent upon the subject. Did you even look at the original post?

If you're referring to what I posted, the use of the asterisk is an indicator that an edit is being suggested to correct the grammar of the original poster, much like this: *ellipsis.

You really shouldn't jump into conversations without understanding the context - it makes you look foolish.
His response was:

"Doesn't bother me and doesn't detrack from the experience or the story for me."

to the original statement that was:

"The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story."

Here is the definition for ellipsis: ( "Ellipsis happens when we leave out (in other words, when we don’t use) items which we would normally expect to use in a sentence if we followed the grammatical rules." )

As I already explained, the omission of the subject "It" in his response is ellipsis. Instead of saying "IT does not bother me" he said "Doesn't bother me." It is nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation and need everything spelled out to understand a simple sentence.

You should get off your high horse, it makes you look foolish. Also, choosing to display your intellectual superiority on a porn site, in the comment section of a game about a guy fucking his gf's mom, is one of the saddest things I saw in my life.
 
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His response was:

"Doesn't bother me and doesn't detract from the experience or the story for me."

to the original statement that was:




Here is the definition for ellipsis: ( "Ellipsis happens when we leave out (in other words, when we don’t use) it which we would normally expect to use in a sentence if we followed the grammatical rules." )

As I already explained, the omission of the subject "It" in his response is ellipsis. Instead of saying "IT does not bother me" he said "Doesn't bother me." It is nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation and need everything spelt out to understand a simple sentence.

You should get off your high horse, it makes you look foolish. Also, choosing to display your intellectual superiority on a porn site, in the comment section of a game about a guy fucking his gf's mom, is one of the saddest things I saw in my life.
I WOULD NOT bother arguing with him mate, it is only himself that he is making look foolish. Regardless I explained my post. It does not bother is a statement, it doesn't bother is a reaction and my post was based on a reaction not a statement so what I posted was correct. In any regard what is the point of arguing over one letter and a space? Lol

Back to the thread at hand.

Thank you Raminita for yet again bringing us these updates. You work tirelessly for this game. Cannot wait for Ch.13
 
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Used to be good, but the update ruined the entire game. I thought the option of not corrupting her would lead to her rejecting John but no he cucks the MC anyways. No point, also the story drags on and on. 8\10 if you wanna play for porn but 0/10 if you invest in story. Also NtR happens either way so fuck the author for lying.
 
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Used to be good, but the update ruined the entire game. I thought the option of not corrupting her would lead to her rejecting John but no he cucks the MC anyways. No point, also the story drags on and on. 8\10 if you wanna play for porn but 0/10 if you invest in story. Also NtR happens either way so fuck the author for lying.
Think you are in your own there. CH12 is brilliant.
 
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I WOULD NOT bother arguing with him mate, it is only himself that he is making look foolish. Regardless I explained my post. It does not bother is a statement, it doesn't bother is a reaction and my post was based on a reaction not a statement so what I posted was correct. In any regard what is the point of arguing over one letter and a space? Lol

Back to the thread at hand.

Thank you Raminita for yet again bringing us these updates. You work tirelessly for this game. Cannot wait for Ch.13
Think you got it mixed ("does not bother me" vs "do not bother me"), as that's how it was in the original argument. And tbh, both are correct here, depending on which subject you use (singular vs plural), as in: "These things do not bother me/ They do not bother me" or "It does not bother me.", which is "This fact does not bother me", "it" or "this fact" being X, Y and Z combined. But yeah, this is not the place to discuss the grammar prowess of the userbase so I won't continue arguing.
 

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Used to be good, but the update ruined the entire game. I thought the option of not corrupting her would lead to her rejecting John but no he cucks the MC anyways. No point, also the story drags on and on. 8\10 if you wanna play for porn but 0/10 if you invest in story. Also NtR happens either way so fuck the author for lying.
john and nicole are still married so it's mc cucking johnand if you neglect their daughter and she jumps on beaman's dick is your own fault for not paying attention on her not breaking up with her.
 

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His response was:

"Doesn't bother me and doesn't detrack from the experience or the story for me."

to the original statement that was:




Here is the definition for ellipsis: ( "Ellipsis happens when we leave out (in other words, when we don’t use) items which we would normally expect to use in a sentence if we followed the grammatical rules." )

As I already explained, the omission of the subject "It" in his response is ellipsis. Instead of saying "IT does not bother me" he said "Doesn't bother me." It is nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation and need everything spelled out to understand a simple sentence.

You should get off your high horse, it makes you look foolish. Also, choosing to display your intellectual superiority on a porn site, in the comment section of a game about a guy fucking his gf's mom, is one of the saddest things I saw in my life.
Bless your heart. You have missed the whole damn context of the conversation. Your attempted application of ellipsis is pure non sequitur - by your use of that definition, you would suggest all poor grammar is "ellipsis" - you are attempting to justify what is poor and incorrect by saying poor and incorrect is just fine if you apply this term to it. Just admit you're another troll like the other guy and be done with it.
 
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Bless your heart. You have missed the whole damn context of the conversation. Your attempted application of ellipsis is pure non sequitur - by your use of that definition, you would suggest all poor grammar is "ellipsis" - you are attempting to justify what is poor and incorrect by saying poor and incorrect is just fine if you apply this term to it. Just admit you're another troll like the other guy and be done with it.
Oh, so you actually can't comprehend what you read. You said "I can run circles around you" but you gave no examples of why it is the way you say it is while I gave multiple examples. Your only arguments so far were: "na-uh, it is the way I said it because I said so", "I'm really smart, like really really smart, like smarter than everybody around here combined. Extra smart." and "Source: I said it." Maybe you should stop "licking your own dick" and jerking off to how intelligent you are and start looking around you. If I missed the context, you had ample opportunity to explain it but you keep regurgitating the same stuff over and over again. What is funnier - after you say that I did not understand the context, you argue exactly the same context that I supposedly "didn't understand". Yes, my application of ellipsis is incorrect because you say so, even when there is an example that is quite similar to this one in the link I posted. Of course. I mean, I gave you all the links and I explained multiple times that the implied subject is singular here. Ellipsis is used to omit words that can be easily understood from the context. The implied subject "it" or "this" can be easily understood from the context of that sentence. If this was an academic thesis, it wouldn't be right to use it because it is informal, but this is a porn forum. The technique exists for a reason. If the omission of a word/group of words (the subject here) that can be understood from the context, which is literally the definition for the ellipsis is a non sequitur for you, then there is nothing else I left to say. Like I said, I provided examples and on a quick google search you can find others, you just want to close your eyes and pretend you are right and the other stuff does not exist. Because there is no way I could make this simpler, in order for your brain to be able to understand it. As I said, the implied subject is "it" or "this" in that sentence and its omission is an ellipsis. Actually, let me try and draw it for you, maybe then, oh you "intellectually blessed" being, will be able to understand it.

X, Y, Z (multiple separate things) -(create)-> A (the whole that is made of X, Y, Z). So X + Y + Z (plural because multiple) = A (singular whole). But A (the singular whole) =It/ This/ This thing/ This fact, etc.
P(erson) 1: I dislike X,Y,Z.
P(erson) 2: [A] doesn't bother me. -> A = IT/ THIS (the singular). A - omitted because any being with a modicum of intelligence can make this correlation and understand it from context, just like I did. Well, any being except an "intellectually blessed" being such as yourself, of course.

SO "[A] doesn't bother me" = "X, Y, Z don't bother me."
So if you say "[IT] doesn't bother me" it is like saying that all those things don't bother you. Only that you are expressing it through the singular whole instead of repeating the multiple subjects. Furthermore, the ellipsis could have also been used on another part of the sentence, such as "[IT] doesn't bother me [that X,Y,Z exist.]"

But as the other guy said, there is no point in arguing with you, you are just a sad troll and bully who wants to feel superior by attacking people for (allegedly) not speaking proper English while hiding behind a computer screen. Oh, and speaking proper English does not necessarily make you smart or "intellectually blessed", nor throwing Latin words into the conversation does. Other people might have another native language and be way smarter than you while not fluent in English (so prone to mistakes). Still, he did no mistakes in his spelling. You are not worth any more of my time and we are also going off topic, you by talking about people's grammar prowess instead of talking about the game, and me by responding to that.
 
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