This is good stuff right here, easy 5 stars. Let me give my reasons why.. I am not a fan of engrish, (as its affectionately known as) but this it adds certain charm in this VN, it is very well written, but i will point out slightly negatively that the writing lacks accurate past tense, present tense and pluralising. For example the word "mines" is what irritates me the most in alot of these translated games/VNs for the English language. It is simply "mine" that is something belonging to only you. I am an Englishman myself, although only a B grade in GCSE English studies, i would be happy to go through and correct everything for your English language version. I would promise of course to keep the said charm of your writing, only alleviating your negative feedback of these minor errors. For free of course as i am a big fan of your work.
*possible spoilers ahead*
Now the positives and boy theres is alot, Firstly if you are a sucker for unrequited love with potential of blossoming into real love, then this is for you, it is fascinating to me to try to imagine whether it is the writers imagination, or real life experiences. Either way this journey is beautifully crafted. And with this i was able to really immerse myself into the story so far.
The animations vary from ok-ish to great. some erotic scenes (particularly early on) are only a few frames tops, but for me personally is better than still non-animated stuff out there, that said there are also scenes that are fully animated amazingly well with an obvious multitude of frames and expertise, so maybe expect these lesser ones to be improved at a later stage? Lets hope.
The NTR content is avoidable, i am sure i am not the only one who detests sharing women both in my fantasies and imagination and in real life, the only exception personally is with another woman, as long as the bond is stronger with me. But i am digressing, but i do hope there is lesbian or MFF scenes planned.
Even though the MC's girlfriend (in my opinion) isn't particularly attractive, she won me over with her cute personality and charm, which is a testament to the wonderful writing. Same goes for Abigail. Marilyn however is beautifully created but she would be stunning with her hair in a different style, maybe let her hair down? But Nicole? Jesus, i know, i know she is made of pixels but fuck me is she beautiful. Damn if i saw a female that looks like her in real life, i would just melt. I know i'm sad ain't i?
Anyway fuck the TLDR bollocks, this game/VN is amazing, try it. I hope you love it as much as i do.