VN - Ren'Py - A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

I am writing this review after playing up to part 10 of the game. Here's what I liked and did not like about the game so far.

Liked:
-the MC does not share his woman (a huge plus for me)
-Nicole is HOT!!!!! (she's now my favorite milf )
-very minimal forced scenes (it would be the best if there is none)
-very hot sex scenes (have I said that Nicole is hot?)
-no game overs
-great renders and animations
-engaging story
-story is refreshing (a nice break from the usual story lines from other games)

Did not like:
-spelling and grammar NEEDS proof reading! (there are dialogues that cannot be understood
-dialogues NEED a rework (I felt like I was reading an anime english subtitle). A better choice of words will surely make a huge improvement.
-no option to torture and kill John, Joshua, Tyler and those 2 asshole receptionists from the hotel

As far as I'm concerned, the pros clearly outweighs the cons. Overall, the game is great if you can put up with the dialogues, and since I am now a huge fan of Nicole Heavens I'll give it 5 stars! I hope the updates keeps on coming regularly.

I love Nichole, her character is really intoxicating, don't care for other girls in there but Nichole. She is still confused but hopefully she will sort it out in upcoming episodes and start some serious relationship with mc.
You are doing great job Orb.

HI i hardly leve any review for the games and i do support some patrons but hardly ever posts on f95 but i owe to OrbOrigin to leave this review for the excellent game that he created. I have playing erotic game for last 3 years and i stumbled across orbrigin work in past. His work was impressive but the games were very short so i didn't give much attention but i accidentally came across this gem gave it a try and it just blew my mind. I admit the plot that started out bit silly has spiraled in something phenomenal. If you just play for storyline you would be satisfied and intrigued for what will happen in future. But for me storyline is not best part but its the characters especially Nicole. Wow what a lady. She just keeps getting better band better. By every part her charterer become better and she becomes more and more beautiful. I gotta hand it orborigin you have created one of finest human specimens in history of erotic games.
Another thing i point out the great detail on small expressions, they are described withe great detail that you don.t see often in other games. Now for personal favorite thing about this game apart from goddess Nicole is that this is a love story. sure mc has some fun here and there but he not trying have sex with every chick but pursuing her love for one lady and update by update is becoming more and more clear. I think because their relationship is evolving, even after so many detailed and fabulous sex scenes between mc and nicole we get something fresh and exciting. With this point i am ending my review on this fabulous gem that should garner much more support that it deserves and for my selfish reason if orborigin has bigger budget the updates will be more frequent. So please check out this game and if you find it worthy do support him. I do really hope orborgin read this review so that i can thank him for creating this gem.

I'm giving this game 4 stars.

Graphics: 4
Story: 4
Plot: 4
Action: 4

Graphics: 4
It is clear the developer spends a lot time posing and giving the characters a personality. Which is nice to see. I would have given this a 5, but the quality just isn't quite there. Despite that, there is still plenty of detail.

Story: 4
When I initially started it I wasn't too fond of how the MC was blackmailing the Mother. But eventually, watching her change and start to like the MC was worth the trip. The developer spent a lot of time showing the internal struggles she goes through and how she fights herself.
The daughter is likable, but her character development is clearly limited as she isn't the main LI.
Some of the other characters still have some depth, like Silvia. And it's clear she will have a big role in the plot.
All in all, the story is pretty good. The only thing that bothered me is how the MC's girlfriend had a core personality change after she breaks up with him.
The developer does need to get a proof reader as some of the dialog you have to read a couple of times before you grasp what is being said. But, if you can look past that, it is a great story.

Plot: 4
The plot is pretty obvious from the start. But somehow the developer manages to keep it interesting. You know how things are going to end, but it isn't quite clear how. He is still managing to keep us guessing on how the LI's husband will meet his end.

Action: 4
The game starts out with action pretty quickly. You have sex with your girlfriend pretty early on and start fooling around with the mother fairly quickly. There is sexual activity with one other character, and appears that the developer may building up to other sexual encounters with other women in the game. It's not a 5 because it isn't a f**k fest from the start.

It's a great game and I am certainly looking forward to every version of it in the future. Try it, you'll like it.

First of all, this is not an incest game. Title says 'mother' which actually made me thought this was just one of the incest games on the forum, so i avoided this game for a long while which was a very big mistake. Im not kinkshaming btw, incest can be really good too when done right. So here's the lesson of the day: Always read game descriptions first...

PROS

+Featuring probably the sexiest milf on the site, along with other hot chicks.
+Very good corruption progress.
+Good enough story to keep things interesting.
+Animations can be eh at times but overall there are many of them and most of them are amazing.
+All models are original (i easily read hundreds lot of vns on the site and i really dont remember any of them being used in any other game, maybe they got heavy alteration or something but we finally dont see 'Darius' anymore!)
+Choices affect the upcoming scenes. There are tons of choices and different renders along with them.
+Very long gameplay.
+Marilyn is a really nice bonus.
+Top quality writing. Things are done with logical explanations.

CONS

-The vn is too good in a way that it sets your standarts so high, so you might not enjoy other low quality works anymore.
-You'll be wishing Nichole was real and you could see her every day.
-You'll also wish this vn lasted forever.
-I dont know if this really considered as a con but i noticed there are no characters with dark skin (well ok i must admit i played a lot of ntr games recently, so it feels weird not seeing one haha)

Part 10 Plus Review

Renders: 3/5 They look fine, but not great. Could use more polish and re-rendering. Better lighting, most defininetly.
Animations: 3/5 The first animations aren't as good, as the game progresses they get better.
Characters: 3/5 The cast at first isn't very varied or attractive, the 'mom' is fine but it gets old and repetitive after a while. Didn't like the rest of the cast, but it seems the dev is working towards adding more girls.
Story: 3/5 Pretty bland incest-ish blackmail-ish story at first, seems to be trying to go somewhere else by the end, but it doesn't quit get anywhere for now. The pacing feels off at times.
Sex Scenes: 3/5 They are okay, not varied enough for my personal taste. The main focus is the 'mom' character.
Sound: 2/5 Needs a mod.

Plenty of content, but not enough going on, I would give it a 4 but I am giving it a 3 to peg down the ridiculous high ratings it has. Final version, will most likely get a 4.

As far as games that involve corruption/NTR/branching, this one goes well beyond the normal level of detail to keep us hooked onto the main storyline. I personally avoided the NTR just cause I don't like Beeman but I don't recall a game that plays so heavily into this concept. Your choices definitely do matter in this game.

The renders for the game are alright with the only ones really standing out being Nicole (for obvious reasons) and Silvia and maybe the MC's mom. Most of the other characters have eyebags or, in the case of John, look like he was injected with a heavy dose of botox but that's probably intentional to make him look evil.

The overall writing is decent but there's still quite a few grammatical errors that can trip up users a little bit and the dialogue can be VERY dragged on at times. A simple dialogue that shouldn't take more than 5 or 6 frames takes 20-30 and just sapped the energy from me trying to get past it.

There is a TON of content to get through but it's overall solid game at the core

I played it twice. There is heavy focus on the mother character and no thought is given to the other characters. The game also has a VERY good NTR path which is my favorite out of any game. The renders are bang average quality and the narrative is very boring! Overall it is an average game but if you just care about NTR and banging the mother, I would recommend this

i love it................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

How good is this game? I haven't played it in a bit as I have been very busy game developing and the first two words that come to my mind when I see an update is here are "Fuck Yes!" There are only a handful of games I think that for. This game is solid all around. Beautiful renders, great writing and it goes over the top on coding allowing to start at any chapter. The choices matter, and it has plenty of paths. Definitely one of the best games around. It's plentiful an sexual scenes, but at the same time has good build up and teasing. The story is very original, and you can tell just how much hard work has gone into it.

I love corruption so loved this game.

I think that was intentional? (gf has been made ugly and cheating became legal)

Some characters may be annoying but this is more realistic.
You must try this game.

Hands down one of the best game i have ever played in terms of VN not just limited to adult games, the game is pretty linear and the story is very gripping ever since day 1 the game was nothing but a sheer joy to read, i really like the evolution of the mc and the woman he is in love with like how far they came from the hostility of ep 1 to now making love in bed in ep 9 or beyond. The added twist in the story by other dark character is amusing and terrifying it keeps the reader on the edge, having said all this if this game was an erotica or just a novel by itself i would still read it the beautiful renders are just a complimentary plus in my book. Wish i could give more stars but 5 will have to suffice

Good writing doesn't need a lot of reasons. Those who understand will understand. but the writer's writing and the story are very good, so to speak, the only drawback is the lack of sound effects, which is a bit of a pity

Best game, best story, best scene........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

i Love this Story and Ntr Route..
btw if you first time play this game , i recomend you Chose Chloe mother.
coz She Amazing and her expression make my pp hard.

BUT if you make Chloe realy realy hate you you will not het Her mom Love

i love when her husband ignore her ,
Mr heavens just a ~_~ you know..

so, when this game relase at 0.5 i start Supporting this Developer, just do it, you will not regret this.

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Got her beauty

Was surprised how much I enjoyed this, especially since it revolves mostly around the one character. I wasn't so sure at the start of the game but the writing and character design definitely picked up.

Side note, the walkthrough mod forces you down a specific path and I think I would have enjoyed the other path better. Not a criticism, just a warning to other players that their are options that affect scenes with Nicole.

I Love it. Great picture lovely character and Nice Storyline, i hope this is will have a good ending and keep an update fast. love it love it love it. Great job......................................................

“A mothers love” despite all those high ratings, I found to be quite mediocre, and a game that becomes uninteresting and the characters annoying as you progress through the chapter.

The story starts with the most ridiculous situation you could imagine with the mother agreeing to offer her body to the MC in return to stop dating her daughter (What??), which is plain stupid in the logic books. There is no valid reason for her to cheat / agree to MC terms. What could have been a good Blackmail start to the story was completely ruined. The MC however made a cheap attempt by mentioning watching the GF’s mother masturbate at night, and then she just gives in, which cannot be even consider a blackmail.

I did however tried to swallow this unbelievable pill thinking the story might improve based on the ratings, but man I was wrong. As the story progressed, The characters kept on getting annoying. Chloe ( the girlfriend) is the most uninteresting character. She’s like duct tape, getting stuck to you wherever you go and It’s hard to shake her off on the girlfriend path.

The Gf’s mother on the other hand is terribly annoying. She is one lost soul and unstoppable in bitching. The MC might have fucked & creampied her a million times by chapter 9 and yet she continues her bitching like no, It’s not right, we should not do it etc etc. There is a love path for the GF’s mother as you progress, but is poorly implemented. The chloe girlfriend & banging her mom is the most boring path. The game completely locks you out of marylin’s story and bombards you with the sex scenes with the mother & daughter everytime with hours of reading unwanted plots inbetween.

The other characters are all deadwood and the most interesting path seems like the NTR one. The renders and animations are okay-ish.

This story has as much realism and is believable as those porn videos where the sister shags his stepbro on the couch besides their parents thinking they cannot watch them.

I haven't commented here yet, but I absolutely enjoy this game. Plus there are so many routes to play through. I have been trying several. Only one I won't is NTR as I am not a fan of it really. Currently trying to do a more romance path with Nicole. Less scenes, sure, but I have other runs with more scenes. So as we await the next release, that's what I am currently doing. I would definitely recommend this as it is absolutely phenomenal. A few grammatical mistakes, but renders are beautiful and story is fantastic. Best of luck with the continued success of this.

Nothing much more to say than it has a really good and captivating story and very nice scenes.

If I had one issue about it, it seems that the creator has taken a detour from the main storyline, but its currently too early for me to say if it fits in the story or not.