VN - Ren'Py - A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

Sadly I have to give this game 3 stars in its current state. Here are some reasons why I believe there could be better out there:

1. The character models are hit and miss. I think it is no coincidence that right off the bat you are introduced to the MC's GF at a rolling start, having already set the status of relationship mid-way. I think this is because the creator knows that if we could choose, the majority of us would not want to date Chloe. She is skinny, with an odd shaped head, hair that looks like a weave and the most unappealing wardrobe of anyone in the game. The creator obviously went out of his way to make Chloe look as plain and unattractive as possible in order to make our main squeeze, Nicole, look that much more appetizing by contrast. If you take out some of the other factors supporting Nicole as the MC's object, she falls short of many other Milf waifus out there. Things would be more interesting if you were dating young Nicole with her mother looking a bit more like Abigail, wrinkles and all.
2. English is definitely not the creator's first language, and it makes going through some dialogue painful to my eyes. I'm sure the creator could find the courage to ask an English speaking fan to edit this trainwreck to make it more presentable from a storytelling perspective. It's so bad you might as well skip through dialogue and make it up as you go along, using the images as hints to what is being said.
3. Sex scene animations are second-rate at best, 'nuff said.
4. Putting a (relatively difficult) minigame so early in the game is a bit jarring. I literally lost the game within 5 minutes of starting because of the nature of this unimaginative minigame. Why bother putting it in at all?
5. Later in the game the character arc forces you to be a borderline rapist around Nicole consistently. Even if you make choices that would imply passivity and calm, you are forced into situations where your character makes irrational, risky and rapey moves. What's the point of giving us choices that make us as the player seem like a kind and caring sort, but force us to act out in an irrational and aggressive manner anyway?
6. The creator hyped up this character defining choice mid way through and towards the end the game forces our hand anyway??? Why remind us constantly that there is this choice on the horizon, making us feel like we should remember what is going on in order to make an informed decision later on, and then steal that choice from us? This just seems lazy and uninspired to me.
7. The creator goes out of his way to make John seem like a bastard to us the player, while at the same time not making it as apparent to the MC. This is a way of breaking the 4th wall in a way that ruins immersion for some people. It takes us out of the shoes of the character and forces us to make borderline sociopathic choices simply because we the player know things that the MC does not. I could go easy on this part of my criticism because it's probably the least problematic thing about the story, but it's still irksome.

I know that's a lot of complaints for a 3 star review, but because of the nature of erotic games like this, there is a lot of room for doubt and forgiveness- especially since there is a lot of story here. Most of these issues can be solved, so I'm looking forward to some improvements one way or another.

Really good game with a LOT of content and different path. Very linear game and no grinding at all.

I highly recommend it !

Pros :
- Great render (the mom in particular)
- Wide story
- Lot of content

Cons :
- Chloe doesn't look pretty good

Looking forward for future updates and I hope this project will continue!

4/5

Good story and graphic
9/10 support dev if you love to see more chapters
I love the mother attitude toward MC, somewhat realistic.
The others character are also good, except the daughter ( at least at this time chap 5 )
And the choices, jesus so forgiving and interesting

Honestly this game reminds me of the old romance novels that my mom had. Sultry, forbidden and kinky.

The graphics, characters, shading - basically the look of the game is subpar. But the story is what keeps me going. Part 1-5, was an extensive amount of dialogue and pictures.

It's not a type of game where the sex scenes are the foundation. It's the story. So, read away boys and girls

This is my review of the game "A mother's love" Part 5.

This game sounds interesting at first and checking other peoples opinions about this game makes for a promising game. Yet once I finally downloaded those 5 GB I only lasted for about an hour before giving up. Let's break it down abit in my own kind of style.

Story 3/5 -> The story is pretty average (at least what I got to experience). It's about a boy that has a girlfriend but becomes in love with her mother that doesn't like him one bit. A typical "Grass is greener on the other side" kind of situation but I have to give it that it is at least somewhat interesting.

Dialog choices 1/5 -> I really don't see how the dialog options change anything in this game except for a few dialog changes. It's either you corrupt the girlfriends mother, or it's game over. Yes it's once of those kind of games where a "wrong choice = Game Over." So you better get that walk-through ready, you will need it... and I hate those kind of games.
Also worth noting is that there is a mini game where you have to spam the same spot to "sneak around" so the mother won't notice you. If you fail, you guessed it, it's game over.

Sexual Content + spelling 4/5 -> The spelling is good enough to fool me and despite me not lasting in this game for that long, I did at least find a few sexual content in this game that was enjoyable.

Domination/bdsm 2/5 -> The game promises some domination path and reading what other users say about the game it seems like it is there, but all that I could gather was just a horny teenager stressed out about meeting the girlfriends father and the mother trying everything to get rid of you. It has some hints that you might be able to dominate the mother once you corrupt her enough, but I didn't last long enough in the game to bother looking for it.

Pregnancy 0/5 -> This game does not have a pregnancy in it and doesn't look like it has one, though that might change in the coming updates.

Overall this game gets 10/25 which means it gets 40% or 2 stars. I was really disappointed in this game and don't really think it is worthy of those 5GB in download. As you can see from other ratings not everyone agrees with me so if you find this game enjoyable that's fine. It's just not my cup of tea.

My star rating system:
0-20% -> 1 star
20-40% -> 2 star
40-60% -> 3 star
60-80% -> 4 star
80-100% -> 5 star

A summary... this game is a solid one and I feel it is worthy of that 5 star ranking. Any newcomer should download and play this game ASAP!

Has to be one of the best porn games I've played most the issues are minor.
There are some spelling and other similar issue not sure if English is a second language for the person but that would explain it.
The general story line is good better than most. From what I seen at the current stage of development. Currently ending with the sex scene in the laundry room.

If you bother to read along and follow the story you might get a bit invested. Frankly I want to strangle the MC for risking hurting the daughter a bit. The daughters father is a real scum bag. Needs to loose everything.

I can see a huge potential for this to go a number of weighs. I kind of hope the MC cleans his act up some since he accept the job from the father and uses it to spy on him and learn to run the company and then reveal everything to the wife so she can clean the scum bag out in divorce court. Of course with some of the crap already seen and suggested in the game the Mr. Heavens could get substantial jail time on top of it. Then someone would be needed to run the company.

Here we have a sociopath jerk that blackmail's his girlfriend's beautiful Mother into having sex with him. He deceives his loving girlfriend as well. It is well-written and the renders are beautiful but the extortion isn't. I tried to avoid major evil and couldn't.

From the very beginning of this game, it has had me hooked. It has excellent graphics, story, and sexy scenes. Every single female character is hot; the girlfriend is perfect for the story, she looks vulnerable and innocent, and does have that tone of caring for the protagonist; Marilyn, does have that odd ball look that is also alluring; but the mother, whom is absolutely gorgeous, she definitely steal the cake. The story itself is splendid, and the choices that we can make really creates that feeling of immersion with the the fruitful amount of agency we have, making every scene ever so much more sexier. The scenes themselves are great, and the build ups feel earned. As every single day passes, the temptation of Nicole’s desire faintly increases until she eventually gives in, its gloriously arousing, to be quite frank. The struggle in the game also feels real, should we bow to the contract that we have made to the mother, or should we continue to see Chloe? Should we falter to Marilyn or Nicole, despite Chloe having feelings for the protagonist? There are other bigger dilemmas, and some more subtle ones that make this story a very interesting one. I strongly recommend this game if you enjoy stories where you steal another man's girl, if you like corruption, or if you like milfs; either way it's a solid game, and I can't wait for what's in store in the future of this developer.

5/5

Believe all the hype!!! This game is absolutely perfect. Great Story, Fantastic Scenes, Awesome twists and turns, great variety and one of the best MILFs of all time.

PROS

- Basically everything you could ask for. No grind, No point and click, No repetitive BS, No crappy dialogue.
- You beat the crap out of a dbag and take his girl, The dialogue bar is utilized in a unique way during cam girl scenes, all antagonists in this game are vulnerable for revenge from the MC, choices matter, Memorable sex scenes, pay off to build-ups, doesnt take itself too serious, MC is not annoying wimp or creepy dbag. I hope Devs pay attention to all the latter descriptions because alongside a unique story this is the recipe for a great game.
- Character comes to her own terms on her own accord without forcing her to. This is more of a deprived housewife longing for affection so no corny plot devices such as sex slavery, corruption, or creepy daterape vibes. No supernatural BS either...


CONS

- OK, maybe a slight amount of supernatural BS but its all centered around an annoying character that is not well received. Her design is sexy but she hampers the story at times. Skip her and you should be fine.

One of the few games where I eagerly look forward to the next release.
The Male lead is forgettable enough. The main hook to this one is the amazing female lead that has been created with a likeable and vulnerable character and beautiful design.

This game is actually good. Graphics, story, most characters.
But there is also Mrs.Heavens!
Every time she meets the MC, you can feel the crackling tension between them.
In these moments, you would like to award with 6/5 stars.


Tested: Part 1-4

Pros:
- good renders quality
- very hot and stunning milf
- storyline, storytelling (especially MC<->Nicole)
- amount of gameplay
- choices with consequences

Neutral:
- animations
- some spellings
- few errors (missing pics)

Cons:
-no music/sound

C. 1-2 and C. 3-4 are like two completely different games.

In the first game, MC is an aggressive, manipulative dom who imposes himself to corrupt a chaste and demure MILF.

In the 2nd game, MC is a love sick submissive puppy who pines after a MILF with a very " experienced" past.

If these were two separate standalone games, each could have been fine. I'd have rated C. 1.-2 a 5/5, in fact. Mushed together, however, and it just doesn't work. Some things just don't mix. It's like dumping a strawberry milkshake into a single-malt whiskey.

In blackmail stories, it's the victim not the perp who becomes submissive not vice versa. Going from an MC who forcibly finger fucks the MILF in a restaurant while her husband and daughter are in the next room to one who, in a few short days, becomes a passive-submissive agonizing on why she doesn't call and sits on park benches whining to a 'random' jogger about true love - truly a "da fuk?" turn for me.

2/5

The characters are OK. They could have used some work. but Nicole is out of this world. The moment i saw her i feel in love. She goes to my top five. The story is nice not many twists and turns you could have added a bit of it but then again simplicity has its own charm. i love the game. Chloe character could have used some work. She looks bit boring for an VN. The cliffhanger at the end of chapter was nice . I want to see how the developers handle it. Will stay with the game till the end. I scene i hated was that MC kinda blackmailed (to some extent- though its optional) Nicole into having sex on the hospital bed. Overall nice going. You created a masterpiece and that is Nicole and hoping that you realize that. Nicole -MC-Chloe harem - if the developers try to incorporate would be bad for business . What makes the game hot is the on and off some time blackmail MC and Nicole relationship. don't destroy that. Hoping good times will prevail. Thank you.

The render are decent but hardly good and a lot have light issues. I also didn't find any of models especially attractive. Animations though were well done.

Although it appears a lot of choices and paths it is just bells and whistles and you locked into the mother path no matter what which makes whatever you doing with two other characters totally pointless, in fact if you don't fully embrace corrupting mother you get blocked from a lot of daughter scenes. Is no way to remain loyal to girlfriend.

The MC is ridiculously contradictory, a supposed considerate acting guy who supposedly cares for these women but happily exploiting and cheating away, there is no point trying to make character likable when doing a story like this, in fact it just makes it more unbelievable.
Story is very plain and lacks any spar, just lots of cheating and betrayal but very weak on motivations and reasons. Seriously one week before exams what parent would try to separate them and create emotional chaos at such a time and resort to those methods. I find it funny people bagging out the Psychic as unbelievable but thinking this was more believable.

The characters are also pretty dull, the only one that interesting was one most people disliked and that's the psychic at least she was quirky and her personality actually matched her actions unlike any other character,

Played part 3!
If you are into Blackmail, MILFS and some slow burn corruption, then this game provides for you.
The premise is maybe a bit weak: Mom wants you away from her daughter because she thinks you are a bad influence. Eh, it might not be the most original plot, but it's a very well executed effort and deserves some attention on f95.
The dialog and story is written more then believable enough and should give nothing to complain.
Of course the main focus of this game is your girlfriends mother, Nicole, if you do not find her model very attractive, I still recommend you try this out because the road from 'strict mom' to 'willing fucktoy' is looking to be very fun one to enjoy.

The game is a mixed bag. Nicole is wonderful, Marilyn is horrible, and Chloe is not terribly appealing.

The game starts off with Nicole asking you to stop seeing her daughter Chloe because she is worried that you are a bad influence on her and will bring down her grades. So you are given the choice to request something from Nicole in exchange for promising to leave her daughter alone. Whether or not you keep your word is up to you, so the game has more than one route. The characters have distinct personalities, although Chloe has some serious inconsistencies with her character. Not that it matters since it's Nicole that makes the game worth playing.

Then there is Marilyn, who serves no purpose and makes the game far less enjoyable. She is a blight on the game and I have no idea why she exists at all. I can't really say too much about her without venturing into spoilers, but she is the reason that I'm rating the game at three stars instead of five.

if you're reading this just download already, you won't be disappointed.

Exceptional quality. Exceptional execution. Compelling story. Good H scenes. I've encountered no bugs or typos.

I wasn't sold on the primes from the description, but I'm glad I tried it. The friend is a bit shoehorned in but for good reason. More H and to break up the main story. I kinda felt bad for both the mom and daughter. Which beats most games on the site with no emotion whatsoever. If there is a possibility of porn games being art this is a step in the right direction.

My Rating of this Game ([Part 3 Plus )is:

Pros:
+ Fantastic Renders
+ Nice Story
+ Long Game Play
+ Easy Playing
+Active Play
+Nice Closeups
+Great Animations
Cons:
-None

Conclusion:
The Mother is hot as hell.
also the game play is pretty long with the last update,loved every minute playing the Game.

It is definitely worth the download.

I love a good story and OrbOrgin in my opinion is giving us that... so far. I've seen a lot of short story VN's from this Dev but this particular one is their best work.

Also I'm amazed at how much content is packed in the 3 parts. A lot of Dev's like to stall way too much but not OrbOrgin. I respect that and will support the project.