VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[Draakaap23]

I found a glitch/story fuck up in the NTR-Chloe path

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[RC-1138 Boss]

The photo of Abigail's sister and her similarities to Chloe, now explains Beeman's obsession with Chloe and some of his jackass behavior towards MC. The so-called mystery drama with MC's parents hiding something from MC is dwelling on for too long now, clearly it concerns MC for them not to let him see the aunt's information. MC being adopted is the only thing i can think as to why his parent were uptight about it. MC being John's son could be a red herring, with it being a coincidence that John's having bastard children with other men's wives & girlfriends.

Author already said time and again there won't be any incest. So no.

 

[K18]

Author already said time and again there won't be any incest. So no.

I wasn't even suggesting that. I was saying the MC-John theory was an intentional misdirection to hide whatever the real reason is behind MC's parents secrecy.

 

[BLACkTORNAD0]

I get this error every time during a scene whenever MC calls Nicole by her first name. I just ignore & continue on, but it happens every time. Happened in the previous update too.

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So what happened to the replay gallery for the other girls in the menu.

On the story this update, cool seeing Nicole taking a little more initiative with MC and without our persuasion and is now questioning John more. I guess the same can be said for Chloe too, taking initiative by practicing with the dildo for MC. I kind of wish their were multiple options to response to Marilyn like prank her back, instead of being seemingly dismissive towards her fully (Playing the Route as her friend & doing the webcam sex events). Also, I wished their was more renders in the scene with Marilyn and MC, visually showing her follow after MC to the car, apologizing to him and them hug each other.

While I'm contempt with seeing the MC sleep with just Nicole, Marilyn, and Chloe. It would be nice to get confirmation if whether or not anything sexual will happen between MC and Sylvia or Abigail, with these two being the other few relevant characters. MC and Abigail, i'm curious like will the teasing lead to anything, even if it's a one-time fling. MC and Sylvia, well i just like Sylvia's looks and curious how'd that dynamic play out (like would John be involved or not?), plus i'm personally tried of seeing John and Sylvia at the beginning of every update.

This update it was interesting that Sylvia was concerned enough to mention MC's and Nicole's whereabouts. I doubt it, but maybe she start keeping tabs on MC. At least we learn the guy in Sylvia's photo is her indeed fiance. I wonder what's the endgame with Sylvia? Is she freed from John's grip on her, is she a lost cause from being saved, does she and MC form some companionship or becomes MC's plaything too as gift from John? Speaking of John, what made him think of Nicole as this boring woman and when did it start? Was after their marriage, after they had Chloe, or did he ever genuinely care about Nicole and married her out of personal benefits or image?

The photo of Abigail's sister and her similarities to Chloe, now explains Beeman's obsession with Chloe and some of his jackass behavior towards MC. The so-called mystery drama with MC's parents hiding something from MC is dwelling on for too long now, clearly it concerns MC for them not to let him see the aunt's information. MC being adopted is the only thing i can think as to why his parent were uptight about it. MC being John's son could be a red herring, with it being a coincidence that John's having bastard children with other men's wives & girlfriends.

Damn bro you just summed up the entire story so far i would too like some abigail action to assert dominance on that shit head beeman seriously wanna beat that blog looking guy. I played both ways of story but at this point i dont know how many branches are there have to look at the walkthrough. This game just brings more and more indepth story with every update

 

[Max1276]

another amazing update im in love with Nicole day by day more and more and i want really kick in the balls this piece of shit jhon can't wait for the next

 

[harsha_26]

Have you ever play mirror mine?

I didn't played it. It got a dual route right? one with milf, one with girl. And dev said both are full fledged routes. But girl path is not yet developed but it will be future.
So, yeah, it's not a game which is on single focused love instrest.

In "A mother's love" game, chole is the not main love interest character. Her path largely concerns with NTR path.

 

[Deleted member 1023239]

I didn't played it. It got a dual route right? one with milf, one with girl. And dev said both are full fledged routes. But girl path is not yet developed but it will be future.
So, yeah, it's not a game which is on single focused love instrest.

In "A mother's love" game, chole is the not main love interest character. Her path largely concerns with NTR path.

It hardy to call her milf and compared her to Nicole it is more gilf to me with all wrinkles on her, and yea it is dual route

 

[DarkDestro]

Whats the best "way" to go for the love route with the mother? Like avoid any corruption points or??

Like do i also accept money or still go for the nicole payment option ?

Edit: Nvm the 2nd question, the game just ends if you take the money XD

 

[Ranting Old Man]

So what's the NTR, Chole dating that teacher?

 

[thorin0815]

So what's the NTR, Chole dating that teacher?

Yup.

 

[Ranting Old Man]

Yup.

So basically the mother fucks up her daughters life further. Some mothers love. Guess since teacher is creepy ill never do NTR path. But I'm confused, how is it NTR if you break up with Chole?

 

[thorin0815]

If I remember right, Chloe started to meet Beeman when she felt neglected by the MC, officially they were still in some kind of a relationship.

 

[TotoJackson]

Hey all, just started playing this game and I had a quick question regarding the Nicole routes.

Would it be right to assume that there are two main routes to the game, a corruption route and a love route? In whic the correuption route has you doing all the sex options, and the love route is you being "nice?" Or am I mistaken?

Just wanted to get some idea before I really dive in (I've literallly just started), and I kinda wanna go for a love route.

 

[thorin0815]

Hey all, just started playing this game and I had a quick question regarding the Nicole routes.

Would it be right to assume that there are two main routes to the game, a corruption route and a love route? In whic the correuption route has you doing all the sex options, and the love route is you being "nice?" Or am I mistaken?

Just wanted to get some idea before I really dive in (I've literallly just started), and I kinda wanna go for a love route.

In the love route you are going to miss some early sex action. I played both and I liked the love route far more, even though Nicole falls in love with MC in the corruption route as well.

But yeah, like IRL be nice to her for the love route.

 

[Ranting Old Man]

If I remember right, Chloe started to meet Beeman when she felt neglected by the MC, officially they were still in some kind of a relationship.

I see, I'm still not convinced it's NTR though. Beeman has to Steal away from and MC is actually letting her go. So in my opinion that's just there for some quick NTR bucks. Still it's a dumb side story. Beeman is such an uninteresting character and Nicole not noticing that this man is slowly taking advantage of her daughter whom she supposedly had so much love for that she was willing to fuck MC is way stupid. She should at some point, to remain a decent story, come down on him and if she fails to do that, then her love for her daughter is all bullshit and kills the immersion of the game.

But this is just my opinion, others are obviously allowed to like it and disagree. I still very much like the romance with Nicole just think that side story is retarded.

 

[TotoJackson]

In the love route you are going to miss some early sex action. I played both and I liked the love route far more, even though Nicole falls in love with MC in the corruption route as well.

But yeah, like IRL be nice to her for the love route.

Thanks bro. So just to confirm, I want to avoid all the sex options at the beginning?

 

[thorin0815]

Thanks bro. So just to confirm, I want to avoid all the sex options at the beginning?

It's been a while since I've played it from the start. But in principle yes, if the actions of the MC feel somehow forced, then better let them be.

You can always check your corruption points after your actions with Nicole, negative points are love points.

 

[TotoJackson]

It's been a while since I've played it from the start. But in principle yes, if the actions of the MC feel somehow forced, then better let them be.

Alright got it, thanks for taking the timme to reply man, appreciate it!

 

[LWtbo]

I see, I'm still not convinced it's NTR though. Beeman has to Steal away from and MC is actually letting her go. So in my opinion that's just there for some quick NTR bucks. Still it's a dumb side story. Beeman is such an uninteresting character and Nicole not noticing that this man is slowly taking advantage of her daughter whom she supposedly had so much love for that she was willing to fuck MC is way stupid. She should at some point, to remain a decent story, come down on him and if she fails to do that, then her love for her daughter is all bullshit and kills the immersion of the game.

But this is just my opinion, others are obviously allowed to like it and disagree. I still very much like the romance with Nicole just think that side story is retarded.

Good point however NTR do's not have to always result in the girl being stolen to be NTR.
NTR has many forms including sub forms like cheating.
Being fucked by the teacher while dating you is cheating and so is a form of NTR.

You only break up with her after the fact and you witness it and thats only if you outright confront her and tell her you know other wise she continuse to date you while cheating and the intention of beeman is to try and steal her from you if you do continue to date her.

The strange part is the way she fucks beeman comepared to how she fucks you.
Which the Dev attempts to explain with the use of Marilyn which you only really find out about if you follow Chloe seems strange route.

And the reason Nicole dosn't do anything about Beeman is because unless in this last update someone got round to telling her about him and chloe she dosn't actually know.

Beemans is a slimeball but not that stupid he makes sure its kept as quite as possible and the MC who do's know for some reason wont do anything about it either.

And unless someone told him too fairly sure even low life John probably wouldn't be too happy if he knew either.
Really must try the update just to make sure no one told Nicole or John yet as I'm only guessing.

As for not noticing many parents no matter how odservant they think they are don't always know who their kids do or don't see or what they do or dont do unless they have them locked in a room 24/7.

For instance most inappropriate relationships normaly only come to light by errors from thoughs involved like the child confiding in a friend who then tells her friends and so on ect untill its unitentionaly said infront of someone that decides to take action.
Or they slip up act , say or do somthing inappropriate and are seen by others who know its not right.

 

[Ranting Old Man]

Good point however NTR do's not have to always result in the girl being stolen to be NTR.
NTR has many forms including sub forms like cheating.
Being fucked by the teacher while dating you is cheating and so is a form of NTR.

You only break up with her after the fact and you witness it and thats only if you outright confront her and tell her you know other wise she continuse to date you while cheating and the intention of beeman is to try and steal her from you if you do continue to date her.

The strange part is the way she fucks beeman comepared to how she fucks you.
Which the Dev attempts to explain with the use of Marilyn which you only really find out about if you follow Chloe seems strange route.

And the reason Nicole dosn't do anything about Beeman is because unless in this last update someone got round to telling her about him and chloe she dosn't actually know.

Beemans is a slimeball but not that stupid he makes sure its kept as quite as possible and the MC who do's know for some reason wont do anything about it either.

And unless someone told him too fairly sure even low life John probably wouldn't be too happy if he knew either.
Really must try the update just to make sure no one told Nicole or John yet as I'm only guessing.

As for not noticing many parents no matter how odservant they think they are don't always know who their kids do or don't see or what they do or dont do unless they have them locked in a room 24/7.

For instance most inappropriate relationships normaly only come to light by errors from thoughs involved like the child confiding in a friend who then tells her friends and so on ect untill its unitentionaly said infront of someone that decides to take action.
Or they slip up act , say or do somthing inappropriate and are seen by others who know its not right.

Sorry I don't buy that shit. Nicole was quick on the gun to notice the changes when Chole was with you. There is no way she wouldn't notice. It's a dumb story and Dev can't justify how dumb it is. NTR storys are almost always just retarded. Also why wouldn't MC tell Nicole? Firstly he's being cheated on. Secondly he hates Beeman. It's dumb makes no fucking sense. This is literally my only issue with the story. I dont hate NTR I hate bad NTR, not my fault most NTR is just written terribly. I will give this as a credit at least however. At least Beeman isn't the stereotype Antagonist for NTR. Just wish the story was better for it. What a waste. Hopefully Dev will give some consequences to both MC and Beeman when involving Chole (Cheating and NTR path). The last thing Dev should consider is neither or just one of them having consequences at the end of the story.