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Is there any information about the progress so far? Like how much is left to be rendered ? (Wasn't this question posed to him in the new post?)
I wonder why doesn't he add a percentage bar to show the route of development and progress..
The thing is he will not comment anything on the date.. he'll try to be on time but just in case of delay , there's lots of backlash...so he decided not to commit on dates yet.
 

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I firmly believe each potential Anna partner/stalker will get a turn slowly corrupting her. First up was Chris. Next will be Jake and so on. So, potentially that’s four updates focusing mainly on the interested parties. Potentially, it could be 2025 before Anna gets the deep cleaning she needs. Corruption VNs always walk the line between build up and pay off. It will be interesting to see how this Dev, who I support and think talented, balances the two. Personally, I think Anna needs to go down the rabbit hole before 2025. It could be December, but may be highly dependent on the steadfastness of the subs.
 

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The thing is he will not comment anything on the date.. he'll try to be on time but just in case of delay , there's lots of backlash...so he decided not to commit on dates yet.
thanks Couto25

I get that giving dates wasn't so fun for him last time, but do you think it would be good to ask about progress of expected scenes?

For example:

> Post-shower dress up for work - done
> Arrive at work - minor scenes with Marvin/Jake - in progress
> Lunch with Kendra - in progress
> Afternoon meeting with Jake - discuss gift for his gf - not started
> After work shopping - not started
> Shopping texts to Chris - not started
> Nighttime with David or without - not started

It could be worded in a way to not spoil, but at least give a clue where he's at. Just a thought.
 

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thanks Couto25

I get that giving dates wasn't so fun for him last time, but do you think it would be good to ask about progress of expected scenes?

For example:

> Post-shower dress up for work - done
> Arrive at work - minor scenes with Marvin/Jake - in progress
> Lunch with Kendra - in progress
> Afternoon meeting with Jake - discuss gift for his gf - not started
> After work shopping - not started
> Shopping texts to Chris - not started
> Nighttime with David or without - not started

It could be worded in a way to not spoil, but at least give a clue where he's at. Just a thought.
He said no spoilers too lol...so whatever info freebies will see...the same subscribers will get too story wise.
 
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Corruption VNs always walk the line between build up and pay off.
Completely true. I would love to see her gettig nailed all over every 5 minutes, but it would be worth nothing.
Actually, the latest update, the shower scene, was for me the tipping point. I already felt like: Oh my, that's where the built-up goes. The will be no more that extremly high anticipated scene in this game. Olympus has fallen, everything else will be good, but second best.

It is like christmas as child. Waiting for it from the end of November, making present-lists, singing, baking, waiting, dreaming, having small feasts on the sundays up to it. This was the game until the second last update. Then, christmas arrives, unboxing the presents like in last update, and playing with them for a first time, like this uptdate. Already, a part of the magic is gone for good, but the ability to finally play shadows it. But the next day? The next update? You know what you got and are happy to play with it, for days and weeks, but there is no more magic, no more uncertainty, no more real build-up.
 

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He said no spoilers too lol...so whatever info freebies will see...the same subscribers will get too story wise.
And I like it this way...like be same to all audiences atleast there will not be any fight between paid and free members and everyone will be on the same page lol...beside release of the update...all members are treated same knowing nothing about the udpate and few sneak peeks with no clue what is the plot about lol..that way developer is also happy that even if members share here in forum, they get nothing ( like Ana drinking tea in break ) run your brain what that kind of sneak peek is all about. lol ...and all members on this forum will also be on the same page. No fight like in other gaming thread between supporters and freebies lol because as a member we dont have any info on the update too..whenever he will launch, he will launch that's all we got lol.
 
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Completely true. I would love to see her gettig nailed all over every 5 minutes, but it would be worth nothing.
Actually, the latest update, the shower scene, was for me the tipping point. I already felt like: Oh my, that's where the built-up goes. The will be no more that extremly high anticipated scene in this game. Olympus has fallen, everything else will be good, but second best.

It is like christmas as child. Waiting for it from the end of November, making present-lists, singing, baking, waiting, dreaming, having small feasts on the sundays up to it. This was the game until the second last update. Then, christmas arrives, unboxing the presents like in last update, and playing with them for a first time, like this uptdate. Already, a part of the magic is gone for good, but the ability to finally play shadows it. But the next day? The next update? You know what you got and are happy to play with it, for days and weeks, but there is no more magic, no more uncertainty, no more real build-up.
What are you smoking? The magic is gone, why cause you finally saw her naked in the shower which should have been in every update. So handys are all you need huh, games over now for you :ROFLMAO:
If all you need is hj scenes then go play AWAM cause after 7 years that’s as far as Sophia goes:ROFLMAO:
 

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Part three

Everything Anna knew about Marvin was nothing more than lies made up by him and Keandra. In fact, he had never been married. He had never even had a girlfriend until now. It wasn't just because he was an ugly man. His soul was as vile as his appearance. He was a sneaky, ignorant, corrupt scumbag who had no respect for anything. If he came across a flower on his way, he would crush it instead of going around it. Knowing him even a little was enough to hate him, probably even his mother didn't have any like for him. Moreover, he was a pervert. He spent most of his free time watching porn and having endless masturbation sessions. The real few sexual experiences he had were with cheap, old, ugly whores. Normally, a flawless beauty like Anna wouldn't waste even a second of her time for him. But an extraordinary, deceitful and mysterious web of events had brought them to this point.

The old bastard, who had been dreaming of this moment for long years, wasted no time and grabbed his cock with one hand and aligned it with the entrance to her channel. The young blonde panicked as she felt the spongy, mushroom-shaped huge head of his cock pressing against her pussy lips. But before she could react, he suddenly violently thrust his hairy hips forward and impaled his thick cock into her tight pussy with one thrust. The big head of it disappeared into her in a moment. Anna wasn't ready for this yet, her piercing blue eyes opened wide and she let out a long scream.

"ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH"

Then he immediately grasped her waist tightly with both hands and began to drive his dick deep inside her without any hesitation. She could feeling the hard knots of his overly gnarled cock rubbing roughly against the walls of her pussy stretched to its limits.

"ARGGGHHHH!.... MARVIN! WAİT! WAIT!.... ARGGGGHHHHH!" She barely called out to him between her screams.

With ignored about her demand, he continued to fill her until he was resting his limp hairy crotch against her firm ass cheeks. As finally he buried his dick to the hilt in her, her pussy lips clamped tightyly on the base of his cock like a vice. They cried out loudly together, the old pervert with pleasure, while the young blonde with shock.

"ARRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH"

"OHHHHHHHHHHHH"

She'd never felt this full before. David's cock was an average thickness. It couldn't compare to the monster filling her right now. Without waiting for her recover, he started pulling his dick out of her by flexing her pussy lips outwards. When he had pulled out half of it, he suddenly stuffed it all back into her in one powerful thrust. Then the same way again and again and again and again... It was obvious that she was having a hard time handling him, but the old pervert didn't care. He was shaking her world to its foundations every time by burying his dick up to his balls in her her impossible tightness.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Marvin built up a rhythm with deep and hard thrusts that made her scream each time. She tried to stand but the old bastard quickly placed one hand on her back forcing her to stay down on the counter. She desperately reached forward with right arm and grasped the iron rod of the faucet tightly as if her life depended on it. She had her other hand balled into a tight fist on the counter. She couldn't suppress her screams as he continued to stuff her again and again.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Then he gathered the fabric of her t-shirt in his palm, and used it as leverage, increasing his speed. As he was still holding her waist tightly with his other hand he was fucking her by blowing his large hips violently back and forth. Their flesh waved together as his loose hairy crotch made a sharp slapping sound each time it hit her firm ass cheeks. Anna couldn't stand still now. She placed her hands on the counter for support and raised and lowered her upper body repeatedly, as if doing push-ups. The old bastard suddenly reached forward and firmly grabbed the base of her ponytail with his right hand and pulled hard, forcing her to upright. Then he quickly wrapped his left arm around both arms from her behind and started fucking her standing up. Because Anna was at least an inch and a half taller than him, he was standing on his tiptoes. Even this position could not slow down his pace. His huge hairy flaccid sack was slapping the back of her legs over and over again. He continued to pull her hair hard until the back of her head rested on his left shoulder. Her scalp was stinging from his tight grip. Deep wrinkles formed on her normally smooth forehead as she grimacing. As she was howled towards the ceiling, revealed snow-white teeth that sparkled like pearls,

"UUUUGGGHHHHHH... UUUUGGGGHHHHHH... UUUUGGGGHHHHHH

After six-seven minutes, her tight pussy had adapted well to his huge tool. The pleasure was shocking. While still holding her hair tightly with one hand, he released her arms and hastily gethared her t-shirt, the straps of which had already slipped off her shoulders, towards her waist. He grabbed her now completely naked left breast with hairy hand and squeezed it hard without ever letting go. Her firm flesh was jutting out between his thick fingers. Anna reached left arm behind her and placed hand on his protruding beer stomach, hoping to gain some control over his thrusts. She instinctive gathered the fabric of his sweat-soaked shirt in her palm and squeezed it tightly. Her movement caused the buttons of his shirt to break off, revealing a large portion of his hairy belly. His reaction was to tighten his grip on her breast and hair and fuck her even harder.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH”

He locked his mouth on her neck again and began sucking and nibbling roughly. Soon red marks started to appear all over her neck as his stinky drool ran down her tanned skin. But she wasn't in a position to worry about that. All she could focus on was the thick, his gnarly big cock that was turning her inside out. Extremely overwhelmed, the young blonde was shaking her head wildly from side to side, even though she was gripping her hair tightly by him. So much so that hair, once tied into a tight ponytail, began to loosen in his hairy hand. She braced her elbows and forearms firmly on the counter to support herself when Marvin roughly pushed her from behind and bent her over again. She was arched her back as far towards him as possible like a strung bow, the old pervert could count every vertebra in her spinal cord. The heavy effect he had on her made him even hornier. He increased his speed even more while holding her waist tightly with both hands. Upper of her fit body was jolting violently from the solid blows she received from behind and her big firm breasts were swaying back and forth. His hairly, saggy groin and her flawles firm ass-cheeks were starting to blush from being slammed together non-stop.
Now this balding ignorant asshole, older than her father, was showing her the difference between the make love and being fucked. As the two howled together, sharp slaps echoed repeatedly in the kitchen.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Having been getting the fuck of her life for twenty minutes, Anna knew that the orgasm that was building inside her would be unlike anything she had ever experienced before. Suddenly, her screams stopped and her whole body began to tremble from head to toe. Realizing what was coming, the sneaky bastard buried his dick to the hilt in her and stayed there. Then he grabbed her ponytail and shoulder and forced her to stand up until her back rest to his chest again. A significant part of the front of his shapeless body was stuck to the back of her fit body. His sticky sweat was oozing thickly through the forest of hair on his flaccid chest, smearing her flawless skin.

Her mouth still was wide open, but her loudly screams had been replaced by a silent scream. He let go of her hair and shoulder grabbing her breasts tightly and pulled her even more towards him. He imprisoned her completely with tight embrace. Her already tight pussy latched onto the base of his cock to death. But even that couldn't stop him, as the old bastard rose up on his toes, gaining extra depth inside her until his massive balls were crushed behind her legs. He started flexing his dick inside her engorged pussy. A guttural scream ripped from the top of the lungs of the young blonde, who had been silent for a while.

"OHHHHHH MYYYYYY GODDDDDDD!!! ARRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!"

With that, her bodily fluids began to squirt onto the base of his cock and his crotch as her whole body was shuddering. Her spasms were so intense that he held her breasts tighter than ever to keep her violently convulsing body under control. She couldn't suppress her screams.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Her tight pussy was clenching around the base of his dick to the death while it trying to milk the giant load in his balls by twitching repeatedly. However, it effort was in vain, the old bastard wasn't even close to cumming. She didn't know what she was getting into. She was trapped in his tight hugged as she went wild with a devastating orgasm. She needed some space but the old pervert continued to embrace her tightly from behind, without taking his dick out of her even an inch. Her bodily fluids soaked his massive balls, groin, inner thighs, and pants around his ankles by gushing out one after another.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Extremely overwhelmed, the young blonde lifted one foot off the ground and started stomping while shaking her head wildly from side to side. He was now having a hard time keeping her under control. The two of them began to stumble backwards together, but they nearly fell as his feet caught on his pants that were around his ankles. At the last moment he managed to guide her to the refrigerator and pin her against it. While all this was happening, he didn't pull his cock even an inch, it up to the hilt was still inside her tight pussy. Anna pressed her palms on its gray surface whle groaning deeply.

As Marvin pressed her back with one hand, with his other hand he ripped off the remaining buttons of his sweaty shirt. So his loose chest and protruding beer belly, covered in dense curly black hair, were fully exposed. As soon as her crazy orgasm, which had been going on for long minutes, finally started to subside, he hurriedly started working his dick in and out of her pussy again. The old pervert wasn't giving her any chance to collect herself. Her deep moans turned into screams again.

"AHHHHHH!.... OHHHHHH!... AHHHHHHH!

He grabbed her ponytail in his sweaty palm and increased his speed. Soon the sharp slapping sounds began to echo again. Driven crazy Anna turned her right hand into a tight fist and started beating the refrigerator. The heavly effect he was having on the young blonde was driving him crazy. He continued to grabbed her by her hair by resting his right forearm and elbow on her back, while his other hand grasped her T-shirt and skirt gethared around her waist and he started fucking her like a man possessed. As he increased his speed even more, his cock and hairy wide hips blured. Unable to hold on any longer, the young blonde's knees began to buckle, but the old pervert used the tight grip on her hair to force her to stand upright.

His pounces were so hard that the sound of things being scattering and falling over could be heard inside the shaking refrigerator. There was complete chaos in the kitchen.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Never slowing down his pace, he fucked her like this for another about twenty minutes. Having never experienced anything like this before, Anna's mind was numb in a fog of pleasure and lust. Now the old pervert too was very close to his first orgasm. He felt his swolled balls overflow with the heavy essance drawn from the farthest corners of her body. With one last powerful thrust he rammed his cock to the hilt into her tight pussy and stayed there. Anna panicked when she felt his thick cock twitch violently deep inside her. She knew what was coming, but she didn't have the strength to object. She could only moan.

"ARRGHHHHH... UUGGHHHH... UNGHHHHH"

The old pervert held her one shoulder and hair tightly with both hands and started to squirt his heavy load from the tip of his dick, roaring like a wild animal.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!"

His wildness hit her hard again. She was squirting all over his cock and hairy balls as he shoted huge masses of his semen deep inside her, one after another. As two howled together, he put his ugly face in her hair and rested forehad on the back of her head.

"UNNNNGGGHHHHH... .UNNNNGGGHHHHH... .UNNNNGGGHHHHH..."

Both of their bodies were shaking from head to toe, as if they had been struck by a strong electric current. Every muscle in his hairy loose ass contracted and relaxed over and over again as he continued to squirt inside her. The pressure of his first five squirts was incredible, his sperms was jerking his thick shaft violently as it passed through his pee hole. Anna could feel the boiling semen hitting hard against her pussy walls, one after another, churning and bubbling along her channel, reaching deeper and deeper. The pleasure was sensational and overwhelming, their legs began to bend at the knees and they squatted a little in sync. She leaned one cheek on the surface of the refrigerator and placed her hands both of side her head. Marvin leaned further into her back and placed his chin on her shoulder as he kept pumping his endless cum inside her. He was filled her to the brim. Huge globs of his dense cum overflowing from her pussy stretched to its limits were slowly rolling down the insides of her legs. Eventually the spurts stopped, but a strong stream of semen was still flowing into her from his pee hole. Their intertwined bodies were still writhing against each other while two moaning deeply. It took long minutes for him orgasm to subside. Finally, when his balls were completely dry, he slowly pulled his dick out of her. Thus, another giant pile of semen began to leak from the entrance of the young blonde's pussy. It was so dense that it longer about one and a half feet without breaking, like melted cheese in the area between her legs, and hung there before reaching the ground.

Anna seemed to be in some kind of trance. She was still shaking while she trying to catch her breath. David and her exes were the type who were head over heels in love with her and always treated her very nice. Until now. Marvin was a corrupt, hedonistic scumbag who had no respect for anything. He was just basically human. There was no trace of love, respect or empathy in his actions. All The old pervert thought about was fucking and and he was fuck the perfect 27 year old blonde so badly for about forty minutes.

Anna sat up with difficulty, out of breath. Her mind was still blurry. She started only walking slowly, not knowing why or where she was going. After taking a few steps, the thick rope of sperm hanging between her legs swayed and stuck to the inside of her left leg. She was having difficulty standing upright on her shaking legs. She stopped and placed one hand on the kitchen counter for support. She still never looked at Marvin. She wasn't ready to face him yet.
Marvin was very thirsty because of his superhuman performance. He grabbed an upturned beer can from the refrigerator, which was in disarray from their hard fucks. He drank it all in one gulp without taking his eyes off her for a moment. Her hair, which was once in a tight ponytail, was now completely undone and disheveled. Tanned skin of her back, wet with mix of their sweats, was shining. Her skirt and t-shirt were still bunched up around her waist and her firm ass-cheeks were flushed. As he watched her, he felt his balls fill with cum again. He couldn't wait to bury his gnarled huge cock, which showed no signs of softening, back into her tight pussy. He was really, really obsessed with her. He got rid of his trousers, which were still around his ankles, and quickly took off his sweaty shirt, the buttons of which were already broken. He was left completely naked with only his smelly, hole, black socks on. The view was a complete disaster.

He gritted his crooked yellow teeth as he looked at the young blonde. He wouldn't give her time to recover. He approached her from behind, sneakly, like a hyena preparing to tear apart its exhausted prey. He suddenly grabbed her arms tightly from behind and guided her towards the kitchen door. She realized what was going to happen when the old bastard's swinging hard dick slammed into her ass a few times as she walked right in front of him. There would be no break, the second round was starting.
Will there be a fourth part?
 
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look every other game jealous of anna

even most famous game steal idea
AWAM / ANNA
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Well this game is 100 times better than AWAM and few more slow corruption games can't name them lol ....I can say that 100% in terms of cheating wife category for few reasons:
1. It has launched late or around same time as compared to other cheating wife games (Miss denver/ steps of debauchary/ her desire/ awam and few more). Although it lag corruption wise if compared to corrupted hearts lol ...but that's different theme.
2. Story wise it covers all characters in a single update involved in the story most of the time...if it doesn't cover, MP release 2 updates in 2/2 months to cover remaining characters storyline.
3. Corruption wise it's slow..but it has got initial huge advantage from where the corruption has started and it will overtake other slow corruption games...this thing I can only hope for and I am not sure about it yet, but as of now yes scenes has started late but the first scene give full nudity+ handjob and that surprised me..because rest of the game focus on boobshow for initial 1/2 updates, then dick touch, then handjob, so yea this game started corruption directly from handjob which should be pretty normal.
4. Renders wise it needs improvement, I still think render wise AWAM is better but now I guess either Awam brings it's own level down of renders or leaving the black dots aside, APM was not that bad. If being delayed would not have been a pain in the ass, i am sure developer would have found the solution of those black dots.
5. Writing is pretty good, it can be improved for 2 different paths. Like few lines contradict for faithful/corruption path as it's same..so if those lines were made for faithful path, the corrupt path people will be disappointed like ANna is still shy, no gain in her corruption...and if those lines were made for corrupt path, then faithful path lovers will be disappointed. But overall it's still well written. There are only few games that are well written in this genre...e.g. AWAM was once upon a time well written, now it's bs...Few games have scenes more than APM like Her desire but writing and plot is not that good...rest are ok ok..fine with writing but extremely slow corruption ...The major issue is if the wriing is good, corruption is very slow and if the writing is bad, then there are too much scenes lol...but I hope this game will find it's pace soon.

I still hope it will just show the sex scene within the next 2 udpates ...because creating a hype for sex is boring if the story is so good plus he has to cover all male characters storyline sex so it will take few years too before reaching to conclusion.

The only thing AWAM has got huge fanbase because it was marketed on different platform plus it was one of the first in this genre. Else this game would have got better fanbase than awam if it would had launched 6/7 years ago.

And one news is that...Mr Palmer wants to finish this game in next few years and come up with another cheating wife/netorare game in future as he mentioned so it will be interesting to see that.
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Atleast from this comment I can hope that he will finish the game unlike AWAM that mostly planned to continue the same game for 3 generations.
 
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[...] The magic is gone, why cause you finally saw her naked in the shower [...]. So handys are all you need huh, games over now for you :ROFLMAO:
If all you need is hj scenes then go play AWAM cause after 7 years that’s as far as Sophia goes:ROFLMAO:
You missunderstood me because you only quoted the longer part of the things I wrote . The *magic* is all gone, yes, but the rest will still be good.
Coming back to my christmas anology: Just because the magic moment of seeing the presents and unboxing them is gone does not mean I throw away all the presents afterwards. I am just not on the peak of exitement anymore.

And yes, it is almost the same in real life for me. The first time I talk to a lovely girl is magic, the first time I kiss her and the first time I am in her. Having sex with her for weeks, months or years is great(!), but does not have that peak(!) excitement it had for the first time.

In this game, like Mr. Palmer had her say: The times before, it was not so clear she cheated. This time it is done without any means of negation.

And yes, I do not care that much about the slow development in AWAM, because I love to be able to still having something to look about. I just regret that I started playing it before it is done. If you play the game in one go, it is not that slow.
 

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Well this game is 100 times better than AWAM and few more slow corruption games can't name them lol ....I can say that 100% in terms of cheating wife category for few reasons:
1. It has launched late or around same time as compared to other cheating wife games (Miss denver/ steps of debauchary/ her desire/ awam and few more). Although it lag corruption wise if compared to corrupted hearts lol ...but that's different theme.
2. Story wise it covers all characters in a single update involved in the story most of the time...if it doesn't cover, MP release 2 updates in 2/2 months to cover remaining characters storyline.
3. Corruption wise it's slow..but it has got initial huge advantage from where the corruption has started and it will overtake other slow corruption games...this thing I can only hope for and I am not sure about it yet, but as of now yes scenes has started late but the first scene give full nudity+ handjob and that surprised me..because rest of the game focus on boobshow for initial 1/2 updates, then dick touch, then handjob, so yea this game started corruption directly from handjob which should be pretty normal.
4. Renders wise it needs improvement, I still think render wise AWAM is better but now I guess either Awam brings it's own level down of renders or leaving the black dots aside, APM was not that bad. If being delayed would not have been a pain in the ass, i am sure developer would have found the solution of those black dots.
5. Writing is pretty good, it can be improved for 2 different paths. Like few lines contradict for faithful/corruption path as it's same..so if those lines were made for faithful path, the corrupt path people will be disappointed like ANna is still shy, no gain in her corruption...and if those lines were made for corrupt path, then faithful path lovers will be disappointed. But overall it's still well written. There are only few games that are well written in this genre...e.g. AWAM was once upon a time well written, now it's bs...Few games have scenes more than APM like Her desire but writing and plot is not that good...rest are ok ok..fine with writing but extremely slow corruption ...The major issue is if the wriing is good, corruption is very slow and if the writing is bad, then there are too much scenes lol...but I hope this game will find it's pace soon.

I still hope it will just show the sex scene within the next 2 udpates ...because creating a hype for sex is boring if the story is so good plus he has to cover all male characters storyline sex so it will take few years too before reaching to conclusion.

The only thing AWAM has got huge fanbase because it was marketed on different platform plus it was one of the first in this genre. Else this game would have got better fanbase than awam if it would had launched 6/7 years ago.

And one news is that...Mr Palmer wants to finish this game in next few years and come up with another cheating wife/netorare game in future as he mentioned so it will be interesting to see that.
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Atleast from this comment I can hope that he will finish the game unlike AWAM that mostly planned to continue the same game for 3 generations.
No offense, but this game is very far from AWAM!

No matter how anyone feels about the LP, he did a lot of work, not always necessary, but still. Yes, the LP game is already seven years old and there is no sex with Sophia cheating,.. yet... 7 years:ROFLMAO:
But he improved his skills visually! Many of his scenes are very colorful and beautiful, which unfortunately cannot be said about this game!
And let’s not forget that this game is also more than two years old and we saw naked Anna for the first time only in the latest update with an optional handjob to Chris, while the whole scene was spoiled by black dots, about which Mr. Palmer didn’t say a word! Will he correct them or not!:mad:

And again, there is no need to compare projects! All this will lead to unnecessary disputes and inconvenient facts!
 

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Well this game is 100 times better than AWAM and few more slow corruption games can't name them lol ....I can say that 100% in terms of cheating wife category for few reasons:
1. It has launched late or around same time as compared to other cheating wife games (Miss denver/ steps of debauchary/ her desire/ awam and few more). Although it lag corruption wise if compared to corrupted hearts lol ...but that's different theme.
2. Story wise it covers all characters in a single update involved in the story most of the time...if it doesn't cover, MP release 2 updates in 2/2 months to cover remaining characters storyline.
3. Corruption wise it's slow..but it has got initial huge advantage from where the corruption has started and it will overtake other slow corruption games...this thing I can only hope for and I am not sure about it yet, but as of now yes scenes has started late but the first scene give full nudity+ handjob and that surprised me..because rest of the game focus on boobshow for initial 1/2 updates, then dick touch, then handjob, so yea this game started corruption directly from handjob which should be pretty normal.
4. Renders wise it needs improvement, I still think render wise AWAM is better but now I guess either Awam brings it's own level down of renders or leaving the black dots aside, APM was not that bad. If being delayed would not have been a pain in the ass, i am sure developer would have found the solution of those black dots.
5. Writing is pretty good, it can be improved for 2 different paths. Like few lines contradict for faithful/corruption path as it's same..so if those lines were made for faithful path, the corrupt path people will be disappointed like ANna is still shy, no gain in her corruption...and if those lines were made for corrupt path, then faithful path lovers will be disappointed. But overall it's still well written. There are only few games that are well written in this genre...e.g. AWAM was once upon a time well written, now it's bs...Few games have scenes more than APM like Her desire but writing and plot is not that good...rest are ok ok..fine with writing but extremely slow corruption ...The major issue is if the wriing is good, corruption is very slow and if the writing is bad, then there are too much scenes lol...but I hope this game will find it's pace soon.

I still hope it will just show the sex scene within the next 2 udpates ...because creating a hype for sex is boring if the story is so good plus he has to cover all male characters storyline sex so it will take few years too before reaching to conclusion.

The only thing AWAM has got huge fanbase because it was marketed on different platform plus it was one of the first in this genre. Else this game would have got better fanbase than awam if it would had launched 6/7 years ago.

And one news is that...Mr Palmer wants to finish this game in next few years and come up with another cheating wife/netorare game in future as he mentioned so it will be interesting to see that.
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Atleast from this comment I can hope that he will finish the game unlike AWAM that mostly planned to continue the same game for 3 generations.
Holy shit I just noticed that APM almost has as many patrons as AWAM now that it’s not on Patreon & only SS since the ban IMG_3543.png
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Part three

Everything Anna knew about Marvin was nothing more than lies made up by him and Keandra. In fact, he had never been married. He had never even had a girlfriend until now. It wasn't just because he was an ugly man. His soul was as vile as his appearance. He was a sneaky, ignorant, corrupt scumbag who had no respect for anything. If he came across a flower on his way, he would crush it instead of going around it. Knowing him even a little was enough to hate him, probably even his mother didn't have any like for him. Moreover, he was a pervert. He spent most of his free time watching porn and having endless masturbation sessions. The real few sexual experiences he had were with cheap, old, ugly whores. Normally, a flawless beauty like Anna wouldn't waste even a second of her time for him. But an extraordinary, deceitful and mysterious web of events had brought them to this point.

The old bastard, who had been dreaming of this moment for long years, wasted no time and grabbed his cock with one hand and aligned it with the entrance to her channel. The young blonde panicked as she felt the spongy, mushroom-shaped huge head of his cock pressing against her pussy lips. But before she could react, he suddenly violently thrust his hairy hips forward and impaled his thick cock into her tight pussy with one thrust. The big head of it disappeared into her in a moment. Anna wasn't ready for this yet, her piercing blue eyes opened wide and she let out a long scream.

"ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH"

Then he immediately grasped her waist tightly with both hands and began to drive his dick deep inside her without any hesitation. She could feeling the hard knots of his overly gnarled cock rubbing roughly against the walls of her pussy stretched to its limits.

"ARGGGHHHH!.... MARVIN! WAİT! WAIT!.... ARGGGGHHHHH!" She barely called out to him between her screams.

With ignored about her demand, he continued to fill her until he was resting his limp hairy crotch against her firm ass cheeks. As finally he buried his dick to the hilt in her, her pussy lips clamped tightyly on the base of his cock like a vice. They cried out loudly together, the old pervert with pleasure, while the young blonde with shock.

"ARRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH"

"OHHHHHHHHHHHH"

She'd never felt this full before. David's cock was an average thickness. It couldn't compare to the monster filling her right now. Without waiting for her recover, he started pulling his dick out of her by flexing her pussy lips outwards. When he had pulled out half of it, he suddenly stuffed it all back into her in one powerful thrust. Then the same way again and again and again and again... It was obvious that she was having a hard time handling him, but the old pervert didn't care. He was shaking her world to its foundations every time by burying his dick up to his balls in her her impossible tightness.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Marvin built up a rhythm with deep and hard thrusts that made her scream each time. She tried to stand but the old bastard quickly placed one hand on her back forcing her to stay down on the counter. She desperately reached forward with right arm and grasped the iron rod of the faucet tightly as if her life depended on it. She had her other hand balled into a tight fist on the counter. She couldn't suppress her screams as he continued to stuff her again and again.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Then he gathered the fabric of her t-shirt in his palm, and used it as leverage, increasing his speed. As he was still holding her waist tightly with his other hand he was fucking her by blowing his large hips violently back and forth. Their flesh waved together as his loose hairy crotch made a sharp slapping sound each time it hit her firm ass cheeks. Anna couldn't stand still now. She placed her hands on the counter for support and raised and lowered her upper body repeatedly, as if doing push-ups. The old bastard suddenly reached forward and firmly grabbed the base of her ponytail with his right hand and pulled hard, forcing her to upright. Then he quickly wrapped his left arm around both arms from her behind and started fucking her standing up. Because Anna was at least an inch and a half taller than him, he was standing on his tiptoes. Even this position could not slow down his pace. His huge hairy flaccid sack was slapping the back of her legs over and over again. He continued to pull her hair hard until the back of her head rested on his left shoulder. Her scalp was stinging from his tight grip. Deep wrinkles formed on her normally smooth forehead as she grimacing. As she was howled towards the ceiling, revealed snow-white teeth that sparkled like pearls,

"UUUUGGGHHHHHH... UUUUGGGGHHHHHH... UUUUGGGGHHHHHH

After six-seven minutes, her tight pussy had adapted well to his huge tool. The pleasure was shocking. While still holding her hair tightly with one hand, he released her arms and hastily gethared her t-shirt, the straps of which had already slipped off her shoulders, towards her waist. He grabbed her now completely naked left breast with hairy hand and squeezed it hard without ever letting go. Her firm flesh was jutting out between his thick fingers. Anna reached left arm behind her and placed hand on his protruding beer stomach, hoping to gain some control over his thrusts. She instinctive gathered the fabric of his sweat-soaked shirt in her palm and squeezed it tightly. Her movement caused the buttons of his shirt to break off, revealing a large portion of his hairy belly. His reaction was to tighten his grip on her breast and hair and fuck her even harder.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH”

He locked his mouth on her neck again and began sucking and nibbling roughly. Soon red marks started to appear all over her neck as his stinky drool ran down her tanned skin. But she wasn't in a position to worry about that. All she could focus on was the thick, his gnarly big cock that was turning her inside out. Extremely overwhelmed, the young blonde was shaking her head wildly from side to side, even though she was gripping her hair tightly by him. So much so that hair, once tied into a tight ponytail, began to loosen in his hairy hand. She braced her elbows and forearms firmly on the counter to support herself when Marvin roughly pushed her from behind and bent her over again. She was arched her back as far towards him as possible like a strung bow, the old pervert could count every vertebra in her spinal cord. The heavy effect he had on her made him even hornier. He increased his speed even more while holding her waist tightly with both hands. Upper of her fit body was jolting violently from the solid blows she received from behind and her big firm breasts were swaying back and forth. His hairly, saggy groin and her flawles firm ass-cheeks were starting to blush from being slammed together non-stop.
Now this balding ignorant asshole, older than her father, was showing her the difference between the make love and being fucked. As the two howled together, sharp slaps echoed repeatedly in the kitchen.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Having been getting the fuck of her life for twenty minutes, Anna knew that the orgasm that was building inside her would be unlike anything she had ever experienced before. Suddenly, her screams stopped and her whole body began to tremble from head to toe. Realizing what was coming, the sneaky bastard buried his dick to the hilt in her and stayed there. Then he grabbed her ponytail and shoulder and forced her to stand up until her back rest to his chest again. A significant part of the front of his shapeless body was stuck to the back of her fit body. His sticky sweat was oozing thickly through the forest of hair on his flaccid chest, smearing her flawless skin.

Her mouth still was wide open, but her loudly screams had been replaced by a silent scream. He let go of her hair and shoulder grabbing her breasts tightly and pulled her even more towards him. He imprisoned her completely with tight embrace. Her already tight pussy latched onto the base of his cock to death. But even that couldn't stop him, as the old bastard rose up on his toes, gaining extra depth inside her until his massive balls were crushed behind her legs. He started flexing his dick inside her engorged pussy. A guttural scream ripped from the top of the lungs of the young blonde, who had been silent for a while.

"OHHHHHH MYYYYYY GODDDDDDD!!! ARRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!"

With that, her bodily fluids began to squirt onto the base of his cock and his crotch as her whole body was shuddering. Her spasms were so intense that he held her breasts tighter than ever to keep her violently convulsing body under control. She couldn't suppress her screams.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Her tight pussy was clenching around the base of his dick to the death while it trying to milk the giant load in his balls by twitching repeatedly. However, it effort was in vain, the old bastard wasn't even close to cumming. She didn't know what she was getting into. She was trapped in his tight hugged as she went wild with a devastating orgasm. She needed some space but the old pervert continued to embrace her tightly from behind, without taking his dick out of her even an inch. Her bodily fluids soaked his massive balls, groin, inner thighs, and pants around his ankles by gushing out one after another.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Extremely overwhelmed, the young blonde lifted one foot off the ground and started stomping while shaking her head wildly from side to side. He was now having a hard time keeping her under control. The two of them began to stumble backwards together, but they nearly fell as his feet caught on his pants that were around his ankles. At the last moment he managed to guide her to the refrigerator and pin her against it. While all this was happening, he didn't pull his cock even an inch, it up to the hilt was still inside her tight pussy. Anna pressed her palms on its gray surface whle groaning deeply.

As Marvin pressed her back with one hand, with his other hand he ripped off the remaining buttons of his sweaty shirt. So his loose chest and protruding beer belly, covered in dense curly black hair, were fully exposed. As soon as her crazy orgasm, which had been going on for long minutes, finally started to subside, he hurriedly started working his dick in and out of her pussy again. The old pervert wasn't giving her any chance to collect herself. Her deep moans turned into screams again.

"AHHHHHH!.... OHHHHHH!... AHHHHHHH!

He grabbed her ponytail in his sweaty palm and increased his speed. Soon the sharp slapping sounds began to echo again. Driven crazy Anna turned her right hand into a tight fist and started beating the refrigerator. The heavly effect he was having on the young blonde was driving him crazy. He continued to grabbed her by her hair by resting his right forearm and elbow on her back, while his other hand grasped her T-shirt and skirt gethared around her waist and he started fucking her like a man possessed. As he increased his speed even more, his cock and hairy wide hips blured. Unable to hold on any longer, the young blonde's knees began to buckle, but the old pervert used the tight grip on her hair to force her to stand upright.

His pounces were so hard that the sound of things being scattering and falling over could be heard inside the shaking refrigerator. There was complete chaos in the kitchen.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Never slowing down his pace, he fucked her like this for another about twenty minutes. Having never experienced anything like this before, Anna's mind was numb in a fog of pleasure and lust. Now the old pervert too was very close to his first orgasm. He felt his swolled balls overflow with the heavy essance drawn from the farthest corners of her body. With one last powerful thrust he rammed his cock to the hilt into her tight pussy and stayed there. Anna panicked when she felt his thick cock twitch violently deep inside her. She knew what was coming, but she didn't have the strength to object. She could only moan.

"ARRGHHHHH... UUGGHHHH... UNGHHHHH"

The old pervert held her one shoulder and hair tightly with both hands and started to squirt his heavy load from the tip of his dick, roaring like a wild animal.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!"

His wildness hit her hard again. She was squirting all over his cock and hairy balls as he shoted huge masses of his semen deep inside her, one after another. As two howled together, he put his ugly face in her hair and rested forehad on the back of her head.

"UNNNNGGGHHHHH... .UNNNNGGGHHHHH... .UNNNNGGGHHHHH..."

Both of their bodies were shaking from head to toe, as if they had been struck by a strong electric current. Every muscle in his hairy loose ass contracted and relaxed over and over again as he continued to squirt inside her. The pressure of his first five squirts was incredible, his sperms was jerking his thick shaft violently as it passed through his pee hole. Anna could feel the boiling semen hitting hard against her pussy walls, one after another, churning and bubbling along her channel, reaching deeper and deeper. The pleasure was sensational and overwhelming, their legs began to bend at the knees and they squatted a little in sync. She leaned one cheek on the surface of the refrigerator and placed her hands both of side her head. Marvin leaned further into her back and placed his chin on her shoulder as he kept pumping his endless cum inside her. He was filled her to the brim. Huge globs of his dense cum overflowing from her pussy stretched to its limits were slowly rolling down the insides of her legs. Eventually the spurts stopped, but a strong stream of semen was still flowing into her from his pee hole. Their intertwined bodies were still writhing against each other while two moaning deeply. It took long minutes for him orgasm to subside. Finally, when his balls were completely dry, he slowly pulled his dick out of her. Thus, another giant pile of semen began to leak from the entrance of the young blonde's pussy. It was so dense that it longer about one and a half feet without breaking, like melted cheese in the area between her legs, and hung there before reaching the ground.

Anna seemed to be in some kind of trance. She was still shaking while she trying to catch her breath. David and her exes were the type who were head over heels in love with her and always treated her very nice. Until now. Marvin was a corrupt, hedonistic scumbag who had no respect for anything. He was just basically human. There was no trace of love, respect or empathy in his actions. All The old pervert thought about was fucking and and he was fuck the perfect 27 year old blonde so badly for about forty minutes.

Anna sat up with difficulty, out of breath. Her mind was still blurry. She started only walking slowly, not knowing why or where she was going. After taking a few steps, the thick rope of sperm hanging between her legs swayed and stuck to the inside of her left leg. She was having difficulty standing upright on her shaking legs. She stopped and placed one hand on the kitchen counter for support. She still never looked at Marvin. She wasn't ready to face him yet.
Marvin was very thirsty because of his superhuman performance. He grabbed an upturned beer can from the refrigerator, which was in disarray from their hard fucks. He drank it all in one gulp without taking his eyes off her for a moment. Her hair, which was once in a tight ponytail, was now completely undone and disheveled. Tanned skin of her back, wet with mix of their sweats, was shining. Her skirt and t-shirt were still bunched up around her waist and her firm ass-cheeks were flushed. As he watched her, he felt his balls fill with cum again. He couldn't wait to bury his gnarled huge cock, which showed no signs of softening, back into her tight pussy. He was really, really obsessed with her. He got rid of his trousers, which were still around his ankles, and quickly took off his sweaty shirt, the buttons of which were already broken. He was left completely naked with only his smelly, hole, black socks on. The view was a complete disaster.

He gritted his crooked yellow teeth as he looked at the young blonde. He wouldn't give her time to recover. He approached her from behind, sneakly, like a hyena preparing to tear apart its exhausted prey. He suddenly grabbed her arms tightly from behind and guided her towards the kitchen door. She realized what was going to happen when the old bastard's swinging hard dick slammed into her ass a few times as she walked right in front of him. There would be no break, the second round was starting.
like you side fiction story of anna and add marvin is my best to see
even cant imagine game go that far with marvin he will get only touch fell her body spy on her
but still one most thing to see anna sex with


where find first part or did you have your page post your novel in literotica
 

Couto25

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No offense, but this game is very far from AWAM!

No matter how anyone feels about the LP, he did a lot of work, not always necessary, but still. Yes, the LP game is already seven years old and there is no sex with Sofia cheating Sophia yet. 7 years:ROFLMAO:
But he improved his skills visually! Many of his scenes are very colorful and beautiful, which unfortunately cannot be said about this game!
And let’s not forget that this game is also more than two years old and we saw naked Anna for the first time only in the latest update with an optional handjob to Chris, while the whole scene was spoiled by black dots, about which Mr. Palmer didn’t say a word! Will he correct them or not!:mad:

And again, there is no need to compare projects! All this will lead to unnecessary disputes and inconvenient facts!
I said mostly from story wise...and obviously AWAM renders I was always fan of that..that' why i liked that game before..but tbh story is completely lost now in AWAM..APM yea 2 years, black dot..that's drawback..that's why I said scenes could have been introuced earlier....and tbh I dont want him to improve that black dot scene before completing the VN lol..else if he will start doing that, it will take extra time from this current update.....once he complete this VN, he can do all the correction he wants ...I think AWAM was on top during Dylan update render wise, although i hate that story line but I liked render in that update...after that update, I find renders pretty normal not so much out of the box. Plus if the story is shit, renders doesnt attract at all.

I have to compare game because it's of same genre and something realistic that's why we all are on slow corruption game....Render doesnt do that much effect on the story if the story is badly made...its just doesn't seem that much realistic to me in AWAM.....I mean LP delayed sex and make the story slow corruption to make it more realistic ..he use to say sophia is sophisticated, shy and many more things 4/5 years back when I joined that thread ..and the story that time was very much realistic, I mean play part 1, and you will see it realistic..all of his supporters were like its seems realistic story.

Look at it now..Sophia the school teacher is fucking almost whole city irrespective of age, jobs, race, gender getting corrupted by all women, man, gangster, kids, old men, maid , incest, girls, women almost anything coming down her way, she is doing sex with them and the story is gone...I mean she is getting seduced by 12 year old kids..thats not at all realistic and howcome one can say that she was sophisticed shy businesswoman in the past? Obviously it's a porn game but just to satisfy each and every fantasy he put a hammer on his leg story wise..with no direction and conclusion story wise...like if she cheat with whole world then what? Divorce ?? Liam is totally out of game.

Eventually all porn games will end up as porn where women will cheat with everyone...but think of it like which story actually sounds realistic? Forget renders, even if APM would have been an Anime, I would have preferred APM over AWAM story wise. Even go through writings too..how AWAM story writing was in part 1 when there was some story...and what it has become now see the dialogues. And if you think that there are better cheating wife games story and scene wise then let us know too ...lol we would all like to play
 
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L0b0ts

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I haven't played AWAM in the last four updates, I use to support the game, I have written it off for now, handjob scene is to little to late, if it starts delivering I may support it again, I find this scenario highly unlikely. The storytelling and character development of Anna in A Perfect Marriage is far superior to AWAM.
To many wasted scenes in AWAM the furniture delivery guys would have been perfect for a gangbang, didn't happen, watching the game early on and Sophia is in a cheerleading outfit and the neighbour goes upstairs to the bathroom is another wasted opportunity, Sophia's character is not suited for an adult game as the desire is simply not there. Anna's character is very suited for an adult game and it actually has a plot that is very immersive, I want to support the game and will when it gets juicy enough. The perfect comibination of action and plot is Babysitters what draws me into the game is Lara cheating. I have not supported any games this year because of my medical stuff and it won't be finished till December because of massive delays putting me in limbo, due to my massive support of adult games prior to that, my conscious is clear. I look forward to resume support for Babysitters and to start supporting A Perfect Marriage.
Another game to look out for is the new Eleanor game coming out, it is going to be epic and the whole game in one release with a few possible DLC's down the track.
 

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2 updates that's what I'm predicting and when I say two updates not that pussy shit. 2 minutes no I mean that 1 hour shit. that is when we will see what we are waiting for.
 

With The

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No offense, but this game is very far from AWAM!

No matter how anyone feels about the LP, he did a lot of work, not always necessary, but still. Yes, the LP game is already seven years old and there is no sex with Sophia cheating,.. yet... 7 years:ROFLMAO:
But he improved his skills visually! Many of his scenes are very colorful and beautiful, which unfortunately cannot be said about this game!
And let’s not forget that this game is also more than two years old and we saw naked Anna for the first time only in the latest update with an optional handjob to Chris, while the whole scene was spoiled by black dots, about which Mr. Palmer didn’t say a word! Will he correct them or not!:mad:

And again, there is no need to compare projects! All this will lead to unnecessary disputes and inconvenient facts!
lmao if you talking about render quality then there's alot dev in here that make render quality superior than awam, the only advantage awam had is the game start with perfectly good time and gain attraction so fast, this happen just like fresh women and some average game but atleast fresh women got good animation and render. let's just accept the fact that awam dev just doesnt care about the fans and all this time he just milking the game. i think the game is still the biggest milker in this entire porn vn world.
 
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