VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.1b] [Mr Palmer]

[Couto25]

To be honest, I am waiting for the next update...so called real part 3 with fireworks.
Story is good but I am little bit disappointed with tease in part 0.7 ...so far tease where Marvin caress Ana's thigh in part 2 in the bar was best. It could have been better in part 0.7 rather than spanking and photoshoot.

 

[garret64]

Those who expect fireworks with the next update, sorry guys, nothing can come of it.

Hank and Jake also understandably need time to be able to corrupt Anna for themselves.

However, the developer could calm many minds if Anna's boobs are on full display as she breastfeeds her baby and has to endure the stares of Hank, who uses some urgent excuse about work to point out Anna's mistakes at work.

In the end, Anna is so intimidated that Hank licks a drop of milk from Anna's breast and puts her tits back into her clothes with his own hands.

 

[Sadowdark]

Mr. Palmer,

3 things

One, thank you for being a native English speaker or at least being fluent in the language. So many of these visual novels just have some strange dialogue that in many cases is just awkward and in others is just dumb - i.e. no one talks like that.

Two, your story is great. This is a silly porn game and all of these incels going on and on like this is some great literary work of art are just idiots. Criticizing the ability to make choices, Anna as a woman, the plot, old men jacking off, denying Chris, etc. Your life has to be pretty empty to write dissertations about your problems with a PORN GAME. Losers.

Three, You released this game in May of 2022 so we are coming up on 2 YEARS! I just want to see Anna have sexual acts with someone besides her husband. Blowjobs, vaginal, anal, DP, with Marvin, Senstromber, Chris, Jake - I don't care who just something, anything. My only criticism is that you took way too much time to lay the ground work in the story, the next update will at least be months away and there are no guarantees that Anna will have some sort of sex in that update. Please begin moving forward with the sex.

Thanks

 

[Sadowdark]

You don't get my point, smh. Anna's response to Marvin in the changing room scenes is very weak after I made her reject all his approaches. Given the experience she had to deal with the same kind of old pervert in the form of Stormsborg, she should've done better at that moment. Only a warning isn't enough and you confirm it a few seconds later in Marvin's inner monologue. If Marvin still has the ball to mess with her in next updates after all these rejection and Anna just simply reacts to give him–God know how many–another warning, then what's the point of those choices I made? If your excuse because Anna has "high tolerance of men trying to use her as sexual gratification", then I'm not going to make a fair critism anymore because apparently you just offer the players two doors but both will still end up in the same shithole.

But in Ch3 he will go to the pool again and you will have a choice how Anna will react to Marvin's old fish. This was the case when sending photos to Chris' fake friend, Ch1. In Ch2 you had the choice of whether you wanted to send photos or not. This is how it works and these are choices you once made

 

[instaMagix]

The only thing I can confirm is this story isn’t for you. I’m not looking for an award, I’m developing this for myself and the people who enjoy it. Sorry it’s triggered you so hard.

this is a real d1ck punch lmao,obviously the guy is obsessed with your game with how long and ridiculous his comments are.Trying so hard to steer out the storyline to his likings,a real genius while talking but a real loser in real life.
bro doesn't know there aren't no perfect game out here,every game has it's own flaws.
bravo dev for kicking him into the curb.

 

[truthpolice]

Is this update short? wanna know before playing.

 

[kimsohyun143]

i had this imagination/idea- what if we could develop game of our own version from now? what if we together come up with our plots involving all horny males eyeing on anna, creating actions of make out, nude flashing, sex etc that caters our fantasies and eventually develop a script for the story play. i witnessed in this forum where people could model anna naked, i believe there could be developers, they can come forward and support in making game. rest of us can give our inputs on the plot.

i apologies in advance to people who might get offended/annoyed/hurt with the idea/ this post.

 

[unreal4real]

Still a good update. Cant wait for the next update.

 

[truthpolice]

I'll take your word for this, but if her decision/action to the choices which reject some characters is as weak as in this update after the shit fuckers like Stormberger did to her (or whoever she rejected) and she still don't learn her lesson, then this story doesn't even make sense anymore. And by this, I'm assuming there's no more unnecesary flashback, that only adds nothing but her own self-made conflict.

My opinion is this. There is no shame if a game is a kinetic novel. There will always be an audience who wants to read the story the dev has in mind just like watching a movie. It isn't also a problem if its a pseudo kinetic novel where choices are present but only changes the immediate scenario by a bit and nothing drastic.

But for me, when I feel like playing a game where my choices can shape more than just the immediate scenario, I would like my choices to have some impact, a real impact rather than only preventing me to see a scene.

So I am still holding out my hopes to see such an impact in this game and hope some consistency would be maintained.

 

[truthpolice]

i had this imagination/idea- what if we could develop game of our own version from now? what if we together come up with our plots involving all horny males eyeing on anna, creating actions of make out, nude flashing, sex etc that caters our fantasies and eventually develop a script for the story play. i witnessed in this forum where people could model anna naked, i believe there could be developers, they can come forward and support in making game. rest of us can give our inputs on the plot.

i apologies in advance to people who might get offended/annoyed/hurt with the idea/ this post.

That's an idea from a book called How to create a mess 101. Fan games can be developed but they take dedication and commitment and skill. I bet that 95% of people if they volunteered would abandon it in no time. Then there is the monetary issue and all. You sure you thought of all the headaches?

 

[AL.d]

Reading some comments I get the sense that some people have never played another fem protag game on here. 99% of FMC games are one thing...slutmakers. Expecting agency in a slutmaker is expecting too much. At most you will get flavor choices like, will she jump on that dick herself or be a little reluctant but still like it? And almost all of those have encounters with fat/ugly/old bastards because that's a major fetish for the main audience of a slutmaker for whatever reason. That patreon poll should be telling enough.

Now add the fact that it's also an ntr game. And 99% of ntr games are FMC slutmakers in disguise, with male MC just as prop for the ntr plot. And for the small portion of masochists who look for self inserts.

At most you can expect some choice on the male MC side since it's a dual protag, FMC's fate was pre-determined the moment this got the fem protag tag. But since it's ntr I wouldn't expect too much on that either.

 

[luxilfer666]

But in Ch3 he will go to the pool again and you will have a choice how Anna will react to Marvin's old fish. This was the case when sending photos to Chris' fake friend, Ch1. In Ch2 you had the choice of whether you wanted to send photos or not. This is how it works and these are choices you once made

If you're talking about this option, it would never exist if you continually reject Marvin:
1. Office break room scene: "Anna is uncomfortable"
2. Lunch date invitation: "I have no interest..."
3. Breastfeeding room: "Don't tease him."
4. Lunch date invitation (again): "Reject his invitation."
5. Bar scene (1st attempt): "Deny him."
In the other hand, we immediately get a scene where Marvin spanked her ass, then Anna elbowed and warned him, which in my opinion, the proper Anna's response should've slapped the shit out of him. Right now, I will let it slide as Palmer's excuse of why Anna didn't do that because she has "high tolerance bla bla". But, if we get a similar situation between Marvin and Anna in this particular route option in future updates and Anna's reaction is exactly like what happened in the changing room scene, then I'm convinced that the "naive" traits that Palmer writes on Anna is simply misused. Pity sex (which Palmer explained in his latest comments) with Marvin won't make sense either in this route. The only possible way Marvin could further sexually exploit Anna in this route is through blackmail but it also depends whether Anna is also "naive" enough as a lawyer or not.

 

[luxilfer666]

My opinion is this. There is no shame if a game is a kinetic novel. There will always be an audience who wants to read the story the dev has in mind just like watching a movie. It isn't also a problem if its a pseudo kinetic novel where choices are present but only changes the immediate scenario by a bit and nothing drastic.

But for me, when I feel like playing a game where my choices can shape more than just the immediate scenario, I would like my choices to have some impact, a real impact rather than only preventing me to see a scene.

So I am still holding out my hopes to see such an impact in this game and hope some consistency would be maintained.

If this game was a kinetic novel, I will certainly be less noisy. Even I would regard it as one of the best kinetic NTR VN because we're given a great story/plot, render, and the possibility of shorter update cycles.

(Note: I never criticize this game's update cycles because it's not the free customer's priviledge)

 

[alyssssssssss]

I think it's wiser to wait for the next updates, this type of slow game, you can't judge it piece by piece, but only when it's complete, then you can have a real opinion, and this game deserves to be finished, and then judge it.

 

[truthpolice]

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If you're talking about this option, it would never exist if you continually reject Marvin:
1. Office break room scene: "Anna is uncomfortable"
2. Lunch date invitation: "I have no interest..."
3. Breastfeeding room: "Don't tease him."
4. Lunch date invitation (again): "Reject his invitation."
5. Bar scene (1st attempt): "Deny him."
In the other hand, we immediately get a scene where Marvin spanked her ass, then Anna elbowed and warned him, which in my opinion, the proper Anna's response should've slapped the shit out of him. Right now, I will let it slide as Palmer's excuse of why Anna didn't do that because she has "high tolerance bla bla". But, if we get a similar situation between Marvin and Anna in this particular route option in future updates and Anna's reaction is exactly like what happened in the changing room scene, then I'm convinced that the "naive" traits that Palmer writes on Anna is simply misused. Pity sex (which Palmer explained in his latest comments) with Marvin won't make sense either in this route. The only possible way Marvin could further sexually exploit Anna in this route is through blackmail but it also depends whether Anna is also "naive" enough as a lawyer or not.

Yeah this is why I mentioned I appreciate consistency in a game. Like if you reject Marvin ten times in a row after he touches you but on the 11th try you again let him off with a simple warning. That is just jarring. At that point she would be kicking his balls and not just slap away his hand.

 

[sslovoe]

anna always in game like men get her by sexual harassment
even start with chris show she not like slap her in bathroom...touch her ,,, she act not like but keep his hand long time before stop him
she become on fire think about it

even when i play as she good wife reject flirt or yes to anyone
she still let old man slap her ass and not big deal she act angry without make action
when talk with chris she one talk about his fantasy salp her ass in his fantasy ask him if he will do in his dream

she want men be bold get what they want inside her she be on fire

 

[Sadowdark]

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If you're talking about this option, it would never exist if you continually reject Marvin:
1. Office break room scene: "Anna is uncomfortable"
2. Lunch date invitation: "I have no interest..."
3. Breastfeeding room: "Don't tease him."
4. Lunch date invitation (again): "Reject his invitation."
5. Bar scene (1st attempt): "Deny him."
In the other hand, we immediately get a scene where Marvin spanked her ass, then Anna elbowed and warned him, which in my opinion, the proper Anna's response should've slapped the shit out of him. Right now, I will let it slide as Palmer's excuse of why Anna didn't do that because she has "high tolerance bla bla". But, if we get a similar situation between Marvin and Anna in this particular route option in future updates and Anna's reaction is exactly like what happened in the changing room scene, then I'm convinced that the "naive" traits that Palmer writes on Anna is simply misused. Pity sex (which Palmer explained in his latest comments) with Marvin won't make sense either in this route. The only possible way Marvin could further sexually exploit Anna in this route is through blackmail but it also depends whether Anna is also "naive" enough as a lawyer or not.

Write that this choice is not available in the real game because people will wonder why they don't have it.Damn, I can't find my old post, I posted all the creator's posts from the beginning of this thread. He says why Anna has the character I have and why this character cannot be changed. But you can influence her decisions

 

[Couto25]

If there'll be no sex scene of ana in next update, I will stop following the game..it means he'll just plan to extend tease. As I don't want to follow another awam with step based corruption as boobshow then handjob then blowjob then sex.

 

[luxilfer666]

Write that this choice is not available in the real game because people will wonder why they don't have it.Damn, I can't find my old post, I posted all the creator's posts from the beginning of this thread. He says why Anna has the character I have and why this character cannot be changed. But you can influence her decisions

But in Ch3 he will go to the pool again and you will have a choice how Anna will react to Marvin's old fish.

So, what do you mean by this? Just to make things clear and my previous comment isn't misinterpreted.

 

[Sadowdark]

So, what do you mean by this? Just to make things clear and my previous comment isn't misinterpreted.

I found the creator's words for you, maybe you will understand better why the game is the way it is
Here you have a description of what Dev tells the path of loyalty
Dev's words

,,Well, you won't be able to fully control her... she's an established person with beliefs and natural tendencies. But, you can be the angel on her shoulder influencing her thoughts and behaviors... or you can be the devil . Beware though, Anna is dealing with a lot of hormones at the moment, and she's on edge with things happening at home and at work. If you nudge her too far in the wrong direction, she could lose control,,

,,If you try your best to save the marriage, you won't be forced into any "gotcha!" scenes where Anna is conquered by another man. I know people would argue Anna sending sexy pics is being forced into cheating, but I disagree, and besides, you don't even know or have yet to determine how Anna responded to sending those pics... maybe she hated doing it. That's for you to decide . I like David and Anna, and if you want to save their marriage, I'm cool with that and want to see it happen, so there's a path.
I will warn though - if you make some bad choices - that could backfire. Just like in real life, choices have an impact and you can't control the results. If NTR scares someone so much, I'd tell them just to avoid this game. I think the choices will be fairly obvious though,,.


Here are my general comments, and hopefully this will give you a better understanding about the choices:
- Some choices only influence the personalities of David and Anna. This doesn't mean their actions will drastically change in the story based on these particular decisions, but their dialogue and the way they interact can change. To be clear - Anna and David are who they are - you can't make them different people, but you CAN influence them with your choices and nudge them in certain directions.
- Some choices impact the direction of story in Part 3. There's no plans to force you into a situation you don't want to experience, as long as you make fairly obvious choices. My intent is not to "gotcha!" you. But, just as it is in all facets of life, choices have results, and I'm not going to add a trigger that allows you to back out of choices you make. If that makes you nervous, you shouldn't play this game. But again, in my opinion the choices will be fair. I don't WANT to make you suffer.
- I want to stress that you do NOT have to "corrupt" Anna in order to have naughty choices for her. In most interactive visual novels, you have to corrupt the main characters in order to have future choices that allow them to do bad things. That's not the case here. There are paths where you can influence Anna to be a genuinely good wife who wants to make her marriage work and who loves her husband... but she'll still be able to make "mistakes" later in the story
- Anna doesn't like to be left in the dark with David. While she wants a marriage built on trust, she doesn’t like being blindsided, lied to, or deceived. Anna’s trust in David largely hinges on his communication skills.
- Anna isn't attracted to David when he’s insecure. But at the same time, Anna tends to be naive to peoples' intentions, so David would be wise to keep an eye out. This is a tight rope to walk... David doesn't want to push Anna away by being jealous of other men, but he also doesn't want her taken advantage of.
- David’s not the type to flirt with other women, so Anna would be surprised and confused if this happens.
- My last comment... Part 2 is largely kinetic like Part 1. You can influence some events and can shape Anna during it, but Part 2 ends at the same exact point as it ended in Part 1. Sorry to all you 'Back to the Future' fans, but you cannot change the outcome of Part 1's Saturday, no matter what you do. David will still come home to an upset Anna who tells him to leave.
Hope this post helps. I'll try to be responsive if any of you have questions, but just understand that I have limited free time, so the more I focus on answering questions, the less time I have to develop... and I definitely want to progress the story! Just pointing that out so you don't think I'm ignoring you.