VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.1b] [Mr Palmer]

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INOM_18

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redoubt27 said:
Maybe you wouldn't like the story as much without Chris...:ROFLMAO:
Some can see a really great story (that is more enjoyable) without Chris being the way he's written.
Some probably don't like the current story, just Anna, and curious to see if there's any hope of a "good" path that isn't complete crap...:ROFLMAO:

In context of this story as is, Chris is a "cliche", "mustache twirling" villain character.
He's a "good" villain character in the sense that he's playing his part well.
And yes, it's a "good" angle to this story; which could be done differently and still be good if not better.
Chris the "perfect" villain? Absolutely not.
Voldemort, Darth Vader, even Palpatine are "perfect" villains.
Kendra is closer to the "perfect" villain in this story.
Chris is like Umbridge, also a "cliche" villain character but "good"; you just hate them, no empathy or sympathy what so ever.
They are just pieces of shit that need to die slow, painful deaths...:ROFLMAO:
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Dont lough at your own saying, its called stupidity , ( PEACE )
 
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sslovoe said:
you creat game before why not make new game now with help start your project with group

there writer make good story of anna
and we have 3 or 4 artist in group make lot art of anna
why dont you make side game story of anna
with new story and lot artist you can create own game better than you art go as fan art pic
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redoubt27 said:
In context of this story as is, Chris is a "cliche", "mustache twirling" villain character.
He's a "good" villain character in the sense that he's playing his part well.
And yes, it's a "good" angle to this story; which could be done differently and still be good if not better.
Chris the "perfect" villain? Absolutely not.
Voldemort, Darth Vader, even Palpatine are "perfect" villains.
Kendra is closer to the "perfect" villain in this story.
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Chris is a good vilain!
Who decided that?
Midget got slaped!
What is Good vilain for you? Since He is one of the dudes who will cuck David in a possible updates doesn't mean he is a good vilain for that and precise that you can't compare Kendra to Chris (His abilities don't math his chap) as you can see Kendra is an organized girl everything was planned, who's suprised me kuz in the begenning i thought she would act like a sociopath with psycholigical issue
And chris is more like an opportunitist who is totally aware of a Good antagoniste
 
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sslovoe said:
you creat game before why not make new game now with help start your project with group

there writer make good story of anna
and we have 3 or 4 artist in group make lot art of anna
why dont you make side game story of anna
with new story and lot artist you can create own game better than you art go as fan art pic
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you creat game before why not make new game now with help start your project with group
Several popular games like AWAM have "spinoffs" by various independents. It's both insulting and flattering the original artist that triggers others to make spinoffs. So, for me it's a mixed set of feelings on that topic either being involved with content creating on a spinoff or playing the spinoff itself. See it's a totally different 'flavor' between the original and the spinoff. You can't get the same feel of a different Anna in another game as you do with this game "A Perfect Marriage."

there writer make good story of anna
Honestly, it would be better to NOT make a spinoff of "A Perfect Marriage" while the game is still in production. Afterward, maybe it would seem appropriate. However, it's really difficult to find a writer who can mirror the original Anna to give players the same game feel without the whole production just be a different game with the same characters. From my point of view in this case finding such a writer would be the hardest part. The art is OK(ish) to good and ought to be tamed down in some aspects of the renders {seriously, the quality of the renders and depictions are a total tipoff that it's not a real 'teaser' but someone else's personal take on the game}.

and we have 3 or 4 artist in group make lot art of anna
Now if you do have 4 solid artists, a spinoff would be very fast to get product out. BUTtttttt... they all have to be on the same page as to what is the "cannon" of what each character looks like.

why dont you make side game story of anna
Ever hear the phrase "too many chiefs spoil the broth?" You would need an editor to take charge, and the writer staff would have to have a firm understanding and agree on the premise of the spinoff. That too will be hard since so many here have their own ideas of what should or shouldn't happen in the original.

with new story and lot artist you can create own game better than you art go as fan art pic
Remember me saying others have made their own spinoff of popular games like, "AWAM" (A Wife and A Mother)? Well, none of the spinoffs of AWAM are even close to the quality of the original on many levels. Games like "Aiden's Revenge" belong in the dumpster fire bin of games if it were not for the original game AWAM being out there. Could I as a writer "fix" a lot of plot problems in AWAM...? Oh, Hell yes because it's just fixing story plots and writing strategy. Could I as a writer structure a better storyline and plot of "Aiden's Revenge"? It would be a little harder but yes, but... therein lies the whole problem, would anyone of the artist and other writers want to work with me since their vision is 180 degrees different from mine--so no, not really.

These kinds of spinoffs are works of passion as being the motivation to make them. It's almost like arguing politics and that is a rabbit hole most sane people wish to avoid.
 
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L0b0ts it turns out you agree with the statement of this lesser person, those. you don’t like my art either, my Anna and my art style too! At the same time, you like my fan posts! Is this duplicity or stupidity?
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It turns out my model has a disproportionate body, something with hair(XDD) and a bad facial expression!
Lol, GG mate!
 
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ItsNotUs said:
:rolleyes:
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-perfect-marriage-v0-7-1b-mr-palmer.118449/post-14518283

It’s strange to highlight your reaction under this post in which a lesser person praises one and tries to belittle another! At the same time, when ask you what base model you use for your fan art, you remain silent! XDD
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The only lesser person here is you my friend. I gave credit to someone that deserved it. Based on the quility of work that they did. If yoiu took offense to my statement personelly, myabe you should ask yourself as to the reason why you thought it was all about you. I did not single you out at all. Your name was never mentioned. And I won't give such a self centered little cry baby anymore of my time. I'm to old for this petty shit.
 
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