VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[Ass Fan]

Meanwhile, away from civilization in a mysterious mountain house in Henk's basement

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Fuck.. that was great I'm really looking forward to seeing this actually happen with Kendra.
Alexia would finally... be free from the witch's clutches

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Meanwhile, away from civilization in a mysterious mountain house in Henk's basement

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Yeah Kendra wishes she was as hot as Annas exciting affection

 

[Rinnryuu]

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Another status update
Hello everyone! Just a quick note that the update will be out soon, likely by the end of the week. I don't want to provide a timeline until I know for sure.
One thing I've been tinkering with as I wait for some reworked images...
A bit of history: When I set out on this journey, my intent was for Part One to be all David content. As development progressed, I realized that only showing David scenes makes the story a bit of a boring slog. I felt it necessary to create intrigue and have the reader learn a bit about Anna, so that's why I featured Chris in a lot of scenes.
Now that I'm working through Part Two, these Chris/Anna scenes now feel bulky. As you know, Part One is a long, slow burn, and that will be the same for Part Two as we get to know Anna... when we have these same Chris/Anna scenes in both, it just feels too bloated.
I've been tinkering with it, but now I'm strongly considering "hiding" most of the heavy Chris/Anna scenes from Part One and featuring them in Part Two with Anna's perspective instead, so that the reader only experiences it one time. I would still feature them on some level so that you know something is going on, but I just wouldn't show the whole scene like I've done in Part One. Call it "mystery" ntr (similar to the scene Thursday morning when David leaves Chris at the house with Anna).
The downside to this is for new readers. Will it simply be too boring for a new reader to go through Part One without the "spicy" texting scenes between Chris/Anna?
An interesting upside to doing this is - I can enable the reader to have the option for Anna to send the naughty pics to Chris or not. If I only feature this scene in Part Two, I can do this. Many readers have complained they didn't have the option.
Anyways, please provide feedback if you like or dislike this tweak to Part One. The good news is - if I make the change and it doesn't feel right - I can always change it back!

I think Henry should get his revenge the only time you ever get punished is when you do not understand her but it goes both ways she doesn't understand Harry and there are ntr's where the main character does get revenge. So far out of all the endings that are available the clumsy hero is the one that best describes the situation they are both victims and she will not let Henry know anything because she thinks Henry is perfect it's all a parallel to what she thinks everybody looks at her remember Henry knows he is not perfect and if you pick I understand he knows that she is not perfect he wanted to get to know her more that's why he wanted to meet her mother to understand the woman that he loves. If you pick understand her and don't trust Henry resorts to violence so there's still no telling what he is capable of he isn't perfect he's a person just like the woman he loves.

 

[Sadowdark]

I think Henry should get his revenge the only time you ever get punished is when you do not understand her but it goes both ways she doesn't understand Harry and there are ntr's where the main character does get revenge. So far out of all the endings that are available the clumsy hero is the one that best describes the situation they are both victims and she will not let Henry know anything because she thinks Henry is perfect it's all a parallel to what she thinks everybody looks at her remember Henry knows he is not perfect and if you pick I understand he knows that she is not perfect he wanted to get to know her more that's why he wanted to meet her mother to understand the woman that he loves. If you pick understand her and don't trust Henry resorts to violence so there's still no telling what he is capable of he isn't perfect he's a person just like the woman he loves.

Who is Henry? Not David by chance. I don't understand what you're saying, you're talking in riddles like Canto Forte

 

[Sadowdark]

Do I really want for Anna to send diirty pictures to Chris....
Lemme think about that for 1 naughty sec
SEND IT BITCH!
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These will not be new photos sent to Chris, only those from Ch 1

 

[Rinnryuu]

I think the pictures is a good thing it has a replayability aspect to it whether you want to see him get destroyed and their marriage break or to see it gets semi-destroyed and save the marriage or just save the marriage. So far in the story there really isn't any kind of justification for her going out on her marriage maybe there'll be a blackmail with that Tech Guy in her office

 

[rocco11]

I vote no. Using Chris as a POV character in the first part was the right call. It is thematically interesting to see the difference between the thoughts that Chris has about the conversations and then seeing the same conversation from Anna's point of view with her thoughts. It is illuminating. The instinct of Mr. Palmer was right the first time and gutting part one would have a detrimental effect on people who are starting the game new. I also think making the sending of the pics optional is of dubious value. Just because the audience wants it doesn't mean it is what the story needs. We need to play Anna as she is, not how we want her to be.

Agree 100%. LEave it this way

 

[Sadowdark]

I think the pictures is a good thing it has a replayability aspect to it whether you want to see him get destroyed and their marriage break or to see it gets semi-destroyed and save the marriage or just save the marriage. So far in the story there really isn't any kind of justification for her going out on her marriage maybe there'll be a blackmail with that Tech Guy in her office

Then do you want Anna to be able to choose whether she wants to send photos to Chris yes no w Ch1

 

[Sadowdark]

Agree 100%. LEave it this way

 

[Ass Fan]

Who is Henry? Not David by chance. I don't understand what you're saying, you're talking in riddles like Canto Forte

 

[robrize2169]

if you were to make that change, you should make it so that the selfies change her dialogue with Chris a bit. if she is on the path to cheating then the selfies showing her panties and lingerie are fine for that playthrough. but this is to me step 1 to ultimately cheating on David esp after she is told that David cheated on her, even though he is innocent. if we are on the save the marriage path, then perhaps change the selfies a bit to make them a bit less revealing so that Chris is not so sure of himself. that is my idea anyway. i am fine with leaving it as is to be honest. but that little bit more choice for her would make that route a little more geared towards her not lying when she is saying she would never cheat on David. making it more of a task for Chris to try and seduce her away. just my opinion here. what do you guys think about that?

 

[Ass Fan]

Great was everything we wanted another "Canto Forte"

 

[Sadowdark]

Great was everything we wanted another "Canto Forte"

 

[Ass Fan]

if you were to make that change, you should make it so that the selfies change her dialogue with Chris a bit. if she is on the path to cheating then the selfies showing her panties and lingerie are fine for that playthrough. but this is to me step 1 to ultimately cheating on David esp after she is told that David cheated on her, even though he is innocent. if we are on the save the marriage path, then perhaps change the selfies a bit to make them a bit less revealing so that Chris is not so sure of himself. that is my idea anyway. i am fine with leaving it as is to be honest. but that little bit more choice for her would make that route a little more geared towards her not lying when she is saying she would never cheat on David. making it more of a task for Chris to try and seduce her away. just my opinion here. what do you guys think about that?

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I think Henry should get his revenge the only time you ever get punished is when you do not understand her but it goes both ways she doesn't understand Harry and there are ntr's where the main character does get revenge. So far out of all the endings that are available the clumsy hero is the one that best describes the situation they are both victims and she will not let Henry know anything because she thinks Henry is perfect it's all a parallel to what she thinks everybody looks at her remember Henry knows he is not perfect and if you pick I understand he knows that she is not perfect he wanted to get to know her more that's why he wanted to meet her mother to understand the woman that he loves. If you pick understand her and don't trust Henry resorts to violence so there's still no telling what he is capable of he isn't perfect he's a person just like the woman he loves.

Uh what game are you talking about?

 

[Ass Fan]

I also agree, I think that this would be better in the way of the bad wife, but with the choices now of whether or not to send the photos, maybe that will change. In her part showing her panties and the dialogues will change too

 

[Sadowdark]

if you were to make that change, you should make it so that the selfies change her dialogue with Chris a bit. if she is on the path to cheating then the selfies showing her panties and lingerie are fine for that playthrough. but this is to me step 1 to ultimately cheating on David esp after she is told that David cheated on her, even though he is innocent. if we are on the save the marriage path, then perhaps change the selfies a bit to make them a bit less revealing so that Chris is not so sure of himself. that is my idea anyway. i am fine with leaving it as is to be honest. but that little bit more choice for her would make that route a little more geared towards her not lying when she is saying she would never cheat on David. making it more of a task for Chris to try and seduce her away. just my opinion here. what do you guys think about that?

In my opinion, this option should have been Ch1 from the beginning. Does Anna send pictures to Chris. Because she's not spoiled enough to send him hot pictures at this stage. Chris just manipulated her and used a trick, sensing that she was weak and vulnerable at the moment and would not hesitate to send him pictures. I agree that the dialogue should be changed and the picture too without showing Anna's panties.

 

[Ass Fan]

In my opinion, this option should have been Ch1 from the beginning. Does Anna send pictures to Chris. Because she's not spoiled enough to send him hot pictures at this stage. Chris just manipulated her and used a trick, sensing that she was weak and vulnerable at the moment and would not hesitate to send him pictures. I agree that the dialogue should be changed and the picture too without showing Anna's panties.

 

[Ass Fan]

I also think this option should have been in CH1 from the beginning.
The old render didn't show Anna's panties so far so good.. but the new picture with her showing her panties would look much better on the bad wife route because it would make more sense but now with the changes for me it's better now just wait for the update to play

 

[Rinnryuu]

Uh what game are you talking about?

Sorry I'm having two conversations the game is called a promise best unkept