VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[Z3lda1980]

nice update and promesing for the future

 

[Ass Fan]

I must say I'm rather disappointed with the latest 0.6.4 update for several reasons.

The first one is based on my personal taste. Unfortunately Anna is completely shaved. Some pubic hair, at least a "landing strip" matching her eye brow or hair color would have been so hot. Completely shaved is pretty much out in my opinion (used to be trendy during the 90ies until the 2010s), but unfortunately many devs still think the "shaved-look" was state of the art. Look at the picture below, it would have been so much hotter with a visible trimmed "landing strip"...

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Furthermore I think it's very silly, that Anna sucked on a banana of all possible items to practice blowjobs... seriously?! Would an adult woman do such a stupid thing? I highly doubt that!
First of all, banana peels are full of pesticides (yummy!), secondly how many people might have touched this banana in the supermarket already with their maybe dirty hands? Hence no sane woman would suck on a banana, it's just very much silly.
A dildo would have been a much better and more reasonable choice and usually every woman has got one, even Anna.

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Thirdly a fully clothed masturbation scene is a total lackluster. When women masturbate, they wanna feel comfortable and clothes are obstacles, which might restrict movement. She is home alone, sitting on her couch, so no fucking reason to stay fully clothed. There is no reason, why Anna wouldn't get rid of her panties, while doing so, other than intended blue balling of the dev. I second this statement below completely:



The scene is further ruined by the silly pesticide-banana she is still sucking on. Women usually don't get turned on by sucking on objects. The scene is very much unlifelike. Some women might find it hot to give blowjobs (most just do it to please their bf/husband, but aren't turned on by it), but that only applies to real men and their dicks, not some silly object for practice, which would be a rather unneccessary distraction from her focus on masturbating.

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I really hope those kind of let-downs aren't becoming the norm in future updates of this vn. This update featured too much silly "porn logic" for me.

I'm not one to take the game too seriously but I agree with many things especially with the part of her sucking the banana but what to do she didn't have any vibrator to use that's what she had to practice now the shaved pussy part is a little out of fashion already then... it would really be very hot if it was an airstrip but remember "those are memories of her" I really believe that now she has bushes or in my preference an airstrip
but in my opinion it wasn't a bad update I just don't like to see Anna masturbating in clothes but at least there was a flashback it made me a lot happy

 

[Valkyrie_1999999999999999]

I'm not one to take the game too seriously but I agree with many things especially with the part of her sucking the banana but what to do she didn't have any vibrator to use that's what she had to practice now the shaved pussy part is a little out of fashion already then... it would really be very hot if it was an airstrip but remember "those are memories of her" I really believe that now she has bushes or in my preference an airstrip
but in my opinion it wasn't a bad update I just don't like to see Anna masturbating in clothes but at least there was a flashback it made me a lot happy

I think we like this game and especially Anna way to much to really criticize it in any way lol..i personally love the slow burn in this game coz it is going to make part 3 all the more exciting and hot to play lol..

 

[Taven Val]

I think we like this game and especially Anna way to much to really criticize it in any way lol..i personally love the slow burn in this game coz it is going to make part 3 all the more exciting and hot to play lol..

it also depends how much you personally believe in the plot point of her having an unusually high sex drive condition.
For me, it allows myself to suspend the belief of most of the situations that occur due to the player choice. The lack of this trait will not allow most people to ever enjoy a game like this where a hot young thang will bang old, fat, blackmailing men.

 

[Ass Fan]

I think we like this game and especially Anna way to much to really criticize it in any way lol..i personally love the slow burn in this game coz it is going to make part 3 all the more exciting and hot to play lol..

Hehe it's true imagine when Anna's mother appears it will be even more fun to play

 

[Seewolf]

it also depends how much you personally believe in the plot point of her having an unusually high sex drive condition.
For me, it allows myself to suspend the belief of most of the situations that occur due to the player choice. The lack of this trait will not allow most people to ever enjoy a game like this where a hot young thang will bang old, fat, blackmailing men.

I disagree. I'm not taking it too serious, I just want an enjoyable product eventually.
I can pretty much enjoy a lot of content despite prefering somewhat realistic scenarios, as long it doesn't insult my intelligence too much. The more simpleminded one is, the less capable of critical thinking, the more tolerance and suspension of disbelieve he/she might have.

After all it's a sign of quality, if a vn or short story and so on aims to provide a believable scenario for most parts (even in fantasy). If it reaches a certain bottom line of stupidity, so that it begins to insult the intelligence of consumers, it won't be enjoyable any more. This bottom line is individually different of course. Anyway too much "porn-logic" and stupid or unreal things happening and I'm turned off for good.

I didn't say this is the case with A Perfect Marriage, yet, but there are a few silly things, which happened so far and can be rightfully criticized, like using a pesticide-banana as bj practice or masturbating fully clothed alone at home, while still sucking on an unclean banana for whatever reason. A woman sucking on some object doesn't get turned on anyway, that's just retarded "porn logic".
In the end constructive criticism is something positive and might help a dev/author to become better, resulting in a much better story/vn, if he bothers to listen to reasonable critics.
Unfortunately most people can't deal even with constructive criticism, while fanboys & -girls are the worst usually. These idiots will defend a dev no matter what and seem to be personally offended if you dare to criticize their favorite vn and/or dev for making silly decisions concerning the story or scenes.

 

[Aezakmi777]

My first prediction came true “cleavage tease”. Next, During Anna Marvin lunch meet, hope Marvin doesn’t drop something n look down only for Anna to tease him by showing her panty

 

[Taven Val]

I disagree. I'm not taking it too serious, I just want an enjoyable product eventually.
I can pretty much enjoy a lot of content despite prefering somewhat realistic scenarios, as long it doesn't insult my intelligence too much. The more simpleminded one is, the less capable of critical thinking, the more tolerance and suspension of disbelieve he/she might have.

After all it's a sign of quality, if a vn or short story and so on aims to provide a believable scenario for most parts (even in fantasy). If it reaches a certain bottom line of stupidity, so that it begins to insult the intelligence of consumers, it won't be enjoyable any more. This bottom line is individually different of course. Anyway too much "porn-logic" and stupid or unreal things happening and I'm turned off for good.

I didn't say this is the case with A Perfect Marriage, yet, but there are a few silly things, which happened so far and can be rightfully criticized, like using a pesticide-banana as bj practice or masturbating fully clothed alone at home, while still sucking on an unclean banana for whatever reason.
In the end constructive criticism is something positive and might help a dev/author to become better, resulting in a much better story/vn, if he bothers to listen to reasonable critics.

I've seen so much worse when it comes to these kinds of games that this thing is up near perfection in comparison lmfao.

And in regards to masturbation, I totally have had my shirt and boxers on before. I'm not a girl so I'm not sure what the norm is, I have to ask my fiancee how far down she slides her panties lol

 

[Taven Val]

My first prediction came true “cleavage tease”. Next, During Anna Marvin lunch meet, hope Marvin doesn’t drop something n look down only for Anna to tease him by showing her panty

I think you nailed it, seems like she's itching to show him her panties next time lol

 

[Valkyrie_1999999999999999]

I think you nailed it, seems like she's itching to show him her panties next time lol

Gosh the more you guys talk about it the more i wanna play the update lol..but i am gonna wait though its torture..

 

[Alleykatt]

Any chance of some non-pixeldrain links for this? Pixeldrain doesn't work for everyone.

 

[Sadowdark]

it also depends how much you personally believe in the plot point of her having an unusually high sex drive condition.
For me, it allows myself to suspend the belief of most of the situations that occur due to the player choice. The lack of this trait will not allow most people to ever enjoy a game like this where a hot young thang will bang old, fat, blackmailing men.

Depends on which path you take and make your choice, Anna doesn't have to fuck the old people who blackmail her

 

[scourgeofgod]

so baaaad update

 

[Seewolf]

I've seen so much worse when it comes to these kinds of games that this thing is up near perfection in comparison lmfao.

And in regards to masturbation, I totally have had my shirt and boxers on before. I'm not a girl so I'm not sure what the norm is, I have to ask my fiancee how far down she slides her panties lol

It's no argument, that worse is always possible.
I don't have to ask my wife first to know, that it is much more uncomfortable for a woman to have panties just lowered a bit, restricting her movements and being an obstacle, instead of completely removing them, while masturbating. That's actually crystal clear. Also being partly or completely naked is no big deal at all for most people, when they are home alone, but part of the daily routine. The only reason her 2nd masturbation scene happened this way, was the dev having decided to tease and blue ball at the cost of realism. And this is exactly what I was criticizing. Combined with the silly banana in her mouth, this scene was way more ridiculous than hot and therefore wasted.
For men things are more simple of course and not comparable. Any man can fap easily, while wearing his underwear, since boxershorts/trunks usually have an opening.

 

[Ignazzio]

I really like how it goes. I hope Marvin will get his chances cuz he works great with Anna. He's my favourite. Hank will also shine in a future. Nothing but to observe and wait for more.

 

[Mr_Palmer]

It's no argument, that worse is always possible.
I don't have to ask my wife first to know, that it is much more uncomfortable for a woman to have panties just lowered a bit, restricting her movements and being an obstacle, instead of completely removing them, while masturbating. That's actually crystal clear. Also being partly or completely naked is no big deal at all for most people, when they are home alone, but part of the daily routine. The only reason her 2nd masturbation scene happened this way, was the dev having decided to tease and blue ball at the cost of realism. And this is exactly what I was criticizing. Combined with the silly banana in her mouth, this scene was way more ridiculous than hot and therefore wasted.
For men things are more simple of course and not comparable. Any man can fap easily, while wearing his underwear, since boxershorts/trunks usually have an opening.

Anna didn’t get naked because, if her husband were to wake up and come to the living room, she’d have an easier time hiding what she was up to. I had something in the script about her being nervous David would come into the room, but I may have edited it out (there’s a lot of script I edit out in the interest of time or bloated content).

As for the banana… Anna ALWAYS eats organic.

 

[Brudda10]

The update is really bad like now we gonna have to wait 3 or 2 months probably for part 2 i really wanna see scenes like
-Boss touching her innapropriatly and asking her to wear more revealing clothes
-Marvin drugging her or giving her a horny pill
-Jake rubbing his dick on her purposfully
Like this game really lacks sexual scenes and we need the Boss MR TANKMAN to destroy that pussy ASSAP.

 

[Sadowdark]

The update is really bad like now we gonna have to wait 3 or 2 months probably for part 2 i really wanna see scenes like
-Boss touching her innapropriatly and asking her to wear more revealing clothes
-Marvin drugging her or giving her a horny pill
-Jake rubbing his dick on her purposfully
Like this game really lacks sexual scenes and we need the Boss MR TANKMAN to destroy that pussy ASSAP.

I guess Ch3 now we are in Ch2 at the end

 

[Deleted member 3706014]

Marvin and Anna in the break room

 

[Taven Val]

The update is really bad like now we gonna have to wait 3 or 2 months probably for part 2 i really wanna see scenes like
-Boss touching her innapropriatly and asking her to wear more revealing clothes
-Marvin drugging her or giving her a horny pill
-Jake rubbing his dick on her purposfully
Like this game really lacks sexual scenes and we need the Boss MR TANKMAN to destroy that pussy ASSAP.

I hate drugging stories, so hope he keeps that crap out lol. But I guess to each their own