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Maybe put Marvin in the back seat? 
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I just completed the latest update. Here I share my inputs from the episode.
I think the story was better suited for kinetic novel as none of the choices really matters.
It seems to me that only Jake has real deal of fucking Anna and in the midst they might develop emotions for each other. it would be a good arc to have the character breaking a relationship to have something real for once and not turn into slut.
no matter how much Chris teases her, his chances of fucking her seems low as Anna is quite aware of his nature and will never give him the satisfaction. For Anna, Chris will remain an asshole with big dick.
marvin is a low level cretin employed to move story forward. I don’t expect him to do much once Anna loses her inhibitions to Jake.
hank probably would get some exhibitionist moments and at best have her give some stress relief by handjob but again I don’t think Hank can sway Anna to go the slut way.
I feel and since I liked the way Anna’s character is developing (a great job there, Dev) Anna will cheat and in that she might find something meaningful but I don’t see her turning to slut for now.
As for David, if u don’t know how fired up ur wife’s hormones are raging and how much she craves and u don’t provide for your priorities lies elsewhere, you are bound to lose her. I can’t sympathise with him.
I think the story was better suited for kinetic novel as none of the choices really matters.
It seems to me that only Jake has real deal of fucking Anna and in the midst they might develop emotions for each other. it would be a good arc to have the character breaking a relationship to have something real for once and not turn into slut.
no matter how much Chris teases her, his chances of fucking her seems low as Anna is quite aware of his nature and will never give him the satisfaction. For Anna, Chris will remain an asshole with big dick.
marvin is a low level cretin employed to move story forward. I don’t expect him to do much once Anna loses her inhibitions to Jake.
hank probably would get some exhibitionist moments and at best have her give some stress relief by handjob but again I don’t think Hank can sway Anna to go the slut way.
I feel and since I liked the way Anna’s character is developing (a great job there, Dev) Anna will cheat and in that she might find something meaningful but I don’t see her turning to slut for now.
As for David, if u don’t know how fired up ur wife’s hormones are raging and how much she craves and u don’t provide for your priorities lies elsewhere, you are bound to lose her. I can’t sympathise with him.
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After all, it is a kinetic novel Ch1 and Ch2, the choices are important, but you have to read the dialogues carefully and not skip the dialogues
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Hope she's washed her feet, putting them on Jake's nice dash like thatMaybe put Marvin in the back seat?You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
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Chris has been wanting Anna for the longest time. Maybe David will be a nice friend by having an ending where he willingly shares her.
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Maybe some of you are missing something important, all this doesn't cause Anna's hormones, I have David who flitya in the gym, even if not too much, but everything stems from Kendra's plan and her revenge, if it hadn't started from her, the game wouldn't have been born, it's Kendra who ruins David's company with a spy, and it would also be illogical for Anna to become the usual whore, here we only have 2 real dangerous suitors, David's friend and Anna's young colleague, honestly MArvin, Hank etc. they have no chance, if he goes down with MArvin or Henck, even more the game will fall in level.
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You're synopsis is undoubtedly the most realistic, but also the most predictable, and in my opinion, would be the most boring of outcomes. This outcome closely mirrors the story that already exists and can be found on Literotica called "How to ruin a perfect marriage " Again, just my opinion. I am a supporter of Mr. Palmer and would be disappointed if it turns out that I've invested time and money into a story where i already know the ending. No disrespect intended to you.
I'm glad I'm not the only oneI hate this false friend
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Thanks so much ItsNotUs, perfecto artwork, is my new background in Bikini its five star.
Plot twist, her husband is in the backseat with a gag, his hand are cuffed behind his back and he is caged.
Plot twist, her husband is in the backseat with a gag, his hand are cuffed behind his back and he is caged.
VN is Expire
1. Husband's not interested in his Wife, Anna has the right to give herself up to Jack, It's not possible for me to agree with this. I'm against unfaithful no matter what, there can be no justifiable side to this. if you think your husband is cheating on you, you will get a divorce and all the best! Anna
2. I like watch PORN and VN, i like watch cheating scane because this is not real, I put myself in the place of the main character and have fun.
NOTHING TO HIDE - 1981 - John Leslie - A reckless man will do anything but i like his
TOWER OF POWER - 1985 - Angel - Cheating Husband but i like her
3. I don't like Anna because not sincere. i have the impression that I married david just to make other friends jealous. Kendra is already proof of this. Kendra is actually doing Anna favor, paving the way for the life she wants
4. If Mr. Palmer is just only fuck anna with jack, I will be very disappointed because I want to punish that bitch is any way
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Sure with everybody but ChrisChris has been wanting Anna for the longest time. Maybe David will be a nice friend by having an ending where he willingly shares her.
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Poor Chris. I'm still team Chris. Jake can have secondsSure with everybody but Chris
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Well you can rest easy.
From now on Mr_Palmer's excellent game will bear no resemblance to my story, apart from obviously some of the character names.
I too can't wait to see where he goes with this.
All I do know, based on the erotic stories he has written in the past, it will be damned good.
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Is that Mr Strenstronger and in a church?
Maybe at the funerals of Anna's father, as it is a flashback