I m just working on for where we can get more and more scene....and doesnt end as a sad sexless/sex with only loving husband romantic story.
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It's tough since theres really only Alexia, Kendra and Anna. Alexia i just dont like at all. I mean if another new female character comes in. I just might be more into the flirt role for dave.
Actually I think I want to see ana's both submissive and naughty tendencies...as of now whenever the boss/ her uncle want to dominate her, it grew ana's submissiveness points...it's really hard to get Ana's submissive and naughtiness points together ....I like ana naughtiness but I want her to be submissive too so that she can submit easily to marvin chris or Jake flirts etc lol...so last 2 options are confusing.
I think that's the point. I feel like the author wants you to choose which direction you want to guide Anna down. It wouldn't make much sense to me at this point if there was a path where Anna succumbs to every single guy in the story.
I think if ana becomes more submissive, it would be possible she will submit to all the guys who approach her...and by ana naughtiness means she will approach with whoever she feels attracted to..and I want both options lol...but i dont understand why it is kept as different options.
I get it. Its the authors way of locking off paths as you progress further down the story. How many potential suitors does Anna have at this point, like 5 or 6? It wouldn't make much sense to me if you can sleep with all of them in the same path unless Anna goes completely gonzo.
I think the difference between the two will mostly be how the scenes plays out. since just about everyone distributes each kind of point. Also Anna's bate scenes trigger how she feels about the character she's thinking of. which i think that will be a more deciding factor to push things to the next level. and the points will just decide if she'll give in to others needs, or genuinely want them.
time will tell to this theory...
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Great story plot
I been playing the game for a while and just watching to see how the plot developed before commenting on it. And perhaps a few here can provide some insights I may have missed. It may seem surprising, but I am Story/plot first, and naughty last. Plenty of games out there that are the other way around--hence, BORING.
First, I hope the developers monitor this post to get feedback. And on the same hand be able to ignore the nonsense posts that offer poor criticism. Second, that the developers are flexible to adapt future content to continue this successful game.
So... of what I have seen and played, it's a great game. Strong renders and art help a lot because it makes the plots even better. Some will think the last update was weak, but honestly, it's the strongest one. It develops the mind set Anna for future events. And how David reacts is very realistic. The plots and schemes of the villains are plausible. But this latest update puts into motion a lot of moving pieces and possible outcomes.
Having said all that, there are several pitfalls with the plot and storyline. To be honest, if Anna gets involved with her boss, Hank, that whole rout ought to be one of "reluctance" and "submission." The thing about creating a strong moral character like Anna, you can't just flip a switch from upstanding wife to slut without ruining the whole character. Grief and regret from what happen between Anna and her boss should be the main themes in that relationship arc.
The Chris rout seems to be an obvious plotline. But for Anna at some point to give in because first Chris is hung like a horse or is just horny would-be weak plot. However, at some point when Anna is emotional vulnerable and Chris "strikes" at such a moment of weakness then the story keeps its plausibility. Anna knows too well Chris' intentions and her current character wouldn't allow herself to accept Chris. But if Anna is in deep despair and wants a moment to forget her troubles a Chris/Anna moment becomes possible. The best part of that story arc is that Anna swears to herself that it would never happen again, but Chris continues after her because he can't get enough. Eventually Anna out of loneliness, horniness, and anger at David turns toward Chris for relief. More a friends with benefits especially if Anna thinks things will end in divorce with David.
Marvin in this game ought not be the kinky end the game ought to be seeking, but a shocking plot twist. If Anna sees him mostly as harmless and in a key event Marvin surprises Anna and she is stunted, the game keeps its plausibility. Out of surprise Anna lets Marvin make advances on her and Anna finds herself aroused from the kinky situation; you have a Marvin/Anna rout. For Anna it ought to be a shock to herself that she finds it kinky and surprising as close to being a forbidden taboo as she can go.
OK, then there is the pretty boy Jake... it is such a simple rout. A charming good-looking man on the prowl finding a woman in a relationship problem with her husband. Not hard to make that old theme work.
What could add to the story? First a pregnancy scare once things starts happening. Anna and David could have a moment of anger sex, but being estranged in their marriage a possible pregnancy could complicate the story plot. But if Anna has had sex with any of the other men in the story, that adds to the story plots... even better if its several of the men in the game not knowing if she is pregnant for sure or who the father is even more story plot.
I been playing the game for a while and just watching to see how the plot developed before commenting on it. And perhaps a few here can provide some insights I may have missed. It may seem surprising, but I am Story/plot first, and naughty last. Plenty of games out there that are the other way around--hence, BORING.
First, I hope the developers monitor this post to get feedback. And on the same hand be able to ignore the nonsense posts that offer poor criticism. Second, that the developers are flexible to adapt future content to continue this successful game.
So... of what I have seen and played, it's a great game. Strong renders and art help a lot because it makes the plots even better. Some will think the last update was weak, but honestly, it's the strongest one. It develops the mind set Anna for future events. And how David reacts is very realistic. The plots and schemes of the villains are plausible. But this latest update puts into motion a lot of moving pieces and possible outcomes.
Having said all that, there are several pitfalls with the plot and storyline. To be honest, if Anna gets involved with her boss, Hank, that whole rout ought to be one of "reluctance" and "submission." The thing about creating a strong moral character like Anna, you can't just flip a switch from upstanding wife to slut without ruining the whole character. Grief and regret from what happen between Anna and her boss should be the main themes in that relationship arc.
The Chris rout seems to be an obvious plotline. But for Anna at some point to give in because first Chris is hung like a horse or is just horny would-be weak plot. However, at some point when Anna is emotional vulnerable and Chris "strikes" at such a moment of weakness then the story keeps its plausibility. Anna knows too well Chris' intentions and her current character wouldn't allow herself to accept Chris. But if Anna is in deep despair and wants a moment to forget her troubles a Chris/Anna moment becomes possible. The best part of that story arc is that Anna swears to herself that it would never happen again, but Chris continues after her because he can't get enough. Eventually Anna out of loneliness, horniness, and anger at David turns toward Chris for relief. More a friends with benefits especially if Anna thinks things will end in divorce with David.
Marvin in this game ought not be the kinky end the game ought to be seeking, but a shocking plot twist. If Anna sees him mostly as harmless and in a key event Marvin surprises Anna and she is stunted, the game keeps its plausibility. Out of surprise Anna lets Marvin make advances on her and Anna finds herself aroused from the kinky situation; you have a Marvin/Anna rout. For Anna it ought to be a shock to herself that she finds it kinky and surprising as close to being a forbidden taboo as she can go.
OK, then there is the pretty boy Jake... it is such a simple rout. A charming good-looking man on the prowl finding a woman in a relationship problem with her husband. Not hard to make that old theme work.
What could add to the story? First a pregnancy scare once things starts happening. Anna and David could have a moment of anger sex, but being estranged in their marriage a possible pregnancy could complicate the story plot. But if Anna has had sex with any of the other men in the story, that adds to the story plots... even better if its several of the men in the game not knowing if she is pregnant for sure or who the father is even more story plot.
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Good synopsis. All plausible outcomes. You forgot two though, 1) Mr Stenstromber - old family friend, very close to Anna. Like a second father. He lusts after Anna and is already working to rebuild her trust in him. And, he has money that Anna, and more importantly, her family could benefit from. 2) Robinson (neighbor/massage guy). Anna needs a little stress relief, get a massage, and somehow things go too far.
The least interesting outcome for me, other than the faithful route, would be for Anna to end up with Jake. Too predictable and boring for me.
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I haven't forgotten them; just don't see a path forward based on the character Anna.
Anna holds a grudge against Stenstromber. Its more than just personal since it involves Anna's mother. Stenstromber betrayed Anna's mother after her father's death and basically stole her father's estate. Compound on that Anna trusted Stenstromber all her life as he was perhaps thought of as an uncle and in one moment destroyed all that. I don't see Anna's character giving in for money. How would Anna forgive him???
The neighbor, Robinson, that is the weakest character in the game. What does he have to offer? Yes perhaps he's not a well-developed character yet. But it goes back to Anna's character as being upstanding and basically morally mature. Marvin has the best shot at opening a hidden kink Anna might have. The fact Anna has some personality flaws is great, but too many of them just upsets the game.
I don't disagree with you, but in my twisted world I like to consider all outcomes.
Time will tell. Enjoy!
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I see the Stenstromber route as a blackmailing one, for all that has already been stated (basically for money or another thing he knows she can't refuse and he's willing to use).
As for Rob, I don't really know what to expect from his "route".
Btw, I agree completely with your analysis, I believe those are logical assumptions
. Pregnancy is good story material for the dev to work with, for sure.
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What are your thoughts on what will happen when she finds out David is innocent and tries to get him back? Would he even take her back if she's been ran through by one or more of these male orbiters?
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This is my current fav game. Shows how good the writing and scenes are that even with no nudity and only one brief PG rated sex scene (if you choose it), still manages to have some of the sexiest teases I've seen in any game. I've played hundreds of these VNs. Big difference is how well these characters are established and defined with their personalities. Then you see this slow change and corruption happen. Some of the best writing I've seen in a VN. Honestly I could care less about nudity when the writing is so good for the plot scenes and the subtle but hot teasing that is done perfectly. I can understand some people who just want to see Anna nude and be a full blown slut. If they've started playing when it was first released. The Dev knows as soon as he shows that it will lose the appeal for later updates. Who knows how long he wants Chapter 3 to go for and if that will be the final one like he described.
Obviously Anna is top notch for looks and making her a younger new mom with a husband, a high paying job at a law firm, makes her morals seem high and harder to corrupt. So it builds the anticipation of what could happen. It's Anna's mindset I love, she's got high morals but there's a few exceptions. When Chris sends Anna dirty msgs she just brushes them off or tells him hes bad, she's so innocent. She lifts her skirt higher so her boss can look at her legs, because its expected at the office. She has Stenstromber, the old sleazy family friend that she lets hug and kiss her on the lips for years, even cop feels of her ass. She allows it because he's helped her so much in life and Anna thinks that it's harmless, also she feels comfort in his arms. Hopefully Mr_Palmer finds a way to make Stenstromber seem good again in Anna's eyes and not just be a blackmail type of route. Would love to see more of that casualness of letting the old man grope and kiss her, as she feels he deserves to be able to, after everything he's done for her (maybe have David witnessing this, then later them arguing and her justifying it to him. Then Anna remembering a time when Stenstromber took it too far, making out with her and lifting her skirt to grope her ass & more - while she masturbates to the memory).
I actually find Jake the sleaziest of them all, yes even more than Marvin lol. He's got that look about him you just want to punch his face! I'd rather see Anna tease and flirt with the real old men than any type of younger guys, too cliche. Hopefully it doesn't end up like the short story this is based on. Sells the corruption better also by having her with senile old men. Kendra has the perfect look for a bat shit crazy woman! Her expressions really sells her mindset and the corruption angle she tries to force. I think they should have left a surprise reveal that shes orchestrating everything for the start of chapter 2. Can't wait for the next update! Gona have to join the patreon and give back to the Dev for creating something that I actually love.
Obviously Anna is top notch for looks and making her a younger new mom with a husband, a high paying job at a law firm, makes her morals seem high and harder to corrupt. So it builds the anticipation of what could happen. It's Anna's mindset I love, she's got high morals but there's a few exceptions. When Chris sends Anna dirty msgs she just brushes them off or tells him hes bad, she's so innocent. She lifts her skirt higher so her boss can look at her legs, because its expected at the office. She has Stenstromber, the old sleazy family friend that she lets hug and kiss her on the lips for years, even cop feels of her ass. She allows it because he's helped her so much in life and Anna thinks that it's harmless, also she feels comfort in his arms. Hopefully Mr_Palmer finds a way to make Stenstromber seem good again in Anna's eyes and not just be a blackmail type of route. Would love to see more of that casualness of letting the old man grope and kiss her, as she feels he deserves to be able to, after everything he's done for her (maybe have David witnessing this, then later them arguing and her justifying it to him. Then Anna remembering a time when Stenstromber took it too far, making out with her and lifting her skirt to grope her ass & more - while she masturbates to the memory).
I actually find Jake the sleaziest of them all, yes even more than Marvin lol. He's got that look about him you just want to punch his face! I'd rather see Anna tease and flirt with the real old men than any type of younger guys, too cliche. Hopefully it doesn't end up like the short story this is based on. Sells the corruption better also by having her with senile old men. Kendra has the perfect look for a bat shit crazy woman! Her expressions really sells her mindset and the corruption angle she tries to force. I think they should have left a surprise reveal that shes orchestrating everything for the start of chapter 2. Can't wait for the next update! Gona have to join the patreon and give back to the Dev for creating something that I actually love.
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If I'm David, no way. Damaged goods.
It would be interesting to see if David became so dependent that he had to take the "damaged" Anna back despite everything.
In the case of Hank, for example, his company could become financially dependent on him, so that he would have to disapprovingly accept occasional visits from Hank to his marital bed with Anna.
With Marvin, for example, he sees no chance of winning custody of his daughter over Anna and accepts the cuckold because he doesn't want to let his little daughter grow up alone with the old pervert.
I can't think of any bad cuckold endings for Chris and Jake at the moment...
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Who knows when that will happen. David could cheat in the meantime, he did kiss Alexia back in one choice. Im sure Anna will have some fun before finding out anything. Dev will stay true to her character I believe, so at the end of the game either be a single mom or work it out with David because hes the only one she loves. Everyone else is lying to her and will be caught out eventually. Im more interested in Anna's flirty behaviour and being a tease than her having sex with anyone yet. She's only had a handful of minor incidents so far, with nothing that wouldn't be salvageable to continue with David. This seems a far more grounded and realistic game than her turning tricks on a street corner at the end of the story. Although it would be fun to see her eventually show a bit of trashy exhibitionism and not be blackmailed or coerced into doing it. Rather her embrace being a little slutty. Unlikely it would go over the top though.
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Jake “the snake” ain’t looking for love and marriage, just some late night booty calls
Everybody will have their own ideas how they would like the game to end. I'm sure everybody has Anna's best interests at heart [cough, cough]. For me the happy ending would be Anna And David get back together again. BUT only after Anna had been totally corrupted by Marvin and Stenstromber. Plus the icing on the cake would be Chris and Kendra become a couple and get to spend the rest of their lives in squalor and misery. It is the least they deserve, I mean what is not to like?.