VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Look I don’t want this project to drag on for years. I can’t give the option for players to craft Anna how they want her to be, otherwise it’ll take me a year to finish an update writing ten different versions of Anna. If her character is frustrating to witness, I’d advise against playing the game because it’s only going to get worse for you from here on out. There’s a purpose she doesn’t smash Marvin with a baseball bat after he gropes her… because I have no interest in drafting a story where I have to do a separate path to write Marvin out of the story or put him in jail.

Generally speaking, when you look at the main characters approaching Anna, there’s a few different ways it can go. 1) She chooses to explore her repressed urges with the man. 2) She denies him, but he will still pursue her, and she may finally cave reluctantly or maybe against her will. 3) She denies him, but he will still pursue her, however, she doesn’t give in and tries to exact some sort of revenge.

Structuring it this way allows me to tell different stories largely using the same art, and hence, I can progress the story more practically.

Anna has a high tolerance level for these men trying to use her for sexual gratification. Whether that’s because she’s a mentally unstable person or she’s merely sympathetic to horny men, I’ll leave that to the reader to interpret.

She has flaws… there’s no doubt. There are smart, professional women in this world who are flawed too… I know of one personally who enjoys being tied up and abused by strange men while her husband’s away. There’s smart young women with daddy issues that like to be submissive to older men. There’s smart women who stupidly befriend people that take advantage of them despite evidence to the contrary.

Point is - Anna means well, and she has wits, but she’s flawed. I don’t find that unrealistic. Now that her emotions are scrambled, it’s worse… she’s extremely vulnerable.

What would be more unrealistic is crafting an Anna without flaws who would never cheat, but somehow I need to make her cheat in a realistic manner. That would be cool, but I can’t turn a woman into a whore overnight. At least with Anna, there’s many things under the surface that makes her actions plausible, at least in my opinion.

2) She denies him, but he will still pursue her, and she may finally cave reluctantly or maybe against her will. (That sounds like rape to me, probly by Chris)
So will you be adding the rape tag to this game then?

 

[hu lover]

Good game.

 

[mrobviouspsudonym]

2) She denies him, but he will still pursue her, and she may finally cave reluctantly or maybe against her will. (That sounds like rape to me, probly by Chris)
So will you be adding the rape tag to this game then?

Even in the faithful route, nothing in her interactions with Chris has suggested reluctance or unwillingness to be with him: just not wanting to do so while she's technically married. More of an ego protection measure than actual reluctance or aversion. So unless I'm misreading the narrative structure (which Palmer has confirmed I'm not), you can't rape the willing.

 

[Sadowdark]

Even in the faithful route, nothing in her interactions with Chris has suggested reluctance or unwillingness to be with him: just not wanting to do so while she's technically married. More of an ego protection measure than actual reluctance or aversion. So unless I'm misreading the narrative structure (which Palmer has confirmed I'm not), you can't rape the willing.

But we are still at the end of Ch2, so these are still kinetic choices. You will see the consequences of these choices in Ch3.

 

[Mr_Palmer]

Even in the faithful route, nothing in her interactions with Chris has suggested reluctance or unwillingness to be with him: just not wanting to do so while she's technically married. More of an ego protection measure than actual reluctance or aversion. So unless I'm misreading the narrative structure (which Palmer has confirmed I'm not), you can't rape the willing.

The only thing I can confirm is this story isn’t for you. I’m not looking for an award, I’m developing this for myself and the people who enjoy it. Sorry it’s triggered you so hard.

 

[Mr_Palmer]

But we are still at the end of Ch2, so these are still kinetic choices. You will see the consequences of these choices in Ch3.

Correct. So, if you reject Chris, Anna won’t send him a picture in this update. If you reject Marvin, she won’t let him grope her for more than a few seconds. Your choices are already making a difference. Granted, they may not be what you want her to ultimately do, but you can only influence her.

 

[Sadowdark]

Correct. So, if you reject Chris, Anna won’t send him a picture in this update. If you reject Marvin, she won’t let him grope her for more than a few seconds. Your choices are already making a difference. Granted, they may not be what you want her to ultimately do, but you can only influence her.

 

[Davidleene]

Correct. So, if you reject Chris, Anna won’t send him a picture in this update. If you reject Marvin, she won’t let him grope her for more than a few seconds. Your choices are already making a difference. Granted, they may not be what you want her to ultimately do, but you can only influence her.

Sir, what can we expect in the next update?

 

[mrobviouspsudonym]

The only thing I can confirm is this story isn’t for you. I’m not looking for an award, I’m developing this for myself and the people who enjoy it. Sorry it’s triggered you so hard.

That tends to happen to naive people when they take someone at their word and then their actions don't match what they say. But it's not as though you're trying to claim or write that one of the primary pov characters has that exact nature or anything so how could I expect you to know that? XD

 

[Sadowdark]

Sir, what can we expect in the next update?

Anna will return to work in the office

 

[Dom Toretto]

Can I get the link to Mr Palmer discord page please

 

[shavone1]

I've probably lost my marbles as much as anna, but am I asking too much for one scene of:
-hank sucking milk from anna's tit in a baby costume with noticeable milk dripping from the corner of his mouth.
-marvin fisting anna like a jack hammer, but anna is smiling at him sympathetically thinking how pityful he is.
-chris taking a selfie fucking anna from behind while she's breast feeding sophie and cuck david is in the frame.
-david gets head from anna

 

[Ass Fan]

Anna will return to work in the office

Hopefully the Big Tank is already waiting for her for some spanking

 

[Ass Fan]

Can I get the link to Mr Palmer discord page please

As far as I know he doesn't have discord

 

[Dom Toretto]

I've probably lost my marbles as much as anna, but am I asking too much for one scene of:
-hank sucking milk from anna's tit in a baby costume with noticeable milk dripping from the corner of his mouth.
-marvin fisting anna like a jack hammer, but anna is smiling at him sympathetically thinking how pityful he is.
-chris taking a selfie fucking anna from behind while she's breast feeding sophie and cuck david is in the frame.
-david gets head from anna

Wow ummm yes you are asking not only a lot but I may have some issues you need to talk out with someone

 

[luxilfer666]

Correct. So, if you reject Chris, Anna won’t send him a picture in this update. If you reject Marvin, she won’t let him grope her for more than a few seconds. Your choices are already making a difference. Granted, they may not be what you want her to ultimately do, but you can only influence her.

I'll take your word for this, but if her decision/action to the choices which reject some characters is as weak as in this update after the shit fuckers like Stormberger did to her (or whoever she rejected) and she still don't learn her lesson, then this story doesn't even make sense anymore. And by this, I'm assuming there's no more unnecesary flashback, that only adds nothing but her own self-made conflict.

 

[TheUberstuff]

Clearly Anna is a whore/slut whatever you want to call her and once a whore/slut always a whore/slut.

 

[Sadowdark]

Hopefully the Big Tank is already waiting for her for some spanking

 

[Sadowdark]

Clearly Anna is a whore/slut whatever you want to call her and once a whore/slut always a whore/slut.

 

[PanchoPistolas33]

2) She denies him, but he will still pursue her, and she may finally cave reluctantly or maybe against her will. (That sounds like rape to me, probly by Chris)
So will you be adding the rape tag to this game then?

That's a good question, especially with this Kandra-Marvin little talk:

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