VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[TheUberstuff]

kids! this is adult game get out of the game if you don't know how to understand the game! it's a choice game there will always be different scenes depends on what you choose on the early choices! if you just want to play to wank only just watch porn movies! the story is great so far there is no need to hurry to corrupt her and after u play free you will suddenly say that you are disappointed because she is so easy to corrupt.

it's a choice game! A CHOICE GAME! some people saying she is a lawyer so she should have a strong personality.
she is horny without fuck guys. from the way you commenting it is very obvious that you don't have any experience with woman LOL in real life there are attorney who are making a one-night stands at the bar there are even politicians who likes being dominated by man so there is no impossible in this world.

it's a story tough but it really rarely happens guys try to watch news Kido's! profession cannot do anything with corrupted and Horny mind because not been touched by husband! so start fucking your wives now or this story will also be applicable to you if you ever had one... LOL

no hate just saying what I observe of this free user who keep asking for hero but after they played will comment negative and disappointment to an ongoing story.

huh, so only positive dev butt kissing comments allowed? Only people who praise the dear leader dev can participate? You do realize that when people post negative things the dev has 2 choices, get all butthurt like you apparently are or actually read what people are saying and decide if there are some good suggestions or not. Its their game, they will continue it or not depending on how they want to do it but ignoring people or getting butthurt like you are closes them off from getting other people's perspectives.

Have a nice butthurt day.

Oh and you do realize that many devs post their own games on this site not because they expect everyone who gets the game to support them financially but so that many people will play it, say positive things in the forums and encourage other people who have money to spend or don't have a spouse that would freak out if they spent money on porn games.

Try to be a little less "I'm better than you are"

 

[Sadowdark]

If you reject Marvin, that option won't appear.

It should be the other way around, terribly stupid

 

[desertoo]

It should be the other way around, terribly stupid

Just play again with the correct choice. If you refuse marvin that's your fault. So stop being a kid and replay the scene in the correct way to unlock it or don't see the scene as you wish.

 

[Sadowdark]

Just play again with the correct choice. If you refuse marvin that's your fault. So stop being a kid and replay the scene in the correct way to unlock it or don't see the scene as you wish.

Throw away Marvin's old fish - I have no choice, and I should have a choice. I accept the old fish, I have options, where is the logic here?

 

[luxilfer666]

It should be the other way around, terribly stupid

These are how the changing room scene will play out based on choices:
1. If you accept all Marvin's approaches: no option at changing room, Anna consensually let Marvin grope her.
2. If you ignore Marvin's comment about Anna being a milf and feel bad saying no to his lunch date, later deny him: additional option in the changing room. (idk it could play differently if you accept the rest of his approaches later, but the first two interactions are fundamental to get the option)
3. If you reject all his approaches: no option in the changing room, Anna gets mad at him but her reaction rather dissapointing, imo.

 

[RippedKegels]

what is the point of david's purity, communication, and confidence stats? It seems they make no difference?

 

[luxilfer666]

what is the point of david's purity, communication, and confidence stats? It seems they make no difference?

Perhaps this could answer your question.

 

[RippedKegels]

I really don't get these sort of 'corruption' games (i'd argue games like this are more about control than corruption).

Take the banana blowjob masturbation scene for instance. If you choose to have Anna think about Chris, a big part of what makes it hot for her (and the reader!) is that she has a loving husband and she shouldn't be doing that. It's naughty and slutty. She's being a bad girl, and that's great.

But then the whole rest of the game is about making Anna and David hate each other and sabotaging their marriage! Every bit of successfulness in that regard makes events like the banana scene less wrong, less naughty, less slutty. Of course people in a broken relationship will be looking elsewhere. That's normal, not 'wrong' or corrupt.

These things actively work against each other.

There's a lot to like about this game, but the overdone multi-pronged conspiracy and contrived circumstances that it's predicated on, and that undermine the corruption aspect, kind of ruin it for me.

 

[joshuaalcabar]

huh, so only positive dev butt kissing comments allowed? Only people who praise the dear leader dev can participate? You do realize that when people post negative things the dev has 2 choices, get all butthurt like you apparently are or actually read what people are saying and decide if there are some good suggestions or not. Its their game, they will continue it or not depending on how they want to do it but ignoring people or getting butthurt like you are closes them off from getting other people's perspectives.

Have a nice butthurt day.

Oh and you do realize that many devs post their own games on this site not because they expect everyone who gets the game to support them financially but so that many people will play it, say positive things in the forums and encourage other people who have money to spend or don't have a spouse that would freak out if they spent money on porn games.

Try to be a little less "I'm better than you are"

do you understand what I said??? I said kids gets out of the game?? are you a kid??? second, I said if you don't know how to understand that it is a choice game, you can always save the mc and make her smart in your game. do you understand if you don't then stop playing and find a game that will suit in your mentality.

I never said negative comments are not welcome it is for improvement, what im saying is there are lot of people and including you that know that this is a slow corruption game and its very obvious that you don't understand it at all, your negativity is so obvious that you are not following the tread that is why you don't understand the plan of the dev you just played it when someone Trew a free link then play then you will disappointed and leave a message then leave but very obvious that you dont follow the tread at all because if you do you will understand all of the reason why the story is like that..

lot of negative comments are so obvious that they are just playing and leave not even reading or back reading that is why they don't understand the plots! kids will always be kids... LOL

 

[rubyrain]

I'm not as harsh as many of you, I think Mr. Palmer has overall done a good job and I try to appreciate how challenging the creative process is. But this update is hard to swallow. Like many of you have said, Anna's character development feels really uneven and nonsensical. It's one thing for a character to be confused or in denial, but Anna is frustrating because her justification doesn't feel natural. I can't tell if she's actually just oblivious, awful, dumb, or genuinely confused and mixed up. It also bothers me that the plot against David is getting so absurdly out of control, like it's breaking my suspension of disbelief.

But more immediately, I can't believe that we just got an update with virtually no lewd content. After 18+ months, we just got an update where the only scene that was remotely lewd included a butt grab and voyeurism via hidden cam. I actually can't believe that happened. I know it wasn't super long since 0.7.0a, but this update wasn't lacking in story content. And while we all know this game isn't strictly a porn game, I think this update still sorely under-delivered in sexual content. I've supported this game in the past, and I've considered supporting this game again in the future, but after an update like this I don't think I could justify it. This game isn't much fun right now, in fact it's kinda turning into a slog.

I think I feel the same as you do. I admit I'm not a hardcore supporter of Mr Palmer, but I do up my membership on Patreon whenever a release drops just for early access, because I really like the game so far and wanna support a genuinely plot driven cheating/ntr story.

That said I think this is the first time I've felt really disappointed by an APM update. Like you pointed out, the plot is starting to get a little silly. I have an ntr and a faithful playthrough, and the logic in both feels like its breaking down. Just some really glaring events off the top of my head:
1. the idea that Anna is still entertaining Chris and all his bs to keep tabs on David doesn't make sense, especially since David's back to staying in the same house, and it should be really obvious to her that Chris doesn't know shit either.
2. related to that, the reasons for Chris and the other guys not getting immediately exposed is starting to feel really contrived. Like David STILL hasn't just asked Anna who's the guy(s) (or Kendra) who's been reporting all his actions to her?
3. Kendra pulling a gun on Marcel? wtf?
4. Anna excusing all the bs being pulled by the guys is starting to get kinda unbelievable. I was honestly shocked at the lengths Anna was going to to convince herself that she needed to keep ALL of these creeps onside.

I also kinda get where the kinetic novel complaints are coming from. The David in my faithful playthrough did everything right and it didn't seem to make any difference at all in the confrontation with Anna. I thought that this would be one of the first big moments that David's actions would save or sink him, and Anna still shits on him in both routes.

Also about the point that a single rejection shouldn't lock you onto the faithful route - I'm not saying that a single rejection should end the Marvin route, but good grief I think I must've rejected that asshole 10 times already, how is his route still not closed? It's not that I don't want cheating in an ntr game (that'd be stupid) but I'm just not into old guys and their dicks, so how long until we can just shut that route off. Bring Jake back man lol.

 

[Sadowdark]

These are how the changing room scene will play out based on choices:
1. If you accept all Marvin's approaches: no option at changing room, Anna consensually let Marvin grope her.
2. If you ignore Marvin's comment about Anna being a milf and feel bad saying no to his lunch date, later deny him: additional option in the changing room. (idk it could play differently if you accept the rest of his approaches later, but the first two interactions are fundamental to get the option)
3. If you reject all his approaches: no option in the changing room, Anna gets mad at him but her reaction rather dissapointing, imo.

I did so 1. When Marvin talks about Milf Annie, I chose option 3 because she was confused
2.Anna agreed to go to lunch with him, then there is no second attempt, the old fish will not try to invite her to dinner a second time.
3. I rejected all of Marvin's other advances as the game continued
4. In the new update you have the status Anna is not sure about the old fish
5. There is a choice in the locker room, let's not watch this scene with Anna being groped by the old fish, if we choose no, Marvin immediately gets elbowed in the chest by Anna
6. The status changes to Old fish rejected

 

[Jhin00]

This game appeals to everyone. The continuation of the story is up to us. As NTR lovers, I support this game.
THX <3 peace

 

[Whosbeenfappin]

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If you're talking about this option, it would never exist if you continually reject Marvin:
1. Office break room scene: "Anna is uncomfortable"
2. Lunch date invitation: "I have no interest..."
3. Breastfeeding room: "Don't tease him."
4. Lunch date invitation (again): "Reject his invitation."
5. Bar scene (1st attempt): "Deny him."
In the other hand, we immediately get a scene where Marvin spanked her ass, then Anna elbowed and warned him, which in my opinion, the proper Anna's response should've slapped the shit out of him. Right now, I will let it slide as Palmer's excuse of why Anna didn't do that because she has "high tolerance bla bla". But, if we get a similar situation between Marvin and Anna in this particular route option in future updates and Anna's reaction is exactly like what happened in the changing room scene, then I'm convinced that the "naive" traits that Palmer writes on Anna is simply misused. Pity sex (which Palmer explained in his latest comments) with Marvin won't make sense either in this route. The only possible way Marvin could further sexually exploit Anna in this route is through blackmail but it also depends whether Anna is also "naive" enough as a lawyer or not.

Not gonna re-install but my FMC denied all of Marvin's advances,and that scene still came up.

If you reject Marvin, that option won't appear.

I had the same thing happen

 

[I-No]

[...] it should be really obvious to her that Chris doesn't know shit either.

Chris says the things she essentially wants to hear. She feels disgusted and flattered by his attention at the same time. But she's sure she has the situation under control.

[...] STILL hasn't just asked Anna who's the guy(s)

David acts strange but do not forget he actually feels guilty of jeopardizing their marriage. He does not know how to handle such a situation, he doesn't know how to fix it. That guy is somewhat lost.

Kendra pulling a gun on Marcel? wtf?

Kendra is not of a sound mind. That woman is full of toxic jealousy. Don't expect her to act consistently!

Anna excusing all the bs being pulled by the guys is starting to get kinda unbelievable.

I do understand the fact that every male tries to ensnare her, she's a real hottie. And she knows that, getting lots of male attention is no foreign concept to her. So far she was - more or less - able to keep those molesters in check, not least because of her "happy marriage". But now that this marriage is failing, she's more vulnerable to those attacks. Makes sense to me.
And after all it's a porn game and not a social study.

 

[rubyrain]

Chris says the things she essentially wants to hear. She feels disgusted and flattered by his attention at the same time. But she's sure she has the situation under control.

David acts strange but do not forget he actually feels guilty of jeopardizing their marriage. He does not know how to handle such a situation, he doesn't know how to fix it. That guy is somewhat lost.

Kendra is not of a sound mind. That woman is full of toxic jealousy. Don't expect her to act consistently!

I do understand the fact that every male tries to ensnare her, she's a real hottie. And she knows that, getting lots of male attention is no foreign concept to her. So far she was - more or less - able to keep those molesters in check, not least because of her "happy marriage". But now that this marriage is failing, she's more vulnerable to those attacks. Makes sense to me.
And after all it's a porn game and not a social study.

I get that it's a porn game, but it's one of the few ntr games that has a pretty well-thought out and somewhat believable plot. I'm just sad that it feels like its veered into silly territory - I honestly didn't know what to say when Kendra pulled a gun on a stranger in a parking lot and then disappeared like Batman.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I get that it's a porn game, but it's one of the few ntr games that has a pretty well-thought out and somewhat believable plot. I'm just sad that it feels like its veered into silly territory - I honestly didn't know what to say when Kendra pulled a gun on a stranger in a parking lot and then disappeared like Batman.

 

[rosewaterapple]

The update while had very little content in terms of erotica, it was eventful story wise. I find it little weird introducing new characters at this stage don't see how there can be fulfilling conclusion to all their paths given the current pace and short updates.
There are 3 old guys now who are after anna; marvin, hank and stormstoempersoper. Marvin is disgusting as he is, now we are graced with more old people jerking off.
This update seems to have also blocked all the ways for couple to find the truth. As much as I enjoy the other paths there should be a meaningful way for couple to reconcile. Even though anna is dumb slut an alert husband can keep her in line? Idk At the current state I share sentiment with other people in this thread if she is even redeemable or not. It would be interesting to see what logic and events author will establish for this path.

IMO texting is the most intriguing part in the updates so far, since last few updates with all the sexting going on I wish it was bit longer and more things happened. But it is just same things again. Anna did not cross any existing boundaries. But the whole interaction between anna and chris is a consistent corruption route. All other predators are not even close. Would be epic troll if jake who has not shown up recently gets to do the deed while chris who put all the work has to remain holding his dick in hand.

Given the flashback of young anna and the creepy old guy father friend, I think it should put to rest the case of rationalizing anna's behavior. She is a dumb slut who does not think she is one and that's just about it. Whether you call it mentally stunted, lack of emotional development these kind of people do exist, they keep doing things and keep monkey branching away without taking blame and not facing any consequences or blame through out their life.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Would be epic troll if jake who has not shown up recently gets to do the deed while chris who put all the work has to remain holding his dick in hand.

That would be hilarious, but itll never happen.

That'd be like playing a scene in ORS where Ian finds Jeremy relegated to sit in the corner while someone else pounds Louise in their bed - we'll never see it, because authors have their 'preselected' characters; and it certainly seems like Chris is the preselected one here.

 

[akaraby]

compressed ver please

 

[Scotty Doesn't Know]

I really don't get these sort of 'corruption' games (i'd argue games like this are more about control than corruption).

Take the banana blowjob masturbation scene for instance. If you choose to have Anna think about Chris, a big part of what makes it hot for her (and the reader!) is that she has a loving husband and she shouldn't be doing that. It's naughty and slutty. She's being a bad girl, and that's great.

But then the whole rest of the game is about making Anna and David hate each other and sabotaging their marriage! Every bit of successfulness in that regard makes events like the banana scene less wrong, less naughty, less slutty. Of course people in a broken relationship will be looking elsewhere. That's normal, not 'wrong' or corrupt.

These things actively work against each other.

There's a lot to like about this game, but the overdone multi-pronged conspiracy and contrived circumstances that it's predicated on, and that undermine the corruption aspect, kind of ruin it for me.

I see what you're saying about having Anna cheat out of anger or revenge. If that was the only reason then yes it wouldn't be as fun. Thanks to Kendra Anna is embracing her sluttier side. Also sayimg to herself and Kendra that she enjoys teasing. Thats what I like. I don't want her to to act like a slut because of blackmail or revenge. Like to see Anna want to be slutty because it makes her feel good. APM has multiple reasons and motivations to make Anna change into a slut. Which is fine for me.