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:unsure: But old fish Marvin thinks he will blackmail her , otherwise he wouldn't collect compromising materials and then use them against Anne. For now, they are very weak, but he may get better ones in the future:sneaky::devilish:
The best blackmail material for Marvin would be if he gets his hands on footage of Hank and Anna that clearly shows Anna engaging in sexual acts.

The worst thing for Anna would be if everyone in the company saw that she had slept her way up.

Anna's personality and narcissism can't allow that in my opinion
 

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Can we please get the action going, this is getting ridiculous, we know she has hormone problems, from her point of view she has gotten lied to , cheated on, what its gonna take? an asteroid to the head? get on it with it!!!
 

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Can we please get the action going, this is getting ridiculous, we know she has hormone problems, from her point of view she has gotten lied to , cheated on, what its gonna take? an asteroid to the head? get on it with it!!!
Patience Grasshopper. Just think how satisfying it will be if/when she strays? :D
 
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The Marvin/Anna dynamic needs a fix. She needs to be the one dictating. Have her want to be a tease, otherwise it gets to the point where he's the one groping her without her consent (at least initially). Then it falls into a submission route for her if she agrees to go further after he started, which was not whats stated for the in game chart. She needs to be the one teasing him. Like it says in the Stats: Anna either enjoys toying with Marvin or not. So if we have selected the toy with Marvin path, she needs to be the one instigating the action.
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This Marvin and Anna relationship is the most complicated of all the routes. And by complicated, I mean difficult to nail down to have a good story.

"Have her want to be a tease, otherwise it gets to the point where he's the one groping her without her consent (at least initially)." Yes, as I said a bank robber doesn't ask the bank if he can rob it. But it comes down to two things about Anna's thinking and character build. I suggested Anna see Marvin as being harmless old "flirt," with puppy love and Anna humors him with teasing thus, allowing Marvin to get in close. Well Marvin already crossed the Rubicon and Anna is on to him based on this latest release. However, Anna's main character issue is being naive and trusting. Second is Anna's inexperience in life. Her whole world is upside down and under great pressures from work and life.

Things that affect Anna is her past. First an overbearing father demanding perfection from Anna. Her father dominated her forcing her into being submissive to gain his approval. She lived more in fear of her father's disapproval then having a loving relationship. So overwhelmed, Anna turned toward Grant for emotional support and trusted him.

"Then it falls into a submission route ..." The only one Anna, "She needs to be the one dictating" is David. But Anna is already submissive by nature-- it was how she was brought up. David is different because Anna trusts him and he isn't controlling and dominating, meaning David is "safe." With Marvin there is a possible trap of Anna's own making waiting for her. The trap is first letting Marvin get too close to her and the second how her body reacts favorably to Marvin as if it's a form of punishment for being a naughty girl.


To correct the Marvin/Anna path, the story needs a more treacherous and devious Marvin. By now Marvin knows what Kendra is up too and can't really trust Kendra. Marvin sees what's going on in the office and it wouldn't take long before Marvin sees how she is trying to maneuver Jake to be the one to get Anna. With that in mind Marvin is just as likely to get dirt on Kendra (hidden cameras, installing spyware on her work computer, following her and taking pictures...etc.) Also, Marvin would seek to eliminate Jake as a rival. Perhaps get information on Jake to give to Hank. From a game designing point of view certain actions Marvin takes could trigger events. It's also a good device the developer can use for players to save the marriage when all the villains are tripping over themselves to undermine Anna.

lastly, ever notice in the story Anna doesn't have any real friends? Normally the bridesmaid in their wedding is the best friend. Anna doesn't and has clung on to Kendra to be that friend. Going back to Anna's you with a dominating father such close friends are hard to have. Now Anna has a friend and is trying to win Kendra's approval, even though what Anna is doing goes against her better nature.
 
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This Marvin and Anna relationship is the most complicated of all the routes. And by complicated, I mean difficult to nail down to have a good story.

"Have her want to be a tease, otherwise it gets to the point where he's the one groping her without her consent (at least initially)." Yes, as I said a bank robber doesn't ask the bank if he can rob it. But it comes down to two things about Anna's thinking and character build. I suggested Anna see Marvin as being harmless old "flirt," with puppy love and Anna humors him with teasing thus, allowing Marvin to get in close. Well Marvin already crossed the Rubicon and Anna is on to him based on this latest release. However, Anna's main character issue is being naive and trusting. Second is Anna's inexperience in life. Her whole world is upside down and under great pressures from work and life.

Things that affect Anna is her past. First an overbearing father demanding perfection from Anna. Her father dominated her forcing her into being submissive to gain his approval. She lived more in fear of her father's disapproval then having a loving relationship. So overwhelmed, Anna turned toward Grant for emotional support and trusted him.

"Then it falls into a submission route ..." The only one Anna, "She needs to be the one dictating" is David. But Anna is already submissive by nature-- it was how she was brought up. David is different because Anna trusts him and he isn't controlling and dominating, meaning David is "safe." With Marvin there is a possible trap of Anna's own making waiting for her. The trap is first letting Marvin get too close to her and the second how her body reacts favorably to Marvin as if it's a form of punishment for being a naughty girl.


To correct the Marvin/Anna path, the story needs a more treacherous and devious Marvin. By now Marvin knows what Kendra is up too and can't really trust Kendra. Marvin sees what's going on in the office and it wouldn't take long before Marvin sees how she is trying to maneuver Jake to be the one to get Anna. With that in mind Marvin is just as likely to get dirt on Kendra (hidden cameras, installing spyware on her work computer, following her and taking pictures...etc.) Also, Marvin would seek to eliminate Jake as a rival. Perhaps get information on Jake to give to Hank. From a game designing point of view certain actions Marvin takes could trigger events. It's also a good device the developer can use for players to save the marriage when all the villains are tripping over themselves to undermine Anna.

lastly, ever notice in the story Anna doesn't have any real friends? Normally the bridesmaid in their wedding is the best friend. Anna doesn't and has clung on to Kendra to be that friend. Going back to Anna's you with a dominating father such close friends are hard to have. Now Anna has a friend and is trying to win Kendra's approval, even though what Anna is doing goes against her better nature.
There is also Kendra in Anna's ear making her want to do naughty things. So eventually we will see Anna want to be more daring and be the one who starts off as the instigator. Whether thats with Marvin or others who knows. Marvin may become more devious, or he could just be a tool in the game for Anna to gain more confidence teasing men. Hes only done very small things so far. You seem to think he's on a blackmail route in the future, I'm not so sure... Maybe.
Yes I've said that previously about Anna having no female friends. Its what Mr Palmer has orchestrated so she will only have Kendra to rely on & guide her.
 
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There is also Kendra in Anna's ear making her want to do naughty things. So eventually we will see Anna want to be more daring and be the one who starts off as the instigator. Whether thats with Marvin or others who knows. Marvin may become more devious, or he could just be a tool in the game for Anna to gain more confidence teasing men. Hes only done very small things so far. You seem to think he's on a blackmail route in the future, I'm not so sure... Maybe.
Yes I've said that previously about Anna having no female friends. Its what Mr Palmer has orchestrated so she will only have Kendra to rely on & guide her.
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Actually, I am thinking Marvin will continue to try to get away with as much as he can with Anna.

What I am suggesting is Marvin to become more devious with everyone around him. I can't see a way Marvin can get any blackmail on Anna. Likely Marvin doesn't want to risk upsetting Anna trying to blackmail her. But he certainly can with Kendra. Kendra's mistake was taking Marvin into her plans against Anna because it tips her hand. And it's that information Marvin has about Kendra that might motivate Marvin to "get an insurance policy" against Kendra.

Already Marvin and Jake are at odds. But Jake is a pretty boy and likely Marvin has been hearing rumors about him and may even see Jake's efforts to woo Anna. So Marvin has motivation to deal with Jake.

Now likely coming into the story are more attacks on Anna. Kendra isn't just going to try and destroy Anna with her relationship. Kendra from the beginning though that she deserved to have Anna's job. So I suspect Kendra will secretly try and sabotage a project Anna is working on. And here Marvin can play the ends against the middle and save Anna getting him into her good graces.

Right now Marvin is too simple a character and has the hardest uphill climb to get Anna and he knows it. The best plan for Marvin to make sure he is in first position with Anna. The only real problem Marvin isn't aware of is Chris-- unless the developer introduces Chris and Marvin. Considering Marvin is a lowlife, its likely he might have other lowlife friends that may help him.
 
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Actually, I am thinking Marvin will continue to try to get away with as much as he can with Anna.

What I am suggesting is Marvin to become more devious with everyone around him. I can't see a way Marvin can get any blackmail on Anna. Likely Marvin doesn't want to risk upsetting Anna trying to blackmail her. But he certainly can with Kendra. Kendra's mistake was taking Marvin into her plans against Anna because it tips her hand. And it's that information Marvin has about Kendra that might motivate Marvin to "get an insurance policy" against Kendra.

Already Marvin and Jake are at odds. But Jake is a pretty boy and likely Marvin has been hearing rumors about him and may even see Jake's efforts to woo Anna. So Marvin has motivation to deal with Jake.

Now likely coming into the story are more attacks on Anna. Kendra isn't just going to try and destroy Anna with her relationship. Kendra from the beginning though that she deserved to have Anna's job. So I suspect Kendra will secretly try and sabotage a project Anna is working on. And here Marvin can play the ends against the middle and save Anna getting him into her good graces.

Right now Marvin is too simple a character and has the hardest uphill climb to get Anna and he knows it. The best plan for Marvin to make sure he is in first position with Anna. The only real problem Marvin isn't aware of is Chris-- unless the developer introduces Chris and Marvin. Considering Marvin is a lowlife, its likely he might have other lowlife friends that may help him.
You may be right. All of Davids so called friends are being cagey with each other and trying to get the upper hand, to get to Anna. So all the people in her workplace might do the same. Kendra tricked Anna to pair with Jake for the case, so I assumed she was already trying to sabotage that project, aswell as get Jake to seduce her. The only problem is whether Mr Palmer will have enough time to have all these little plot elements, along with the main story. Its a lot of renders and dialogue to do that, where it can be given to more popular scenes instead. Could be a bit of a compromise and only include limited info on that.
 
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An observation! Part three should we forget!? I think it has been forgotten! The game continues at the same Slow Burn Rate! At the beginning we understood that things would happen Warmer! But probably some people here like to wait another three to five years!
 
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An observation! Part three should we forget!? I think it has been forgotten! The game continues at the same Slow Burn Rate! At the beginning we understood that things would happen Warmer! But probably some people here like to wait another three to five years!
if you don't like to wait there are hundreds of game where the MC have sex in the first episode..... learn to appreciate
 

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if you don't like to wait there are hundreds of game where the MC have sex in the first episode..... learn to appreciate
I didn't say about the first episode! It joins that the game is porn! If not let the creator inform us to go somewhere else! After a normal interval the action must begin! I made a simple democratic observation, don't get angry! He is one of the first to support this game!
 

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The words about the harmless old man are not Anna's words, but the ones Kendra repeated to her during every break after work. And it stuck in Anna's head, and she repeats it as programmed. Marvin will blackmail Anna, because why would he take hidden photos of her and record compromising materials to use them at the right time, maybe one day he will get better ones so he can use them against Anna, because why not and he won't, he won't get tired, technology will this is for him. ? Of course, under the pretext that he is collecting them for Kendra, who will help him get Ania. And if Kendra doesn't need him, she'll send him to prison, there's even this dialogue in the game. Next, I don't know if you know, but Jake and old fisherman Marvin are buddies from when Jake was an intern and part of a secret group that old fisherman Marvin still belongs to, where they would scroll through women's social media, looking for pictures to jerk off to. and exchanged with other forum members. The old fish says that Jake was a member of this forum, he asks to take photos of Annie as part of an old friendship, but Jake refuses because he doesn't want to get in trouble. Because as far as I know, he was fired from his previous company for seducing his boss's daughter. They will rather compete with each other, although they have already cooperated on this forum. Kendra is unlikely to sabotage Anna's work if Jake is around, but she won't sabotage his work. Anna's work is already being sabotaged by an intern working for Pigwin at the company.
 
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The words about the harmless old man are not Anna's words, but the ones Kendra repeated to her during every break after work. And it stuck in Anna's head, and she repeats it as programmed. Marvin will blackmail Anna, because why would he take hidden photos of her and record compromising materials to use them at the right time, maybe one day he will get better ones so he can use them against Anna, because why not and he won't, he won't get tired, technology will this is for him. ? Of course, under the pretext that he is collecting them for Kendra, who will help him get Ania. And if Kendra doesn't need him, she'll send him to prison, there's even this dialogue in the game. Next, I don't know if you know, but Jake and old fisherman Marvin are buddies from when Jake was an intern and part of a secret group that old fisherman Marvin still belongs to, where they would scroll through women's social media, looking for pictures to jerk off to. and exchanged with other forum members. The old fish says that Jake was a member of this forum, he asks to take photos of Annie as part of an old friendship, but Jake refuses because he doesn't want to get in trouble. Because as far as I know, he was fired from his previous company for seducing his boss's daughter. They will rather compete with each other, although they have already cooperated on this forum. Kendra is unlikely to sabotage Anna's work if Jake is around, but she won't sabotage his work. Anna's work is already being sabotaged by an intern working for Pigwin at the company.
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The words about the harmless old man are not Anna's words, but the ones Kendra repeated to her during every break after work. And it stuck in Anna's head, and she repeats it as programmed.
**Yes, Kendra attempts to off foot Anna about Marvin; mainly now because Kendra thinks Marvin as an ally in her plans. Kendra had no liking for Marvin in the beginning and likely still doesn't think Marvin has any real chance with Anna. However, getting Marvin to "bug" Anna's private spaces was a plus for Kendra. And even Kendra has to admit that there is an off-chance Marvin might get her.
Marvin will blackmail Anna, because why would he take hidden photos of her and record compromising materials to use them at the right time, maybe one day he will get better ones so he can use them against Anna, because why not and he won't, he won't get tired, technology will this is for him. ?
I don't think so. Most definitely Marvin would perv from any decent photos and recordings for his own kicks. The problem with using naughty pictures and videos to blackmail someone is that it might not work. But look at Marvin from his point of view and from his character's build set; does he just want one go at Anna or to do as he pleases when he pleases? I suspect Marvin has two motivations. First is his lust for Anna, but second, some inner demon to "molest" and corrupt Anna feeds his perverse side. If Marvin just wanted a pretty girl, he could hire a prostitute to slick his lust. It's because Anna is who Anna is, sweet and innocent, that is the appeal for Marvin.
Of course, under the pretext that he is collecting them for Kendra, who will help him get Anna. And if Kendra doesn't need him, she'll send him to prison, there's even this dialogue in the game.
Marvin has been around the block a time or two, and he knows to get into that kind of trouble is to have evidence. Certainly, Marvin will try to get all the help he can from Kendra. And it's that kind of behavior from Kendra, that might make Marvin double cross Kendra. Let's say Marvin has Anna on the line and has all the goods on Anna... what is Marvin's motivations to hand over the goods to Kendra and lose his prize catch?
Next, I don't know if you know, but Jake and old fisherman Marvin are buddies from when Jake was an intern and part of a secret group that old fisherman Marvin still belongs to, where they would scroll through women's social media, looking for pictures to jerk off to, and exchanged with other forum members.
Again, look at things from Marvin's point of view. Jake is young and handsome, and Marvin isn't that far from a dirt nap and dried-up old fossil. If you're Marvin, out of a sense of friendship, would you allow if you can help it Jake to get Anna when Anna checks all your boxes? It is simple math for Marvin-- if Jake gets her, from Marvin's point of view, would Marvin get a shot at Anna with Jake tapping her? Or, if Jake and Anna hookup in a relationship, Anna would be too far beyond Marvin's reach. Fun fact, even the very best of friends would cock-block each other if both have their sights set on the same girl.
The old fish says that Jake was a member of this forum, he asks to take photos of Annie as part of an old friendship, but Jake refuses because he doesn't want to get in trouble. Because as far as I know, he was fired from his previous company for seducing his boss's daughter.
To protect his job, of course Jake would have no part in that scheme. HR can be a bitch about that sort of thing--lol!
They will rather compete with each other, although they have already cooperated on this forum. Kendra is unlikely to sabotage Anna's work if Jake is around, but she won't sabotage his work. Anna's work is already being sabotaged by an intern working for Pigwin at the company.
Actually, Kendra sabotaging the project is right up Kendra's wheelhouse. What is it Jake stands to gain is money to pay off a car. But what if Kendra thinks Jake isn't trying hard enough to seduce Anna? So far there is only "carrot" behind Kendra's plan to get Jake to seduce Anna-- "stick" could be Kendra arranging matters that could destroy the project and getting Jake fired. I like that plot point that the developer can make a situation where Jake makes a bold move giving the player options to choice.
 
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