VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

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redoubt27

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Sadowdark said:
This creator has a different definition of NTR. He doesn't think sending photos in unsexy lingerie is cheating, nor does NTR
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Well, it’s cheating, soooo...:ROFLMAO:
And Anna’s pretty sure it’s cheating. Why she’s not so keen to have David find out, even in part 1.
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Sooo, the creator also had a pretty good idea it was cheating, too.
Any rationalizations after that is pure bull…:poop:
 
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redoubt27 said:
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Well, it’s cheating, soooo...:ROFLMAO:
And Anna’s pretty sure it’s cheating. Why she’s not so keen to have David find out, even in part 1. Sooo, the creator also had a pretty good idea it was cheating, too.
Any rationalizations after that is pure bull…:poop:
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Sorry, I was wrong. However, the creator said that sending photos is not cheating for him.


Question from a user As Mr_Palmer said that many things would happen in the course of the game I think in the second part when we finally manage to control Anna we can change the paths she followed with Chris and some things from her point of view remembering that we are still controlling David for now.

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Yes and no... you won't be able to change the events you see in Part 1. But you can have a say in how Anna responds to the events. Maybe she feels terrible about sending pics to Chris? Maybe it gave her a thrill? How you'd like her to react will be an indicator of how the story unfolds in Part 3.
 
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Sadowdark said:
Sorry, I was wrong. However, the creator said that sending photos is not cheating for him.
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I don't doubt it was said.
I just think the creator is full of :poop: when saying it...:ROFLMAO:
Anna's message is clear.
If you write that, and then say it's not cheating, you're lying to yourself...:ROFLMAO:
Or, maybe trying to avoid admitting you made a mistake in the story...:ROFLMAO:
 
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GayLord Jesus said:
:love: Here our Anna needs her days explored properly, to add some events in her day to day life, including her friends, neighbors, grocery, shopping, babysitter etc.
Stretch out the timed events from early morning routine to morning at home with baby / babysitter, from day to noon at work, from afternoon to daybreak with colleagues / boss, spending evenings at dates or seduction / corruption events, reserve nights for sex chat or fetishes.(y)

I don't understand why these corruption VN hotwife plot swings only drastically? either have a no-go attitude for being corrupted or turn into absolute sluts spreading, riding, rocking and humping all the time. o_O

Is it so difficult to expect a tease, a grope, occasional sneak peek or gradual corruption / flirting scenes, without immediately getting blue balled, cock blocked, 180° shift in the mood. :censored:

Most of such VN keep holding off to H-scenes (pretending a slow burn plot) without much plot progress, then get stuck with (Lust and Passion / Stoper) or become an unreasonable fuck fest for whorish behavior. :unsure:
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As I've said before, almost nobody could create a proper corruption game / VN. They either overdo it or keep withholding in denial.

Dev for this game, give Anna some events instead of trying to deny corruption.
Most people are attracted to Anna, craving for continuous content with Anna. Thus creating timely events in various forms gives time for a wife / hotwife corruption to take hold gradually and balancing out content without blue balls or denial. (y)

Also, get rid of POV systems (husband + wife etc.), writing a cohesive and coherent story. Also, David's POV sucks, it's full of stupidity and ED, also failing both as a husband and selecting friends. :ROFLMAO:
 
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next update look exciting
but look all pic teas in one place
first see surprise vist
then chris stand fell her help in kitchen
then she msg in bed
its all about dinner night
is this update come to dinner only
will be short update if only this part....not sure if msg in bed be last sence then end with tbc
is there other than what we see like marvin or jack ?
hoop 3 month wait worth
 
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sslovoe said:
next update look exciting
but look all pic teas in one place
first see surprise vist
then chris stand fell her help in kitchen
then she msg in bed
its all about dinner night
is this update come to dinner only
will be short update if only this part....not sure if msg in bed be last sence then end with tbc
is there other than what we see like marvin or jack ?
hoop 3 month wait worth
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The surprise won't be Chris because he'll be coming later for dinner, why would he come earlier if he already told them he was coming? It will be a fake rehab Rob Kobra because it fits perfectly. When Anna opens the door, she is shocked by who she sees. Would she act like it was Chris? She wouldn't be indifferent. (And Chris showed up, aha.) If Chris is at the door, it will be terribly predictable and I don't like being surprised. The creator said there will be a lot of David in this update. Perhaps Pigwin will discuss his upcoming business trip with Anna. Kendra will be there too, the old fish won't be there. I don't remember if the old fox will be there. Maybe Anna talks to Jake in bed when he's David, about work or (when they go to the store to advise Jake on how to buy sexy lingerie for Jake's girlfriend? So if she texts Chris it will be terribly boring and predictable .
 
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alyssssssssss said:
Ridiculous, if your wife cheats on you it's her choice and has legal consequences, but with your friend, who you've known forever, to whom you've told all your secrets, you can't help but hate him or kill him for cheating on you, perhaps in your in life there is no word respect, without respect and rules, we are just animals, and when two people have sex behind your back, both are 50% to blame towards you.
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Every game that involves betrayal has an internal confrontation as a setting. The authors already know that this causes controversy. In this case, the blame for the betrayal lies primarily with Anna. Before David even did anything, Anna was already slowly giving in to the temptation of her husband's best friend. After all, it's not normal for a married wife with a child to be talking on the cell phone with her husband's best friend while he sleeps. This already raises suspicions. Anna is both the protagonist and the villain of this game.

While this situation is exciting for us readers it is very sad if analyzed from David's perspective. David, if he cheats on his wife, it will be with anyone. Now Anna is cheating on her husband with his best friend, which is very sad and exciting. Two opposing feelings present in the game
 
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arimfan said:
there are a ton of games on f95 where there is a fast build up, or sex/nudity really early on

i really enjoy those super slow games, please don't demoralize the dev
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there are tons of super slow game on F95 too...i enjoy fast game. It's on developer to develop whatever he wants
Please dont argue against criticism...it is not meant for you. His criticism is towards the game.
The developer has mentioned there will be no action until part 2. Action will start from part 3. So, if there will be no action from next update, those who waited for action, they will demand for sex scene. So it doesn't matter on how we want, it'll be on what the developer said earlier.
 
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