I’m not a fan of when VN’s try to tell two stories in one about the male MC and the female MC. That’s not what’s happening here. The whole point to showing David’s POV first is to add a mystery Ntr element to the story, where the reader can step into David’s shoes and experience his frustration of not having much control of the situation.
It’s not the easiest thing to pull off, and it’s not going to please people who want to control David’s life, but I hope it can bring out emotions in the reader to experience what it’d be like to have a happy marriage with a woman you love, only to see forces conspire against you that pulls your wife away into the arms of men chasing her behind your back.
Of course, the main dish is watching the wife fall into sexual deprivation and unlocking her inner dark side, but I want to give a taste of what that’d be like in David’s shoes, and there is at least one path where he can get some satisfaction out of the unfortunate events if you want things to ultimately work out for him.